FF-True Love Prevails - Note pg 25 - Page 18

aawwwwwww that was fabulous
cont soon

awwwwwwwwww true love does prevail 😭
pls cont soon.......... 👏

Wonderful part...it was all long & nice...a lovely read


And the whole part was JB...what a treat I must say


Loved reading the part...my eyes were glued with the screen....and even after such a nice long part I wanted more...😛



Great job in uniting JB, loved the part


Continue soon...😊

hey,

phew!!!!😆😆 that was a great longgggggg part😆😆 didnt complain bt it took me a while to finish readin bt absoulty loved it👏👏👏

great part👏👏👏

too touched the emotion u hav described😭😭

hailia!!!!!!!! Bani is so naughty😉

bt liked her the way she convinced Jai to make her his😉😳😳

plzzzzzz continue soon cant wait to see wat will Jai do with Jigs n Karuna😆

Bani said it the truth....................wn Jigs sees her n Ganga in WM she wud probably die of heartattack🤣

update soon

bye n tc

Hey Jonaki,

another fabalous update,just amazing.finally two people who truly belonged together are together.their union was filled with love,care and loads of passion and you penned it down so well.so glad to see them talking to one another and clearing all their misunderstandings.very well written,so happy to see Bani back to where she truly belongs.looking forward to some happy times now with the whole family.will be eagerly waiting for the next part. 👏


preet 😳

Hey Jonaki,

Great update. I am so happy that both of them have decided to put their past behind them and move on.
Waiting for Jigs and Karuna to be kicked out.

Pls cont son

Kiran

Hello friends!
Yes its Sunday and you must be wondering why there is no update this week - well honestly its coz a) really busy at work, and also b) my inspiration is almost gone.

I can't even begin to express how uninspired I am with KS now, and in my FF I so want to punish Jigyasa that I'm stumped with ideas on what to do to her. Killing her is too easy, and turning her mental is also too easy, so how about you folks give me some ideas on what you'd like to see happening to Jigs and maybe I can twist my story coz for me until Jigs and Karuna are really punished there is no real reconciliation, and I can't drag TLP too much longer. So why don't you let me know what you would like to see happen and I can use some ideas and write my next part...

Till then, though, please bear with me and I promise to do my best to update a bit later.
Jonaki

Jigyasa.......the villain of the whole story and the biggest trouble maker..
My biggest problem with her is that she lies, and makes up stories and Jai believes her.
What I would like to see happening is for once, Bani should confront her when she starts screaming and making up stories. Of course Bani answers back with a lot of solid truth backing her. At this point, Bani and the rest of the family should stand as one, to protect the Walia family and Bani and Jai's love. How do you think Jigyasa will react once she knows that everybody know her real deal?

Read your last part after posting my reply. What would you like done to them?? Keep them away from family? No one talks to them? Put conditions like they have to work in a orphanage or a senior citizens home working there and helping the unfortunate and taking care of them. They need to repent but this should all be done only after they are made to realise about all the crimes they committed. Make them wear cotton sarees, and cook and clean, no social contact with others? No luxuries and no extras to make their life easy. Hopefully they will learn enough skills in this so that they can survive on their own after they are conveniently kicked out of the communities that they are working in.. 😆 😉

Jonaki,

Fantastic FF. Would have loved to have seen this play out on screen rather than the trash we got. You have shown the Jai and Ganga and the Jai and Bani relationshipp so beautifully. Here Meera is actually tolerable.

Great job, really loved it.

M