Kuch Khas hain hamaara pyaar mein SS - part 4 page 7 updated

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It's 4:30 in the morning and Kanak wakes up to a husky voice singing " Enna sona kyun rab ne banaya( (why did god make you this beautiful ) " and to the smell of tea . She rubs her eyes and sees Uma standing near her with a cup of herbal tea - yes kanum have agreed that it's Kanak prerogative to drink tea albeit a healthy one . Kanak cheekily asks Uma where did you hear this song we didn't watch this film so did u go with someone else ?? . Uma turns his face towards the window and says I heard it on a radio from a roadside shop and you know the answer to the next question that I watch films only with you . Kanak senses Uma is a bit mad on her for asking such a question but this has been her entertainment ever since she came to know about Palomis interests in Uma . Kanak gets up from her bed and hugs him from behind and says " I love you patidev " . Uma is still facing the other side but smiles heartily . Then turns towards Kanak but now Kanak is blushing and tries to move away . Uma pulls her closer , looks her in the eye and says repeat what you said just now . Kanak pushes Uma and runs inside to take bath . She knows she could stand there in the comfort of his arms and get lost in that little world of theirs but she has duties towards the house and also has to rush towards her shop - yes kanak has opened " Sanshalya ( sandya + Shankar + Kaushalya )sweet shop " just last month but the business has only been growing and expanding . Uma has been fully supportive of her venture and helps her manage both house and business . It's 8 am and both of them are ready for the regular game of theirs . The game is whoever goes to maasas room first gets a hug from maasa . Maasa has fully recovered thanks to physiotheraphy that Kanak suggested , researched , argued and made Uma give a chance to this treatment . Shiv is also ready to say 1, 2, 3 for the race but he knows it's his Bhabhisa who wins almost everyday . Shiv pulls his dadusa by his dhoti and says at least today try to win dadusa or else bhabisa will not make me sukha mewa ka kulfi cause I kept a bet with her that you would win at least once this week but it's already Saturday and still no win . Uma smiles and says don't you worry shiv today even usain bolt can't beat me . Shiv face palms himself . Then the trio hear the doorbell ringing and Kanak excitedly says " guess they have arrived " .


To be continued . . . My first ever attempt at writing comments pls . Both positive and negative feedback r equally welcome 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So cute.
<3

Herbal tea.👏

I did not understand the name of her shop.

Kuch khas hai tere mere pyaar mein

Can be the name of a serial!
Edited by desigal2017 - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sahana93

It's 4:30 in the morning and Kanak wakes up to a husky voice singing " Enna sona kyun rab ne banaya " and to the smell of tea . She rubs her eyes and sees Uma standing near her with a cup of herbal tea - yes kanum have agreed that it's Kanak prerogative to drink tea albeit a healthy one . Kanak cheekily asks Uma where did you hear this song we didn't watch this film so did u go with someone else ?? . Uma turns his face towards the window and says I heard it on a radio from a roadside shop and you know the answer to the next question that I watch films only with you . Kanak senses Uma is a bit mad on her for asking such a question but this has been her entertainment ever since she came to know about Palomis interests in Uma . Kanak gets up from her bed and hugs him from the back and says " I love you patidev " . Uma is still facing the other side but smiles heartily . Then turns towards Kanak but now Kanak is blushing and tries to move away . Uma pulls her closer , looks her in the eyes and says repeat what you said just now . Kanak pushes Uma and runs inside to take bath . She know she could stand there in the comfort of his arms and get lost in that little world of theirs but she has duties towards the house and also rush towards her shop - yes kanak has opened " Sanshalya sweet shop " just last month but the business has only been growing and expanding . Uma has been fully supportive of her venture and helps her manage both house and business . It's 8 am and both of them are ready for the regular game of theirs . The game is whoever goes to maasas room first gets a hug from maasa . Maasa has fully recovered thanks to physiotheraphy that Kanak suggested , researched , argued and made Uma give a chance to this treatment . Shiv is also ready to say 1, 2, 3 for the race but he knows it's his Bhabhisa who wins almost everyday . Shiv pulls his dadusa by his dhoti and says at least today try to win dadusa or else bhabisa will not make me sukha mewa ka kulfi cause I kept a bet with her that you would win at least once this week but it's already Saturday and still no win . Uma smiles and says don't you worry shiv today even usain bolt can't beat me . Shiv face palms himself . Then the trio hear the doorbell ringing and Kanak excitedly says " guess they have arrived " .


To be continued . . . My first ever attempt at writing comments pls . Both positive and negative feedback r equally welcome 😊



Wow... Loved it too much... You are putting our dreams in words... Love u.. Keep posting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Sahana -- hey there

It's a wonderful track you got there working. Freshness and liveliness is present. And Kanak and Uma are both working towards each other, hesitant but they know each other's happiness.

I love the name Shanshalya sweet show. It's short for Shankar and kaushalya maa - it's adorable 😊

Keep up the amazing work.

Regards
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigal2017

So cute.

<3

Herbal tea.👏

I did not understand the name of her shop.

Kuch khas hai tere mere pyaar mein

Can be the name of a serial!

thanks for taking the time to read and comment desigal . Sanshalya is a mix of sandya , Sankar and Kaushalya . 😛 . Couldn't experiment more with te title still learning Hindi 😆
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Originally posted by: varsha79




Wow... Loved it too much... You are putting our dreams in words... Love u.. Keep posting

thanks a ton Varsha . Yeah dreams in words is exactly what it is 😛 loads of love back to you
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Originally posted by: blueflames


@Sahana -- hey there

It's a wonderful track you got there working. Freshness and liveliness is present. And Kanak and Uma are both working towards each other, hesitant but they know each other's happiness.

I love the name Shanshalya sweet show. It's short for Shankar and kaushalya maa - it's adorable 😊

Keep up the amazing work.

Regards

Wow blue thank you so much . Coming from a writer like you it's some level of encouragement for a first time writer like me . Experiments with the name - sandya + Shankar + Kaushalya = sanshalya 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice. Very lovely read.
Please do continue .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sahana93

thanks for taking the time to read and comment desigal . Sanshalya is a mix of sandya , Sankar and Kaushalya . 😛 . Couldn't experiment more with te title still learning Hindi 😆


Oh.. Okay.. tht it was some Hindi word that I don't know the meaning of..
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Originally posted by: sravz23

Very nice. Very lovely read.

Please do continue .

thanks sravs . I am glad u liked t 😳

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