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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Amazing.

It was both dark yet simplistic and reflected the character types well.

The language you possess is very easy to follow yet very descriptive. Kudos.

Niv

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Shivika-forever

@Shivika-forever

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Loved it
Beautiful
Please continue

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: swaram
That was very eloquently written. Loved how described every emotion, thought and action. Totally Loved it ! Do write more!👍🏼

Thanks a lot for your compliment.

Since this is my first work, I am grateful for your encouragement.

Niki

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Allyson
Wonderful os
I love brothers bonding fics

Thanks a lot. It is my first trial. Glad you liked it.

Niki

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: agreatperhaps
Amazing.
It was both dark yet simplistic and reflected the character types well.
The language you possess is very easy to follow yet very descriptive. Kudos.

Niv

Thanks a lot. I am glad you liked it.

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: .Poorva.
Beautiful.

Thanks a lot.

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Shivika-forever
Loved it
Beautiful
Please continue

Thanks. But this is an OS😳

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: cuteariya
superb OS
uff shivay hurt anika to the core 😡
just bcoz his mom show him video against anika 😡
I love the way om talk to shivay whatever he said was completely right 👏
can we get other part dear?
as want to know what anika will do?

Thanks a lot for your encouragement.

Om and Shivaay are such characters that their depth can give many angles. I love writing them,

Glad you liked it.

Niki

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Arshi67
You've captured the essence of the relationship the brothers share so beautifully. There is a profound understanding and respect between them that speaks of a deep bond.
Loved how you had the very elegant Jhanvi rooting for them.

Thanks a bunch for your encouragement.

I like Jhanvi in that manner too where she actually supports them.

Niki

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