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Sweety7898

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: maithu_
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Super duper update👏

Yo 🥳 chakor accepted Suraj's marriage proposal😳

Nowadays u r so fast maithu di 😉 (in writing) & we r in reading 😆😉

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

super Maithu

what a battle

and my heart was going say ok Chakor say ok Chakor

and the way he said and the way she said

girl there is your punch

loved it

keep it up Maithu

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nemo316

@nemo316

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Amazing update!

Loved how you alternated between their thoughts. How they're wrong about each other and how they both care for Ayan.

Chakor is starting to feel something for Suraj.

I'm sad she feels that he took Ayan away from her to blackmail her, he was trying to relieve her stress.

Happy that Chakor agreed, her condition makes me feel ok that Suraj is hiding his motives from her.

Sukor's love story has officially started, can't wait to see how it grows.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Shar456
Awesome update maithu
Waiting for d next update😊😊

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you liked it!

Will be on time with the next one! ;-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
The problem of sukor is communication gap😆
Chakor said yes to marriage
Waiting for next

Thank you so much!

Happy that you find it interesting!

Communication gap! U got the point ;-)

Finally she said yes! Else I thought she is going to say with all her thought process! Hehehe

Will update on time!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Sweety7898

Super duper update👏
Yo 🥳 chakor accepted Suraj's marriage proposal😳
Nowadays u r so fast maithu di 😉 (in writing) & we r in reading 😆😉

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you liked this part!

Hahahaha Party! Of course yes! There will be one soon here LOL

Writing short parts is not a pbm so I can update daily ;-)

But when I think of 1000+ works Oufff I can't handle it immediately

Thank you once again!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: sumsukor
super Maithu
what a battle
and my heart was going say ok Chakor say ok Chakor

and the way he said and the way she said

girl there is your punch

loved it

keep it up Maithu

Thanks a lot buddy!

Battle? I didn't see any weapons! :-|

And I'm glad Chakor listen to you and said YES Hehehehe

Well! Each character is different! So just tried this one proposal too! LOL

So happy that SUmi loved it!

Keep on reading!

And if any of you find anything go wrong, let me know! ;-)

See you dear!

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Amazing update!

Loved how you alternated between their thoughts. How they're wrong about each other and how they both care for Ayan.

Chakor is starting to feel something for Suraj.

I'm sad she feels that he took Ayan away from her to blackmail her, he was trying to relieve her stress.

Happy that Chakor agreed, her condition makes me feel ok that Suraj is hiding his motives from her.

Sukor's love story has officially started, can't wait to see how it grows.

Thanks dear!

Happy that you loved their thoughts communication.

Ayan is the centre figure here! LOL

Well! I think even Suraj started to feel something something ;-)

Me too felt bad for the small small misunderstandings! :-|

Glad you understood her situation! And Suraj too! Heee

Yup! Finally after 8 parts, LOVE is starting! :-)

Thank you once again!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Hello!

Here I 'm with the update of Zarir!
No fast forwarding in this part!
So you will know few bit and pieces of information.
If any questions, ask them!

Link to the previous part: Part 8B

Happy reading!

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Part 9

- Did I really hear her? -

"Pardon!" he said facing her.
"Pa Pa Pa Pa" Ayan started to sign asking Suraj to take him in his hands.

*** Why is he acting as if he didn't hear me? ***

"You heard me the first time!" she said as she tried to stand away from him as he approached them to take Ayan, making her feel strange with his proximity as the heat from his body started to affect her, unknown to her mind.
"It's just that ... hmm" taking Ayan "I thought I heard you wrong!"

"Drama king!" she muttered under her breath.
Unfortunately, he heard it as a smirk formed on his lips as he made Ayan comfortable in his arms "Tell your Maa that she is the one doing drama since the time she entered this house!"
Hearing him, her face fell as it made her feel guilty for lying to someone who helped her in a needy situation "I'm sorry!" she said in her low voice.

