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Golden.dust

@Golden.dust

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Interesting update

Vivaan😡

There's no need to blame suraj himselfwho would have expected this brutual accident😒

Hope suraj doesn't misunderstand chakor

Waiting for next update eagerly😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Hate vivan &his family😡
Feeling sad for sukor, they don't deserve this fate😭
Waiting for next

Thank you dear!
Glad you liked it and found it interesting!
Me too yaar! Hate Vivaan & co here!
No worries dear, their fate is going to change soon! ;-)
Will update next part in 2 sub parts!
See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Shar456
Waiting for d next update
I don't like vivaan
N I think light in my life mentioned in d last means that Suraj had taken her to his house n saved her n den she meet Ayaan her life u gave a new hope to life

Maithu please make the next update little long please

Thank you for reading dear!
Will be updating the next part soon!
Welcome to the club of Vivaan haters here LOL
You can that for her mention of light! :-)

As you asked for a long update, I thought to make it in 2 parts!
What say? Hehehe
See you soon!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Amazing update!
Poor Chakor, she's suffered a lot. Her uncle is pure evil.
Suraj is blaming himself but it wasn't his fault.
Chakor was relieved to get light in her life but soon she got the sun 😊.
Looking forward to the next part.

Maithu, no need to apologize, moving is a big hassle. Just relax and don't worry.

Thank you for your encouraging words dear!
For sure her uncle family is going to live in hell LOL
In real life, it happens that we blame ourselves for something we are not reason for. And that's what Suraj is doing!
Hehehe Light = Sun! You got my point!
Will be updating soon dear!

Well! Finished shifting to my new place, I still have network pbm, so doing work 50-50 LOL

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: taahir004
Chapter 5

Chakor coming home and finding her parents dead that was a horrible surprise
but what has happened to them both
her bond with family is just amazing

Thank you dear for reading and liking!
Happy that you liked this part and her bond with her family!
That was indeed a bad surprise to find all her life being under those white duvets! :-(
Keep on reading! Hope you like the rest of the parts too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Alice_Lucy
Interesting update
Vivaan😡
There's no need to blame suraj himselfwho would have expected this brutual accident😒
Hope suraj doesn't misunderstand chakor
Waiting for next update eagerly😊

Thank you buddy!
Hope you didn't kill Vivaan mentally LOL
No one has expected this accident but this is something human until he gets out of his family lose.
I hope too!
Will be updating soon! ;-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Hello!

As you all know, normally the update was for tomorrow but as I was a bit free, thought to make this part in two sub-parts!
So here I'm with the part A!
For sure you are going to have questions at the end!
Ask them, will try my best to reply to every question! ;-)

Link to the previous part: Part 7

Happy reading!

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Part 8A

*** As I came running towards the road, I got blinded by rays of lights and lost all the strength I had. ***

"Sorry for lying! I had no other choice!" she said in between her sobs.
"Sleep! We will talk later!" he said as he gave one glance at the sleeping for of Ayan before exiting the room after seeing Chakor nod her head.

*** Will he ask me to get out of the house now? ***

- Is fate playing game by bringing her here? -

*** Will I loose Ayan too now? ***

- Will she be able to love Ayan even after I tell her who I'm really? -

*** Why life is this cruel? ***

- Why can't life be easy? -

With plenty of thoughts running in both their minds, they kept on lingering their eyes on the ceiling, walls, on their surroundings, in the dark hours of night.

Not knowing how to face him in the morning, she stayed in the room with the pretext of keeping Ayan.

- She might be feeling sad to revive her past. -

*** He might be hating me for telling lies and lies. ***

- Need to talk to her! -

*** Hope he leaves me to work here! ***

And they continued their thinking process until moon shines bright in the sky.

"Where is Ayan?" he questioned as he took a seat around the dining table.
"He slept earlier chief!" Shieku responded.
"Where is Chakor?" unbuttoning shirt's hands and rolling it up.
"Chakor?" the servant saw his chief as if he is speaking a foreign language.
"Anjali!" he said calmly.
"Oh!" and he turned side way to catch her disappear inside the kitchen completely "Inside kitchen!"

Suraj lifted his eyes to search for the entrance of the kitchen as that is the spot where she stays when he has his breakfast, lunch or dinner.

- Is she avoiding me? Why? -

*** Why is he asking for me? ***

- If she is hesitant, how will I ask what I have planned to ask? -

*** Mom and Dad! Please help me! ***

With baby steps, she came out of her hide out, with her eyes focusing on her steps as Suraj called for her.

"Take a seat!" he proposed making her look up at him as if he asked something impossible "Sit!" he repeated seeing her questioning gaze.
Hesitantly, pulling the chair on her side, she took her seat on the chair he has pointed out i.e. the one opposite to him.
"Shieku! Bring a plate for her too!" and it made both the human beings around him look at him as if he is speaking alien but his man however went to fetch a plate for the lady he still treats as his sister.

*** Why this special treatment? Is he feeling pity, so doing all this? ***

- What is different that they are behaving like this? -

"Should I address you as Ajali or Chakor?" he asked at the right moment she was going to take a spoon of her food.
She immediately turned her face to see her brother like person watching her like she is a stranger to him and replied "Chakor!" in her meekly voice making Shieku get the queue that she will explain everything to him later. So left the place without any sound.
Turning to face him, she looked like a kid lost in a crowd.

- She is looking like a kid herself! -

"What do you think about marriage?"
She looked questioningly at him for this question as she expected something else "Huh?"
"You heard me the first time I think!" he noted.
"Hmm!" she nodded.
"Let me reformulate it!" gaining her full attention "What do you think about marrying me?" making her choke to death with this unexpected question of his.

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Thanks a lot buddies for reading!
If you liked this part, hit the LIKE bouton and COMMENT!
Will be updating the next part before 48 h!
So see you soon!

Next part: Part 8B

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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