Khotey Sikkey One shot...

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Guys I dont know how many of you remember this show which aired in sony entertainment television...It was called Khotey Sikkey, it was about five spoilt brats who start solving crime after they come close to a certain headstrong, hard handed and fustrated Inspector Deshmukh and we atch them solve intriguing cases while Deshmukh turns mentor for them...they change and become successful in their lived getting the much needed guidance and experience...My OS will be set after its last episode...if you all would like to read it I shall write...I will be giving brief overview of everything but would be better if you watched the last part of last episode before reading the ff...so pls tell if you wanna read it cuz I badly wanna write it...
PS: Its one of my favourite crme dramas...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I wanna read it... plz continue...
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Ya i saw that serial but forgot all characters name only remembered inspector deshmukh and girl who take drugs in starting all called her dil but in show I want her to pair with that guy who want to became police officer and his girlfriend in hospital I likd all characters plz continue if possible can u show dil pair with that guy in ur story if possible don't change your story line bcoz I requested if possible then eagerly waiting for updates
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Ok as I found out that u guys wanna read it 👏😊😊 so I am posting the preface, the actual story is in the next post pls read that decide if this should remain a OS or become a ff.
First of all guys this is just a OS which has the potential to develop in a complete story but I will start with this one shot for now.
But, character description first...
The story starts with 5 spoilt good for nothing brats bieng arested for petty crimes. All these crimes were either caused due to their blind anger or a call for attention. They come to the lock up of a fustrated, headstrong, tough cop Inspector Deshmukh who was fed up of struggling with the corrupt and inhuman ways of the rich society. The motives for which rich people would commit henious crimes were out of his understanding, more over gathering information from them was a challenge as they had no respect for law and order. While dealing with the case and seeing these 5 Mohit Kishenchandani, Hameer Rizvi, Uttara Bakshi, Dilnaz Shroff and Ayush Khetrapal in his lock up, he forces them to help him in the case. He does not let them contact home, and threatens to send them to Arthur road jail. They help him in this case and so it starts. Slowly this guys come to terms with harsh realities of society and find out that they just needed guidance and someone who would scold them if they were wrong they found this man in Inspector Deshmukh. They solve cases and bond together though inspector Deshmukh never shows his concern openly but it is seen in his harsh instruction to keep away from something in which he fears they might get hurt, and the fact that he refers to this five as "bachche" or "mere bachche." These 5 call themselves Khotey Sikkey and learn to respect Deshmukh as their mentor. After solving 20 cases, at last they break their alliance (alliance not friendship). And it is shown that they now try their hand at mainstream lines and become successful.
CHARACTER SKETCHES:

Vikas Kumar as Inspector Damodar Deshmukh




He is the one who assembled the five. He is a tough cop somewhat fustrated with the system. Though he never shows openly but he develops a deep care for his Khotey Sikkey, his care shown in his harsh scoldings and his urge to protect them. He is honest, intelligent and diligent, his colleauges Godombe and Kadam are jealous of him. He is the one responsible for putting Khotey Sikkey on track. He speaks in Marathi and totally pan marathhi police officer.

Adhyay Bakshi as sub-inspector Patil:

He is the funny sub-ordinate of Deshmukh. He is honest but somewhat with funny antics. He is a great information network. He is great friends with the Khotey Sikkay, and referred as the trump card by Deshmukh (he called the Khotey sikkey ek pack mein paanch ikkey i.e five aces in one pack). He is always scolded by Deshmukh for getting drawn into the antics of the five.

Puru Chibber as Hameer Rizvi:


He is the younger son of Rizvi's the owner of Rizvi pharmaceutical, the leading pharmaceuticla company of India. He is the charmer and can swoon any girl head over hills, but he is mad for only one Uttara Bakshi. He is a lively young guy, with a pleasant nature. He is arrested at the start of the show he is arrested for stealing money from one of his girlfriends house, he did this to pay of some money he lost in gambling. He stole so that his father's and brother's attention would come to him but he ended up in Deshmukh's lock up with the others. He ends up finding a mentor in Deshmukh and true friendship in the Khotey Sikkey. He is intelligent and charming and utilizes this charm to extract information in cases. At the end of the show, he is engaged to Uttara, and has taken over Rizvi Pharmaceuticals making it the leading pharma in Asia.

Sukhmani Sadana as Uttara Bakshi:

Bieng the sister of superstar Vivan Bakshi, Uttara herself aspired to be a model. But Vivan who wants nothing to tarnish his image wants to keep his sister away from fashion world. He refuses to understand her and with their parents dead they share a strained relationship. After a fight over this issue Uttara burns one of her brother's film poster and ends up in lock up with the others. As they start solving cases she is named "aristrocat" by Deshmukh's sub-ordinate Patil and they soon discover that she can retrieve any information without letting the other person know she is doing so. She is initially shown to be rude and arrogant but soon we discover that its just her upper shell. She finds her love in Hameer and true friends in Mohit, Dilnaaz and Ayush. She respects Deshmukh and finds an anchor in him. After supporting her brother through a case where he is accused of forcing a girl to suicide, her and her brothers relationship improves. At the end of the shoe she is Hameer's fiance and India's top super model.

