RN (lrl) SS - Back for you! Chp-7 upd pg 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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PROLOGUE



<font size="3">" I thought my parents loved me, though I am just a business deal for them " "I thought I'll marry the Prince Charming of my dreams ... But there's no use of waiting for him because he's dead! "

Have you ever heard about a girl who's not happy for her own wedding ? ...

Well that's Naina!

Naina - a Pretty girl forced in an arranged marriage by her step-mom for money ! Rajveer - Naina's Prince Charming supposed to be dead in a war at Leh

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So this was the prologue pls do give feedbacks ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi palak
M.following this in.watpad I have many parts I think
This is d same na which is in wat pad
Or m mixing something
BTW we elcm.to if as a writer :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rkchandni

Hi palak
M.following this in.watpad I have many parts I think
This is d same na which is in wat pad
Or m mixing something
BTW we elcm.to if as a writer :)



Thank you so much :) yes it is the same one on wattpad thought of starting with a ready one only ... thanks once again and also if u could help in letting ppl know about this story out here .. as there are hardly ppl who know me .. if u have friends on IF and you could tell them about the ss ... i would really appreciate :) 😊 😊 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

Naina,a pretty girl all decked up in a royal blue lehenga, sitting in front of the mirror , lost in her dreamland

She didn't recognize when her friend came inside her room ...

Waah! Shinghaar pe kya jaadu chadha hai...

Naina plastered a fake smile..

Waise mein ye batane aayi thi ki murat 2 Ghante bad ka hai.. to tum rest kar lo...Naina nodded in a yes and went inside her room...

Here Shalini,naina 's friend, called up someone...
"Where have u ppl reached ? ... only 2 hours are left "
Are don't worry shalini mam... akhri phere se pehle to hum puhunch hi jayenge...
Very funny ! But both rescued?
No, one of them... ek abhi bhi udhar hai...

But is he fine ?

Shalu mein aake answer karu pls ...

Ya ya ok! Come fast..

Hmm.. and they kept the phone..

In the car:-
A guy was sleeping behind because he had been injected.. who woke up suddenly because of a jerk.. he couldn't recognise anyone except chauhan.. (yes you'll are right , captain abhimanyu rai Chauhan )

Chauhan sahab! Kaha leke jaa rahe ho.. Aur ye log kaun hai...

Navin ye sab... Naina ke dost hai... academy ke last year cadets.. Aur hum naina ki shadi par jaa rahe hai!

Kya...?? Naina shaadi kar rahi hai... I'm so happy for her...

Nahi Navin! It's not something to be happy about.. actually vo...



*Flashback*
A week ago naina completed her final year exams and returned home after her mom died..sahil uncle (naina 's dad) got married again to a lady named saisha as he thought that naina needed a mother... but after few months sahil uncle died.. Saisha had no money to live upon so she forced naina to get married to Rahul; Amar Nanda's son, who's a business tycoon... Naina first refused to do so but then Saisha threatened her to death and now she has no option but to get married to Rahul... Rahul is a good guy , but according to naina ; he's only s a machine who knows how to work and work... but the point is that naina doesn't like him... so Saisha aunty called us and informed about naina ' s wedding... we were about to leave for her wedding when we got information about you and him.. so we decided to rescue you'll and then save Naina
*Flashback *
*Flashback ends *


I don't believe this!!
Navin couldn't say anything...

Navin ab sirf tum hi bacha sakte ho naina ko..

Umm.. Kya nam hai Inka.. yudi.. yudi right?.. yes sir! Yudi pls jaldi chalo...
Don't worry sir hum puhunch jayenge...


5 mins to go:-
Naina comes down where everyone is waiting...

Rohan looks at Naina and smiles. Naina ' s mind is wandering. Shalini makes naina sit besides Rohan.. and whispers in her ear..
"Naina few more minutes.. and everything will be fine.. trust me!!" And she leaves...

After hearing this naina was lost... she couldn't understand what was Shalini referring to...

Then the pandit declared for the murat of varmala...
Rohan is about to put the varmala when Navin entered ... [i know I'm sounding too filmy but that's me ... So bear it]
On hearing the voice saisha turns behind and is shocked to see Navin ... She has definitely never met him but she obviously has seen his picture
Navin couldn't walk properly but he moved forward... As he moved forward his eyes fell on Naina and Naina was speechless ... After seeing him, seeing his brother alive she wanted to laugh,cry hug him ,tell him about her life which was so distressful after he left her but all she could whisper was "Bhai" which didn't go unheard by Navin...

