OS - ADni marriage Series - The Treacherous Heart - Page 3

Originally posted by: amortentia15

Brilliant OS angels! You are such a prolific writer and you have the exceptional ability to make the readers see the story unfolding right in front of their eyes!!! and I absolutely love your choice of words when describing the various emotions and situations these two damaged souls, advay and chandni experience in their story of love hate pain and betrayal 👏

Thanks Juhi 😳 Hope u checked out the 3 part Hug series that I wrote 😊

Originally posted by: Angels11

I knew Advay is gng 2 b cruel to Chandni. But I also wanted the CVs to show him struggle while beingg cruel to her. CVs let me down on that front

I really did not feel surprised that he did not struggle
Now he considers Chandni the same as Indrani
So treats both the same way

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I really did not feel surprised that he did not struggle
Now he considers Chandni the same as Indrani
So treats both the same way

I remember reading a story where 1 of the character says that no matter what happens if you had loved a person once you cant be disinterested in them. You may hate them in the future but u cant be detached to them. You ll get emotional even if its of the negative kind. Even if Advay dint feel sympathy towards Chandni he cant be oblivious. Yesterday they should ve shown some emotion. Advay looked blank & thats what is not sitting well with the audience. He may be dark but even a dark villain shows emotions. Advay looks so detached & that's what is unbelievable.

Originally posted by: Angels11

Thanks Juhi 😳 Hope u checked out the 3 part Hug series that I wrote 😊

Originally posted by: Angels11

I remember reading a story where 1 of the character says that no matter what happens if you had loved a person once you cant be disinterested in them. You may hate them in the future but u cant be detached to them. You ll get emotional even if its of the negative kind. Even if Advay dint feel sympathy towards Chandni he cant be oblivious. Yesterday they should ve shown some emotion. Advay looked blank & thats what is not sitting well with the audience. He may be dark but even a dark villain shows emotions. Advay looks so detached & that's what is unbelievable.

OK I get your point now
But he considers love as his weakness
And after seeing the baby he is just more enraged
so perhaps he has pushed back all his other emotions at the moment

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Nice OS..

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: 2filmy

OK I get your point now
But he considers love as his weakness
And after seeing the baby he is just more enraged
so perhaps he has pushed back all his other emotions at the moment

Lets c how the CVs planned it out 😊

Can you write an OS on her reaction when she knows he is Dev ?
This moment can come at a point when Indrani has hired goons to shoot Advay ?
Or when he is already in ICU after being shot ?
May be she sees some diary where Advay has written about her ?

Or if you want to write in any other way that will also do ?