Mark Parekh as Ayush Khetarpal:

He is the son of a rich garment exporter. He has no interest in his father's bussiness, and is a top class hacker. He is arrested by an undercover cop looking out for juvenilr hackers. He too like the others crave for his family's attention. He also comes to the same lock up. As they solve cases he connects romantically with Dilnaaz and is the joker of the team. He is half crack as he keeps on chattering in technical language but is a genius when it comes to computer. He digitalizes all criminal database for the poice. He is loved by his friends and Deshmukh. At the end he is show to have a start-up, in an old shed (where Khotey Shikkey used to solve crime), where he and his employs start an ethical hacking bussiness. He works with government and is one of the youngest millionares of the nation.

Dilkush Reporter as Dilnaaz Shroff:

She is daughter of a rich Parsi bussinessman. She is a wonderful shooter, and a bit tomboyish but deep down she is a sweet and caring person. In a bis to call her family's attention she fires a menequin ina shop and arrested for that. She ends up with the other Sikkas. She bonds with them and Ayush is attracted to her. She has a patent dialogue, "Whats the plan?" In the course of time it is discovered that she had once been into drugs, and she vlunteers to face the horrors again to track doen the drug mafia. She also in order to find her maids son leads the team to a child trafficking racket. At the end of the show, she is shownt to become a proffesional shooter winning silver medal in national games, but she returns unsatisfied as it his her habit to be the best.

Hasan Zaidi as Mohit Kishenchandani:
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He is the son of the owner of Kishenchandani group industries. He is fed up with his families, fake love, his mother who has no time for him or father who never tried to understand him. His girlfriend Tanya is the only one who is a sense of support. He turns to alcohol to get rid of his oain. On his burthday (which is completely ignired by his parents) he is driving completely drink and angry, his car collides with a tree as a result of which Tanya who is with him slips into coma, while he is arrested. He ends up with the others in lock up. While solving cases he finds the love he was looking fr in his friends. He finds a brother in Hameer and a father figure in inspector Deshmukh. He is a really good detective. And his tagline is "Rock and role" At the end of the show, Tanya recovers from coma, and Mohit is said to be preparing for IPS.

Link to first episode:

Link to last episode:

You will find all episodes on these links if wanna watch them.

This show was mainly a crime drama, and its realistic dialogues and aproach nailed the show. But it also had an underlying theme of how these spoilt brats, when fornd support and care changed for good. OS is in the next post, read it tell me that should become an FF Khotey Sikkey season 2...




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Guys I tried uploading photos but its not bieng uploaded can any body help plss...
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Superb waiting for updates and I really want 2nd season but same cast
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Originally posted by: sheetal1979

Superb waiting for updates and I really want 2nd season but same cast

Of course it will have the same cast

but can any body tell me how to post cast photos...
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awesome cs
waiting for an update

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Originally posted by: livelyandlovely

Of course it will have the same cast

but can any body tell me how to post cast photos...

sorry dear no idea
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Chap 1: The new ACP