Navin ! Tum zinda ho? Asks saisha ...
Kya lagta hai Appko my new mother ... ?

Hello people. I'm Navin , Navin Singh Alluwalia, Naina ka Bhai aur Sahil Alluwalia ka beta ... Meri behn ki shadi ho rahi hai .. I should be happy ... But unfortunately I'm not ... I'm not happy because my sister isn't happy ! And my really sorry Mr. Amar but I won't let my sister get married to someone under pressure !

Mr.Amar- pressure .. What kind of pressure .. Saisha...

Are u opening your mouth my new step mom or should I ?

Saisha-- what are u talking about Navin ... Naina is really happy with this marriage... Aren't u Naina ?
Saisha looked at Naina with those daredevil eyes ...

Naina speak up dammit !! Said Navin looking at her with all expectations...

Mr Amar- Naina if u have been forced for this , I won't get you married to my son...

All this while Naina was just crying ...
And while sobbing .. I..I..don't want... to...get .. Get married ... And she cried more loudly ...

After hearing this , Rohan just left from there ...

Mr Amar- Saisha I never expected this from you... I am thankful to God that Navin reached here on time ... I'll see that you're sued Saisha ... I'll make it a point !!
And Mr. Amar left...

Navin just ran towards Naina , bent down and hugged her ... Shh Naina .. Aa Gaya hu mein na ... Slowly after some time when she stopped crying ... Was staring at Navin with questioning eyes ...

Jaanta hu.. Tumhare man mein buhut sawal hai is waqt.. Thoda intezar karo.. Sab bataonga...
Naina gave her an assuring smile... But still looking for an answer on her main question ...

Abhimanyu standing there saw her confusion and came there ...

Zinda hai vo Naina ... Zinda hai ...

That's it... All what she wanted ... Her life was back ... She got a reason to live again...! She didn't care now ... The only that she wanted was him ...!


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome start
loving it
continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6
CHAPTER 2

Naina jao jakar change karlo .. Hum thodi der bad niklenge...

Par Bhai ye Sab hua kaise..? I mean Rajveer sir ka to accident..!

Naina buhut lambi kahani hai .. Ek bar Rajveer ke paas puhunch jaaye.. Fir in dono ke muh se sun leyna...

Even though Naina wanted to know .. She was more than happy to know that he is alive ..! She's gonna see him in some hours ..!

After some time Naina came down in her casual clothes and all of them left for Shimla .. Yes you heard it right .. Rajveer was in Shimla .. When everyone was in the jeep ..

Naina was wondering .. In few hours she will be in front of Rajveer ..

"I think I should confess this time ..! I know he won't take the first step at all ..! The shy- guy!!!! But now I just can't afford a single moment without him .. Am I in love with him ..? Yes I am .. I am in love with you captain ..!!

And imagining the cute moments she kept her head on Pooja's shoulder and dozed of to sleep ...

After few hours they reached Shimla , Navin woke Naina up .. The car was climbing up a peak .. It was on the outskirts of Shimla .. A beautiful cottage ... Surrounded by a sense forest .. On the top of the peak .. The best view of nature one can get .. .. What else one wants ..! And to top it all Rajveer had named the house "GHAR" which skipped a beat of Naina' s heart ..!

*Flashback*

During kma times .. Naina and Rajveer were sitting on the stairs ..

"Sir agar mein aapse puchu.. Ki aap Ek din apni Sab duty chodke ke Kya karna chahenge to ? .. Ek din! After hearing this ..

Naina buhut late ho chuka hai .. Tumhe apne Kamre mein jana chahiye

"Uggh!! Sir bataye na pls ..."

Naina ... Mein ghar jana chahunga..kisi ko leke.. Looking towards Naina .. He left ...!

*Flashback ends *

As they enter inside , all of them sit in the main hall area .. While Shalini goes inside.. Checks Rajveer and tells him to come out .. ! Here every one are waiting for him .. Naina watches the house carefully .. She notices a small bar area .. Where she rests her hand and stands there .. Then Rajveer comes out of his room.. He has got stitches on his forehead on the right side .. He walked up slowly and first Chauhan hugged him tightly ..

