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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh, wow, you updated...??? this is just amazing.🥳

I haven't read yet, but felt so happy to see your thread, so commenting😆.

I'll read now.
thanks a lot dear.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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WHY O WHY???? I MEAN WHY THIS KIND OF ENDING????😲

I don't get it, am I missing something? Please explain your POV... I am completely blank and in total shock. I read it n no. of times, still my tubelight mind is not understanding why this SS had to be a sad ending?😔😭 Why Sonakshi had to leave Dev...?🤔 I am heart broken, horrified, angry, sad and totally confused.😕😡😭


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _ShaheErica_

Oh, wow, you updated...??? this is just amazing.🥳

I haven't read yet, but felt so happy to see your thread, so commenting😆.

I'll read now.
thanks a lot dear.🤗



Thank you so much for bearing with me and having so much patience!

It may seem like a miracle...but yes, I've finally updated :P
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _ShaheErica_

WHY O WHY???? I MEAN WHY THIS KIND OF ENDING????😲

I don't get it, am I missing something? Please explain your POV... I am completely blank and in total shock. I read it n no. of times, still my tubelight mind is not understanding why this SS had to be a sad ending?😔😭 Why Sonakshi had to leave Dev...?🤔 I am heart broken, horrified, angry, sad and totally confused.😭



Firstly, thank you so much for rereading the last chapter...I feel honored !

I have the same reaction whenever I see a story having a sad ending However, this time I wanted to try writing something like this. I know this was pretty unexpected, but adding more chapters would just be dragging it.

I wanted to leave it as a suspense which is why I haven't explained Sonakshi's reason behind leaving Dev. However, we now know that this is against her will and she loves Dev.

I'm sorry for ending this on a sad note, but this was something I've been wanting to do ever since I started writing. If you look at the brighter side of things, Dev finally witnessed Sonakshi's confession of love, through words if not verbally.

Hope you liked it 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome ending thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Muskan2001


Firstly, thank you so much for rereading the last chapter...I feel honored !

I have the same reaction whenever I see a story having a sad ending However, this time I wanted to try writing something like this. I know this was pretty unexpected, but adding more chapters would just be dragging it.

I wanted to leave it as a suspense which is why I haven't explained Sonakshi's reason behind leaving Dev. However, we now know that this is against her will and she loves Dev.

I'm sorry for ending this on a sad note, but this was something I've been wanting to do ever since I started writing. If you look at the brighter side of things, Dev finally witnessed Sonakshi's confession of love, through words if not verbally.

Hope you liked it 😃



OK, fine you wanted to give this story a sad ending. I have no problem with sad ending stories, but only when given proper reasons. But this one looks like a forced one.

Don't you think its abrupt when everything is going fine, Sonakshi is not giving her life another chance? she is not thinking about Soha & her future, just engrossed in her own sorrow, without any reason just running away??? Why she want to go away from her lovely family?? But where will she go? She went alone I guess. How will Soha & Dev survive without her, when she has deliberately left them?😡

With this decision of hers, I can come to only one conclusion, either she is suffering from some kind of incurable disease or has committed some crime. The latter one is hard to believe, so it has to be the first one...
Only this kind of reason will force any person to leave his or her loved ones and go away from them. Otherwise, why wud any person run away from a beautiful life awaiting for him or her???
Its just stupidity.😡

My rant is going too far. You need not respond to this. I just wrote what I felt. Just ignore it.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Nice update.
The letter was emotional and Sonakshi poured her heart in it.
End was different.
Well i will make it a happy ending in my mind atleast. 😛

Overall i have loved your stories. 😊

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