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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: vidhi.universe
Amazing update👏 with too much suspense , I m so early waiting for next update😳 how will chakor know about Suraj.😉

Thank you so much dear!

What to do? To keep you all with this story, suspense is needed! Hehehe

I think it's up to Suraj now to reveal about himself to her.

Will try my best to be on time!

Thank you so much once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu what a build up of suspense
Felt very very sad to know that two innocent families had been targeted and killed brutally!!

interesting

Hope Sukor realise their match soon

I'm just trying to build a building with those suspenses! Hehehe

Yup yaar! It's really high level of brutality! Hope they get justice!

Well! Will it be okay if in less than 3 parts, they get married? ;-)

Thank you once again!

See you soon!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Shar456
Awesome update
Sad for sukor as they lost their parents

N dat evil Uncle did the accident becoz he wanted his son to marry chakor

I hope chakor comes to know dat Suraj was d boy who her parents hv choosen for her

Waiting patiently for the next update

maithu love u a lot

Thank you so much!

Happy that you liked it!

Me too sad along with you all! :-[

And that devil uncle is happy about that success! Want to rip in bones and pieces!

For sure she will come to know about Suraj! But when is the big question!

Will try my best to update it on Friday morning itself dear!

It's just that I'm in a big mood swing time even if it has nothing to do with my health as one person is ruling over my head and my mood!

So will try to be on time!

Love you too dear!

Take care!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Alice_Lucy
Interesting update maithu 😃
So her uncle is behind chakor's parents death and I guess for suraj's family too😲
Hope sukor team up against that evil uncle and send him behind the bars
Waiting for the next update!

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you find it interesting!

Yup! He is being that big accident.

Will be back soon! :-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Amazing update!
So Suraj was the intended groom.
It's very sad that they both lost their loved ones in the same accident. Both were left lonely.
Will Suraj tell her that those were his family?
What will Suraj do now that he knows who's behind the murder of his family?
Was Chakor escaping her uncle's goons?

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks a lot buddy!

Yup! That's where the story brings us to! Suraj = Groom! His family killed = Chakor's uncle culprit.

Well! Chakor will get to know everything, but only when he wishes for LOL

Well! A small justice revenge!

Your last question has answer in the next part!

Thank you once again for reading and motivating me!

See you soon!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Hello!

Sorry for being late!
It's just that I'm moving from 4th floor to 5th at my work.
So took time to check and re-read!
Thank you for all the love and beautiful words!

Link to the previous part: Part 6

Happy reading!

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Part 7

- No no No it can't be possible! -

He sat on the bed, putting his face inside his hands with them balancing on their knees over the lap.

- This can't have happened to my parents!
This can't be the fate of my family.

I should have left bro go there instead of me when Dad asked. So it would be me in their place.
It would be me and not bro and babhi(sister-in-law).

I would have even said no to that marriage if that was the surprise they were planning at that time.

Why would he kill my parents?
I should know it!
I want to know it!
I need to know it! -

Getting up from his place and room. Reaching the dining table, he filled two glasses of water.
Drinking from one, he brought back one to her as he kneeled down on her level.

"Chakor!" he called her as calmly as possible.
Pushing away the tears off her eyes, she lifted her head to come face to face with him.
Extending his hand, he passed the water glass as she took it from him.

Slowly sipping on it, her miserable days passed in front of her eyes.

***** HER PAST *****

"Now he has nothing! That orphan has nothing except those valuable assets."
Palming her mouth in shock, she submerged the cry that threatened to come out.
"But Papa! Chakor is in trauma! How will we do what we wanted to do?"
"Son! Everything will get heeled with time. And same will be applied to her parents' demise."
Smiling at his father "Sure dad!" posing his glass "But why was there 7 person instead of just 2?"
"Well! I think their fate was to die in the accident I planned." taking a sip "I got the info that your aunt and uncle were accompanied by that useless family as their car had a break down, only after I gave go to the lorry driver."