Finally !! Kaise ho aap Chauhan Sahab ! I hope apne shadi kar li hai..
Kaha captain .. Pehle aapki baari hai .. Rajveer smiled at this and moved forward where yudi and Pooja were standing for him .. He hugged then affectionately .. Except Naina ..! She was still rooted there .. Staring at him .. Rajveer noticed that .. It's not that he minds it .. But then he'll have to control himself .. After everyone hugged him .. Rajveer's eyes fell on Naina .. Naina was staring at him .. Rajveer stared at her eyes back which showed all the pain ,tension, cry in her eyes ..
He broke the silence ..
Hello cadet .. Kaisi Hai ap?
Mein thik hu sir.. I hope aap thik hai .. Rajveer smiled back at her ..

Are sir ab to Hume story batao we are waiting for so long ..! Said yudi ..

Ji sir jaldi bata do isse pehle hum sab ki battery dead ho jaye .. ! (Obviously Pooja )

N- matlab?

Are.. Ise pehle hum Sab so jaaye .. Hume story jaani hai !

Naina- tumhe neend bhi aayegi?

Rajveer - kyu Naina ? Tumhe neend nahi aayegi?
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How is it going guys .. Do give feedbacks ..!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 3


Kyu naina tumhe neend nahi aayegi?

Naina keeps staring at rajveer on this question of his.. Navin could seem something fishy between both of them...

Chauhan: mein to kahani jaanta hu... aplog suniye mein khana leke aata hu..

Rajveer : ha aj ke liye hi lana padega kal grocery aa jayegi..

Navin : ok then sab baith jao

Yudi: ok before you'll start huda ka message aaya tha ki vo aur ali Kal tak puhunch jayenge aur aalekh aj raat tak aa jayega...

Navin : ok whoever they are... Ab suno
*flashback*

Navin... Tum sab raj ko bachane ke liye vaha puhunche... agar tum nahi aate to mein bacha leta.. par tumne mera kaam asan kar diya.. vo jeep mein meine hi bomb rakha tha.. Aur raj ko pata tha iske bare mein ... as the blast occurred raj gadi se utar gaya... although use kafi lagi thi.. after 2 months he started recovering well.. Aur fir humlog usi mission me lag gaye being underground.. Hum sab ko call karke batana chahte the... wapas KMA ana chahte the par agar hum aisa karte to kisi ke through un goons ko pata chal jata aur sab ki jan khatre mein aa jati isliye hum undercover hi rahe .. dhundte dhundte pata chala ki ye sab lala ji ne karwaya hai.. humare hosh hi udd gaye... Rajveer... Fir humne ek plan banaya .. humara ek friend gunny ki help Li aur lala ji ke baare mein confidential Khabre nikalwayi... fir hume pata chala ki unki border ke par kuch goons ke sath lala ji ki meeting thi.. .mein Navin aur gunny waha puhunche... humne kafi subut ek khata kiya aur nikalne hi wale the ki lala ji ne hume dekh Liya aur waha ek buhut bada rackass create ho gaya.. mein aur Navin un sab se lad rahe the to humne gunny ko bahar jakar madat lane ke liye kaha... vo gaya aur kisi tarah chauhan ko call lagaya.. sab samjaya aur phone rakha ki itne mein ek goon ne gunny par goli chalai aur vo.. (2 mins of silence railing ) Navin : then un logo ne hume trap kar liya.. the tumlog aye.. and you'll know the rest..

Naina: no! I don't know... Everyone smiles at that..

Pooja : are naina humne itna kuch bada kam nahi kiya hai... humari bahaduri ki kahani tum badme sun leyna.. And she gave a hi-fi to yudi.. Meanwhile chauhan sahab had brought the food... they all ate their food.. and went to their respective rooms...

The rooms were:
1- Naina and Pooja
2- chauhan - yudi- naveen
3- Rajveer ( Shalini had her own house here.. so she went back home at night ) but before that..

Shalini entered naina and Pooja 's room.. Pooja was having a bath while naina was lost in her thoughts... Umm.. Naina?

Oh doc Shalini aap ?

Ha vo cadet actually mein ghar vapas ja rahi thi.. par ek choti si problem hai...

Kya hua mam ?

Cadet vo rajveer ko dawaiyon ka ek dose dena hai ek Ghante bad.. Aur vo khud lega nahi kyunki.. Kyuki unhe dawaiyan kadwi lagti hai ...

janti hu mam.. don't worry mein khila dungi...

Shalini smiles at this and hands over the medicines to her and leaves.. but before leaving..

" cadet is bar batane mein zyaada der mat lagana "

She winks at Naina and leaves...

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How's it going guys ?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice story dear..
please update soon & pm me...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome updates
Loving the story
Continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kvrkdiwani

nice story dear..

please update soon & pm me...




Thank you so much:) sure. updating in few minutes 😊

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