imagine this ... #Battle(in his embrace , Adni hug)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Rage is exploding through every nerve in his body, he wanted to tear him apart from arm to arm and limb to limb. He wanted to smash his head right through the wall as he held pp one foot above the ground pinning him to the wall with his right hand. He is just a moment away from snapping his neck when he caught a glimpse of chandini . He titled his head and tried to asses her condition , she is definitely not in position to walk nor even fit to stand. He saw her leaning on to the pillar , holding her head. 'chandini ' his heart murmured. And his rage multiplied he tightened his hold on pp turningtowards him with a murderous glare . 'How dare...?' he said raising his fist and knocked his chin , he punched thrice in quick concessions and loosened his grip . PP collapsed on the floor , blood spilling from his mouth.
Advay looked bit satisfied and took deep breath before he rushed towards chandini. 'Dont touch me ' she said as he came near pushing her hand forward to stop him. As her hand touched his chest, he stopped. 'Dont..' she said in low pleading voice. 'chan... ' but he stopped as her fingers grabed his collar and now pulling him closer , stepped forward in confusion she leaned on him , her head slightly resting on his chest. 'take me away ' she whispered and he obeyed. He picked her up into his arms and walked out of the dark room.

The thought of what just would have happened if he hasnt reached in time made him feel sick. A image of semi conscious chandini and PP holding her close gave him chills and shudders that passed in his spine has nothing to do with the cold air that hit him as he stepped outside. He glanced at her face and was momentarily stunned by the impulsive urge he felt to protect her. His grip on her tightened and his eyes softened as he looked at her lying innocently in his arms.

Her hair is slightly blown by breeze , her eye lashes so long that they seemed to be resting on her high cheeks as she closed her eyes, her sculptured lips slightly parted, her head slightly thrown back showcasing the gentle curves of her neck, her skin bit pale but still radiant
making total justice to her name .. 'chandini'. Her eyes fluttered making him snap out of his thoughts. He took a deep breath and shook his head 'this isnt working' he said himself , he walked briskly towards a near bench and placed her down gently.

He sat down beside her and placed his hand on her cheek tugging her hair behind the ear. ' chandini ..' he said trying to hold her straight. A relief spread on her face and her eyes fluttered again as she tried opening them . But too exhausted to do that she simply leaned on his chest and wrapped her hands around him. He is shocked beyond words , lifted his hands instantly as if her touch passed current and suspended them in midair an inch away for her.

Her physical proximity made his heart beat frantically and yet he somehow felt calm. He thought how easy it would be to lift her in to his lap , craddle her close to his heart , her head resting in the crock of his neck and rock her like baby all night. He closed his eyes tightly refusing his mind from painting such picture for him. And its then he heard her mumbling , he diverted on his concentration on that and tried to understand her jumbled words.

' I was frightened.. so dark.. no one was there.. he .. he wont let me go' she said tears dripping from her eyes. 'Its okay , he cant touch you now ' he said softly ' assuring her . ' He didnt touch me.. he said there is no need to.. iam already ruined , he said..' his throat tightened as he heard the pain in her broken voice. He felt that she is not talking about the present situation, may be about her past incident, he thought.' There is no help.. i told myself that you are going to come for me , you will take me home.. but you didnt ' she said with a hiccup. ' Iam here now ' he said placing his hand on her shoulder.

' I know ' she whispered back he felt a smile in her voice. He wanted to wrap his arms around her ,drag her to him and crush her to his chest and never let her go. EVER. ' where were you all the time ?' she sounded like a lost child . A battle is raging inside him , his mind ,body , heart all fighting against him . His mind choose to go numb practically blocking all his rational thoughts. his finger tips are itching to caress her and to hold her close to him. His heart is not his own anymore as it betrayed him by crying out for her.

'I missed you a lot, Dev ' she whispered . And finally Dev won. His arms went around holding her tight. she snuggled closer drenching his shirt with hot tears melting all the walls he put up around his heart in the past years.
Tears spun to his eyes but he shut them. He bowed his head ' chandini ..' he whispered nuzzling her hair and breathing in . He hoped her to say his name on more time.

'Dev..Dev.. Dev.. ' she kept repeating his name like a chant in her mind before she blissfully sunk in to complete unconsciousness while he sat their holding her dearly. And we get our first Devni moment.❤️

Now will you please , in the name of god, play the damn 'Rabba ve'

so people.. Iam super spiked for his scene and i know you are all too..😳
iam not sure if she is going to take Dev name. may be its too soon for advay to know that how much dev means to chandini. i mean if this happens it will certainly change his opinion on her. i am not saying he will forgive her or fall for her. nope , not happening. but atleast he will give her benefit of doubt. what do you think?

share your thoughts about the upcoming hug. And please do tell how you felt reading this imagination. thank you.😊
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2filmy thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Extraordinary fantastic amazing
The emotions are brought out so well
The small hesitancy from Advay to hug her
But the way she clung to him is so touching
Loved that she took Dev's name
Finally Dev won and he hugged her tightly
Loved it dear Mayu
Edited by 2filmy - 8 years ago
Joyness thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful...but don't think CVS are gonna give us devni moment so early.. but I wish Chandni says Dev
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Awesome loved it so much.


thank you chipper 😊

happy to know u liked it😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh ..My
Awesome 👏
You should be in writer's team.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Joyness

Beautiful...but don't think CVS are gonna give us devni moment so early.. but I wish Chandni says Dev


i too thought the same.. but even if chandini doesnt say dev.. its dev in advay that hugged her😊
i think so
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Posted: 8 years ago
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If only she knew Advay was her Dev..*sighs*
CV's will torture us for many more days..I think I would have enjoyed DevNi more than AdvNi.

Beautiful piece of writing..👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful write up.though i doubt she will say dev but there can be a possibility .
Keep on writing dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lost_Somewhere

If only she knew Advay was her Dev..*sighs*

CV's will torture us for many more days..I think I would have enjoyed DevNi more than AdvNi.

Beautiful piece of writing..👏


Even I feel I would have enjoyed DevNi more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unreserved my post in page 1 and edited

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