*MERE Humsafar*A mehrya story pt 10+epilogue on pg 22 01/7/18

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''HUMSAfAR''


Dance moves to the loud music and nicely decorated ghodhi(Mare)is all set for the groom.After performing almost every dance move the enthusiatic baaratise finally stop before one of the top most famous hotel of delhi.

tu khush hai naa??(you are happy,right??)asked an emotional mother to the groom.

ANYTHING FOR YOU MAA?he replies with a broad smile.

you look very handsome son.-the father of the groom compliment him.

I knw dad,he said with a chuckle still,thanku.

chalo,let's go our daughter in law is waiting for us.both tthe parent looks supremily excited with the marriage of their only son.

on the entrance of venue,a big filmsy wedding poster is there.

'' shaurya weds mehak''.

shaurya give the poster a look n then he enters the venue where he is grandly welcomed by his father in law and other relatives.

Wedding rituals starts and after a while bride came.She is indeed beautiful,shaurya thought.he never met her just once saw her photo n one phone that too in front of his parents,nothing much than that.she does not adorn alot of makeup but still she look etheral in her simplicity,maybe his parents are right.

Mehak,the bride, remain quite throughout the ritual,even during the time shaurya fills her maang with vermillion and adorn her with mangalsutra,that would be the most precious time for any other girl but he does not find any excitement and joy in her eyes.May be she is missing her mother,her mother is no more he know that,his mother once told him before marriage,so his mother is more willing for this marriage as they are having a daughter now and they can give her the lost love and care she deserves.

During the Bidaai ceremony he only say a flicker of emotion in her eyes but still she held herself strong before his father.as if she don't want to show her weakness.

After a tiring journey of one long hour,they finally reach Shaurya's house.the newly weds are grandly welcomed by karuna,the mother of groom.
welcome to the family-yash the father of the groom said to the new edition of their family,their daughter in law mehak.

After few more rituals,both of them are asked to take rest in shaurya's room. mehak lead ahead and due to a phone call shaurya stay behind.

After nearly 20 minutes,when he enters the room he feels some new some different emotion,he feel nervous and excited at the same time.
he say mehak was sitting on the adjacent couch near the decorated wedding bed.she look more calm and composed. shaurya wondered how fast could be such chance of mode happen.he brushes off his thoughts and went ahead.

Hello Mr.New husband,mehak said as he nears her.

sorry,shaurya thought he hears something wrong.

i have a gift for you,wait i'll show it to you,she get up and came back with a documented file.

shaurya wondered what could be this gift?
she handover him the file and ask him to open it up.

he opens the file and was shocked is merely an understatement,he remain rooted to his position for few minutes as to absorb the supposed wedding gift from his wife.

Mehak...,he saw intently in her eyes and exclaimed...''DIVORCE PAPERS''.


INDEX

Part 1- Above
Part 10+epilogue pg 22😳
Happy reading😃

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Omg what a pleasant shock it is 😉
In the starting it was so pleasant , everything going perfect and pleasant but the end is shocking ...with divorce papers 😕
What happen to them 😕
Will.you continue this OS😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Omg Mishu...new OS
Res 😉
Unres.

First of all change your header Mishu...seriously this can't be an OS... 😉
Congratulations for your new story dear..
Loved the excited groom Shaurie...
Something was fishy..starting from their wedding rituals...may be she is not ready for this marriage..
Oh god...sirf Shaurya ko hi nahi...humein bhi laga...440v ka jhatka...DIVORCE PAPERS... 😲
Can't hold my excitement Mishu..
Waiting eagerly for next part...
Plz update soon...
Well..I won't mind joining the panda group 😆
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Shaadi wala din hi divorce ? yeh Kaisa twist hai bey ?...😲
But the feels right from the start of the story was great ...
Felt Shaurya was also agreeing for the marriage becoz of sum reason ...
Hmm let see why did Mehak gave sucha shock to her husband on Thier first night 😳😆
Good job Mish...you panda leader is officially is back to the updates 😉...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Misthu, congratulations on your new story.
Things seem to flow smoothly with all the celebrations and no negativity at the start. Not a single
soul against the marriage and neither the marriage seems to be forced except for the bride who
doesn't seem to be happy. Was she made to agree for the marriage at a gun point ?😛😆 She
could have said no if she wasn't interested instead of serving Divorce papers to her groom on
a wedding night.😃😉 She seems to be all prepared for the divorce well before marriage and
gifted them to her Mr New Husband. May be she is under the misconception that Shaurya was
forced for the marriage as they never met before.

Mishtu, you better give the next update fast here on this thread else this will be filled with
art work.😛🤣

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Omg... wat a twist at the end. Pls continue soon dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Divorce 🤣
I object 🤪

This can't be OS ..when is the next chapter coming Mishi. .

We want to know what made mahek give him divorce and what will Shaurya do to stop this ..😛
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congrats Mish on your new story. ..🤗
it's a good part but at last what that bloody divorce papers she handing him at their first night

please update soon buddy..
Want to know what her motive is
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😲😲 mishti ye kya tha...shaadi wala scene padke mere maan me laddo phuta tha ke shayed age kuch romantic hoga par tumne mera laddu chin liya divorce wali scene dalkar..😆😆... it can't be os...hum isko os hone nehi denge...happy romantic ending chahiye...aab happy ending deneke liye tum chahe isse ts banao ..ss banao or ff banao😃
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow what a surprise Misti baby muaah😛
Chat Shaadi Pat divorce🤣
Kya bath hi badi tej nikli mehak haha
I think she is hiding something from him 😃
Lovely start
Next part kab oh ya Kal milega hi na 😳

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