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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Interesting update!

Happy that Suraj isn't angry with Chakor.

Liked how you presented their contrasting thoughts.

It's heart warming how Chakor became attached to Aryan.

Chakor was shocked when Suraj asked her to eat with him but not as much as at his next question.

Marriage proposal came as a complete shock, will she accept?

I hope if she says yes, he'll tell her how they're connected.

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Awesome and so Interesting Chapter

Both Chakor and Suraj family was killed by Chakor's uncle yet their families were such great and lovely people indeed Chakor's uncle deserves punishment

so Suraj has been Chakor's parents choice thats awesome

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Loved how you depicted sukor's disturbed mind set👏
The last part was shocking😲
Suraj asked for marriage directly, waiting to know Chakor's reaction
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you find it interesting!

Happy that it was shocking and not normal Hehehe

Will update soon! U will for sure get to see Chakor's reactions!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Shar456
Maithu this update was interesting especially Suraj question about marriage n eagerly waiting for the next update
Maithu please make next update long as its becoming interesting😆

Thank you so much dear!

Happy you liked this part!

Well I can't make it longer as this is a part of it! LOL

See you soon with the update!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu in just one line
That was beautiful.. I really wanted him to ask.. You read my mind... Both have gone through enough

Loving it

Thank you so much dear!

Hehehe I feel happy that I could make it as you thought LOL

Glad you love this part!

Thank you once again! ;-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Interesting update!
Happy that Suraj isn't angry with Chakor.
Liked how you presented their contrasting thoughts.
It's heart warming how Chakor became attached to Aryan.
Chakor was shocked when Suraj asked her to eat with him but not as much as at his next question.
Marriage proposal came as a complete shock, will she accept?
I hope if she says yes, he'll tell her how they're connected.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank you so much dear!

Me too yaar! Happy that he is not angry!

Glad you liked their thoughts!

I think even I would be shocked if something like this happens! LOL

Well let's wait and see!

See you soon with the next part!

Thank you once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: taahir004
Awesome and so Interesting Chapter

Both Chakor and Suraj family was killed by Chakor's uncle yet their families were such great and lovely people indeed Chakor's uncle deserves punishment
so Suraj has been Chakor's parents choice thats awesome

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you liked it!

Hope you like the upcoming parts!

Keep on reading!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Hello!

Here is the 2nd part as promised here!
Link to the previous part: Part 8A

Happy reading!

*****

Part 8B

*** Did I heard it clearly? ***

- Did I ask something wrong? -

Looking at him with her big orbs, she realized that she doesn't hate him but respect him.

*** How can he ask this?
Is he pitying me?
Is he doing this for some other reasons?
What if I don't accept?
Will he ask me to get out of here?
Ayan? ***

- Why thinking so much?
Is she feeling I'm asking this for profit?
Is she thinking I doing this for her belongings?
What if she doesn't accept?
Will she stay here now or will go out of here?
And Ayan? -

"Take two days' time! We will talk then!" he said feeling she needed time.

*** Two days?
Will it be enough?
He didn't say why and what made him ask me for marriage!
Should I ask? ***

"But!"
"Where is Ayan?"
Hearing Ayan, her concentration went from his proposal to his question "In room sleeping!"
"I will take him with me tonight!"

*** Is he showing me what will happen if I don't accept? ***

- She will be free to think about the marriage now! -

"He might wake up in the middle of the night." she said as he got up.
Smiling at her "I can take care of him for tonight!"

*** He is for sure taking care to make me feel the loneliness again without Ayan.
What is the need to take him away from me?
He needs to understand! ***

Getting up from her place "He is already sleeping!"
"Don't worry!" and he left from there without glancing at her.

*** He is so stubborn! ***

- Hope she says yes so I can get hands on those bas***ds! -

Tossing and turning on her bed, she felt void without Ayan, her only companion since months by her side.

"Why does he need to take Ayan?" getting up and sitting.
Taking the water bottle from her side table "I thought him to be a good person but now, I feel like seeing someone else! Not even giving me a reason! I'm sure, he is not proposing me out of love! What else can it be? If only I was the old Chakor, he would have been dead by now!" taking a sip "Poor Ayan! He has got a papa like him!" putting back the bottle. And getting back under the quilt "What are the consequences I will face if I say no?"

He on the other side, went to think on of the consequences of his question.
- She might want to get out of the house! -

"He might ask me to get out!"

- She might call me all bad words! -

"He might think I'm head weighted!"

- She might not consider Ayan! -

"He might not think about Ayan!"

Turning on her left "What can be the consequences if I accept?"

- I will have one more person to take care of! -

"He might feel I accepted for his money!"

- She will be helpful for my plan! -

"He will even not consider about my family!"

Turning on her right.

"What can be the reason he is asking?"

- To give you what you deserve and fulfil our parents' wish! -

"I can't see anything! Why can't he tell with words?"

- Hope she agrees! -

And he drifted to sleep while she tried all her best to sleep until tiredness overtook her.

And the events of the next day, made her feel more and more uncomfortable around him.

In the morning when he wanted to take Ayan from her, his hand accidently touched her hand, making her feel things she haven't felt before. Even not when it happened previously.

In evening, when he asked her to let Ayan with him, Ayan made the effort to go with his "Maaa", that's how he calls her.
And there Suraj made her heart skip a beat by his comment "Ask your Maa to be your Maa forever."
And as a reply, Ayan giggled "Maaa" singing along with it, making her to get out of his room immediately.

And the second day arrived as he expected but no reactions from her left anything to him.

- Should I ask her or let herself talk to me? -

Finishing his breakfast, he got and left for work.

- Let her come and talk herself! -

Was all he could think as he exited the mansion?

*** Why didn't he ask anything?
May be forgot?
No way! ***

As the evening came, and Suraj came back from work.
She made her way towards his room along with Ayan.

Getting the permission to enter, she got in to find in his sports pant and sleeveless tee-shirt.

"Yes?"
"Ayan wanted to say to his Papa that his Maa is ready to stay here for him and not for anything else." she said.

*****

Thanks for reading!
How was it?
Hope it wasn't boring!
Let me know your thoughts through LIKE and COMMENT!
Thank you!

Next part: Part 9

See you!

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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