"Hey!" he neared her and was going to touch her shoulder when he stopped himself with his actions but not his words "I was just kidding! By the way, I thought the dam of cry closed the day before yesterday itself!" settling in bed with Ayan "Tell your Maa that she looks like an evil witch in cartoons when she cries!" playing with him and making him giggle.

- She is the real Drama Queen! -

"Listen Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi! I'm here just for Ayan! Not to hear your drama filled words!" moving towards the door and turning back to face him "If I'm an evil witch then you are the Evil himself!" closing the door behind her, she left from there.

*** What does he think of himself?
He doesn't have rights to say those things because I accepted to marry him! ***

- Poor us! -

"I think your real Maa was hiding behind the good girl. Best of luck to you my dear boy! And I wish myself too!"
Opening the door, startling both the men in the room "Don't fill my son's mind and heart against me!" and she left for the good this time, closing the door.

- I can see how she was before our fate played the game! Hope she stays like this! Jungli Bili (Wild Cat)! -

"She is a unique piece!"
Ayan nodding his head as if understanding everything, pulled his Papa's tee to get his attention as his dear Papa was looking at the closed door, giving his all attention to something there which happens to be invisible.
"Oh oh my dear little boy is wanting attention!" and he started to play with the kid.

"Anja... Chakor!" Shieku.
"Ahaan bhaiya(brother)!" turning to him as she was cutting vegetable, helping him.
"You are calling me bhaiya just for name sake. If you really thought me as a brother, you would have shared all your sorrows with me."
She became silent immediately as she didn't know what to say.
"Sorry!" she said in her meeky voice after few seconds.
"Oh my dear! Don't feel bead! It's just that I felt a bit hurt but I'm so so happy that you are going to become Mrs. Chief!"
Shaking her head at his comment as a smile crossed her lips unknowingly, she went to get back to her work.

"Do you want to get back your father's companies?" he asked as both were seated to have dinner.

*** It means sending court notice! He will know that I'm here and might harm Ayan!
No! Nope! I can't let that happen! ***

- If she says yes! It will be direct! Else -

"No! No need for that!" with her eyes concentrating on her food "I'm happy with what I have! That's enough!"

- Why am I feeling an edge of sadness in her voice? -

*** I don't want my father's hard work to go in wrong hands but at the same time, I can't risk the lives of people who are with me! ***

"Okay!" he said as he know what he is going to do next "I will prepare the marriage document for tomorrow and the day after tomorrow, we will get married in a simple way if it's fine with you."
She just nodded not looking at him.
"We will let know everyone during the birthday party that we got married."
"Birthday?" she questioned.
"In 4 days, it's my birthday! Every year, my parents organize a party or it might be an event to help orphanages and old age homes. So thought to do an event and announce our marriage there and then as it will be easier to deal with reporters and all question!"
"Oh okay!"

- Why was I giving a detailed explanation to her when I don't like to explain myself to someone? -

Wanting to escape from the thoughts which might cloud his mind, he focused his concentration on his food too.

And the day went without any such events where one or the other felt something something.

"Shieku! Can you please ask Chakor to come?"
"Yes Chief!" nodding his head, he disappeared in the direction of the room where she stays with Ayan.

Picking Ayan in her hands, she made her way towards the sofa sets present in hall, where the man who is going to change her destiny is seated.

*** I think he called to sign those papers! ***

- Finally she is here! -

He thought as he lifted his head hearing Ayan talking in his own language in the hands of his mother to be.

"Take a seat!" he said as he saw his servant leave the space by his own "Here are the papers you need to sign!"
Making Ayan sit by her side, she collected the papers and a pen and went on sign when she was stopped by him.
"Read before signing!"
"I have nothing to lose! And I trust you!" she said with a small smile, checked on Ayan and signed the document.

*** Is this a new beginning? ***

- This is the beginning! -

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Thank you so much for reading with patience!
Hope you all liked it!
If yes, hit the LIKE bouton and COMMENT your view!
Would love to read them!
What can I say about the next part?
Marriage + Awkwardness + Villains entries + ...

See you all soon!

Next part: Part 10

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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