Chakor who was standing and crying since minutes, couldn't hold on.
So the first thought that crossed her mind is to run away from there and that's what she did.
Running away from home.
But one mistake made her regret her move as, her hand slightly touched the vase and her leg hit the base of the support, making the decor to shatter in millions of pieces.
Getting alert of the sound, both the men got out of the room after putting down the glasses, to catch the view of Chakor running away, on the stairs with their men guarding the entrance of the mansion.

She came to a halt as she saw those men in the entrance.
Turning behind, she saw her so caller uncle and his son towards her, in slow motion.

~~~~~

"Okay sweetheart!" she swatted his hand as he was going to tuck his hand "No problem!" he said taking his hand "You will be all mine! So why to go fast?"
She turned her face away from him as she was in the corner of a room, in an unknown place since when she doesn't know, as she was shifted after she reached her unconscious state, which was a result of chloroform.
"Why don't you have this for breakfast honey?"
"Don't call me like that!" she said in her stern voice.
"Then what about Love!"
She swatted again his hand "I will kill myself than being near you!"
"Don't do that baby!" she glared at her as he got up "As you know everything, I wanted you and my dad wanted your money. So here, you are with me my love!"
"You! Son of a bast**d! How dare you to talk to me after doing all this! And you expect me to be your wife!" he turned towards her and knelled down "i thought you to be good! You are cheater! Backstabber! You will pay for this!"
"How baby? Like this?" putting his filthy hand on her shoulders, with a tight hold with her struggling to push him.
She might have used her legs but they were chained.

He approached his face near hers and inhaled her perfume as an evil smirk played on his lips.
"I want to" and he closed in as she pushed him with all her might, and in that process, pieces of her dress got torn in the places he was holding.
"You lust me! Not love! If you really loved me, you wouldn't be celebrating when I'm in sorrow! If my parents were here, I could have got asked them for you even if I never loved you Vivaan and saw you under those lights! But now! I have only hate for you! Only hate!" she said with hatred in her eyes.
Getting back to his position "It's not like that"
"Don't!" she said as he was going to take her name "My name in your mouth will be like killing me again and again."
"Please list" she pushed him again as he neared her "I will talk to you later!" he left from there.

~~~~~

As the day went and neared the night, Chakor pulled out the small key she hid from others view.

*** I needed to let him that close to get my on this keys! ***

Feeling like worms were playing on her body, she pushed all the unwanted thoughts back in her head, shrugging her shoulders.
Carefully putting the key in whole, she unlocked the chain and freeing her legs, she got up and stretched her hurting legs before nearing the door.

*** My luck the guards are sleeping! ***

She thought as she stepped out of the room and searched for the main door to get out as no sound of any existing human being was there, around here.
Spotting the main door, she marched towards it to find it unlocked from outside.
Thanking the god, she pulled open the door, to find one guard outside.
She was taken aback of his sudden presence there and she thought what to do as she sneaked slowly out as he went on his right and hid behind the big boxes laying there by the side.
And by sneaking one after the other, she made her way towards an unknown destination.

*** It's looks like forest. Where is it leading me?
Mom and Dad! Please be with me! ***

THUD

She fell down making the guard alert!
He immediately contacted the people inside to know if all is in order but got to know nothing is as asked by their boss.
Chakor, in the meantime, got up and hurried towards the destination in from of her.

*** Oh no! Hope they didn't see me! ***

As she ran, she heard running sound behind her.

"There she is!" a voice behind her.
And she hurried and hurried as she fought her tears of anger and want to get out of the hell which is waiting for her.
As soon as she saw a light passing in a long distance, she sighed as she got where she was heading to.

*** Finally a light in my life! ***

***** END OF PAST *****

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Thank you buddies for reading!
Sorry once again for being late.
I will try my level best to be on time from now on!
Hope you all got enough of the past. So from next part, let's see the future ;-)
If you liked this part, LIKE & COMMENT your views!
Will love to read it!
Thank you once again!

Next part: Part 8A

See you!

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Interesting update👏

Hate vivan &his family😡

Feeling sad for sukor, they don't deserve this fate😭

Waiting for next

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Shar456

@Shar456

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Waiting for d next update

I don't like vivaan

N I think light in my life mentioned in d last means that Suraj had taken her to his house n saved her n den she meet Ayaan her life u gave a new hope to life

Maithu please make the next update little long please