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Absolutely no qualms in taking in good stuff master ji . But the issue is I type the entire thing in my phone cause i write at random times and phone is the most comfortable medium . I completely agree with making it more appealing and comfortable to the readers but as of now I could only manage so much amidst my exams I apologise. I would try next time in a laptop and see how it suits . Thanks a lot tadka girl for reading and your valuable suggestions.Originally posted by: desigal2017
Loved the naughty Vansh towards the end.
I would like to say that if you format what you have written it will be easier on the eyes and it will be easier to read.For eg,Whenever you are writing dialogue, you can start it in the next line and when the dialogue ends you can leave that line empty instead of continuing in the same line.Kanak was standing outside the house when Uma slowly came and stood right behind her, "Hello!" he whispered into her ears, which rather scared her. "Uma" she said, "You scared me!" she continued.The same thing can be written as,Kanak was standing outside the house when Uma slowly came and stood right behind her,"Hello!" he whispered into her ears, which rather scared her."Uma" she said,"You scared me!" she continued.I find that the second one is more inviting to the reader. And when you read the second one, the reader gets a break in between to at least think about what he is reading and to ponder. Just to break his attention even for a second is sometimes good.You can play with a lot, you can make him think the way you want to. As writers we should always think of the readers and their comfort and also know how to use it to our benefit. LOL. Again, that's just what I believe in. You don't need to follow that. And there are certainly no rules to be followed.Sorry, if I said too much. Sometimes I can't suppress the teacher in me. Sorry for the lame example.😆