The story begins about 1 and 1/2 years after the end of season 1. The sikkas were well settled in their respective fields now, and Deshmukh was as busy with his cases. He was in touch with the sikkey, only Mohit had lost contact with him from the past year. He sometimes wondered why Mohit never tried to contact him, but his nature did not allow him to find that out, he preferred to appear emotion less. The others were in his regular contact, but in the depth of his heart Deshmukh was afraid that Mohit had again been drawn into the web of alcoholism by the whims of his posh society. He had tried Mohit's address but Mohit was out of Mumbai for past 1 year. The others were still as attatched to him, they would invite him to their parties knowing fully well he would refuse. He never missed one game of Dilnaz, though Dil would never know that. He knew when Hameer or Uttara were out of country, he kept himself informed of their whereabouts, so that all thoses people they had hunted in the past dont ever come near harming them. Ayush worked with the police in cracking numerous cyber crimes so Deshmukh generally met him quite often, and to tell the truth his non-stop chatter was something Deshmukh openly scolded him for, but secretly he loved it. Recently Dilnaaz had also started working with the cops as the ammunition expert. But he didnt know if Mohit was in contact with them also.
Today was a busy day at the police station. A new ACP was arriving today, commissioner had asked Deshmukh to escort him from the Airport. The rumors had that he was a really rough young man. "Ek aur aa gaya mereko pakane" Deshmukh thought "Pata nahi yeh saala kitna bara chor hoga" He was hurrying with his official files, he shouldnt be late at least. As he was about to leave for the airport, when suddenly his phone ringed. He picked up the phone to hear Hameer's panicked voice from other side "Sir jaldi ajaiye" he huffed "Main aur Uttara..." "Hameer santi se bata kya hua" Deshmukh asked "Kaha hai tumlog?" "Sir wo main aur Uttara ek admi ko kuch dinon se dekh rahe thhe pub main, humein shak thha ki wo drug dealer hai isiliye hum uska pichha karte huye paradise hotel aaye" Hameer said "Hum abhi wahi hai" "Saala tum logon ko maine kitni baar mana kiya hai par nahi mera baat kaha sunte ho kabhi" Deshmukh said "Thrill chahiye tum logon ko humesha, Khotey ho khotey hi rahoge, wahi ruko main aata hun" The new ACP completely out of his mind, he rushed his car to paradise hotel. But as soon as he entered a waiter walked upto him "Inspector Deshmukh?" he asked, Deshmukh nodded in response "this way sir" he led him to room no. 312. Deshmukh now was a little angry, as he knew most probably the five had again planned a prank for him, four he corrected himself, Mohit wont be there. But he still entered the room, it was always possible that the dealer had caught them and now wanted him. He had his gun at ready as he kicked the door open. As he kicked the door open, and entered the room, it was pitch dark. Suddenly a two lights went on, one focussed on him and the other on a birthday cake. It was in shape of a coin, with a hole in between, like a Khota sikka. He shaked his head in a fed up manner, he might forget his birthday but these kids never will. And as predicted the four of them, came out of the shadows singing happy birthday. "Saala tumolog mera time khoti karne ke alava aur kuchh kyun nahi karte" he said angrily "Tum logon ko bhi toh kaam hai, pan nahi mere dimag kharab nahi karke tum logon ka khana kaha hazam hota hai." "Sir aap fursat se daant lagaiye," Hameer said "par pehle cake kaatiye pls" "Main jaa raha hun" Deshmukh "Mujhe apne naye ACP ko welcome karna hai, cake tum log hi khao" He rushed out in anger and started his car, towards the airport. "Inki vajah se muhe sunna parega ab" he thought, but still he wondered why did they call him in a hotel so far from the city,they had wished him b'days in past but generally in some smaller hotel, what was special today. Seeing Deshmukh's car leave, Dilnaz said "Yeh kya, sir ne toh cake kaata hi nai.." her voice complaining. "Toh kya hua Dil" Hameer said "Sir ka asli gift toh pahunch gaya hoga. " "Aur use dekhtey hi unke hosh urr jaayenge" Ayush said. And they smiled, a sinister smile of success. And they left in a car.
Deshmukh reached airport but as he stood their with the plaque reading "welcome the new ACP" his phone ringed again. This time it was Patil "Sir jaldi aiye" he said in a strained voice "Naye ACP sir pahunch gaye hain, wo kahte hai aap unhe lene hi nahi aaye." Deshmukh again sped towards the police station, as he entered he saw the atmosphere of the room was quite. The effect of the new ACP he thought. "Sir" Patil said "Unhone aapko bulaya hai" Patil said pointing towards the cabin. Deshmukh walked upto the room, with a murderous glance at the gleeful face of Kadam. The kids were so in trouble he thought but first he needed to deal with the new ACP.
As he entered the room he saw that the new ACP was seating with his back to the door. "Aiye inspector Deshmukh" he said "Subah apko aisa kya kaam aaya ki ap apne naye ACP ko welcome tak karne nahi aaye" his voice was horse. "Wo sir main ek zaruri kaam.." Deshmukh started only to be interrupted by the ACP. "Paradise hotel mein aapko kya zaruri kaam thha?" he asked "Yaa raison ki party thhi" "Aapko paradise hotel ke bare mein kaise paata" Deshmukh asked "I am a police officer, Inspector" ACP said "I have to stay informed, khair aapka track record itna achcha hai ki main yeh nahi maanta ki aap waha koi ghush khane gaye honge, waise inspector Kadam ki yahi rai thhi." "Saala Kadam" Deshmukh muttured "Sir asal main ek lead mili thhi par wo galat nikli" he said aloud "Khair aapko ek maafi nama toh dena hi hoga" ACP said "baithiye, abhi likh ke muhe dijiye." Feeling like a school student, he sat down and took a pen and paper. He felt really angry on the kids and also somewhat on the new ACP. He wrote down the apology letter, making it short and proffesional. Once the sound of rubbing of his pen stopped, "Hogaya?" the ACP asked, "main adress batata hun, pls adress the letter." "Jee, Sir" Deshmukh said his voice totally irritated. "Likhiye, To the , ACP of mumbai police" ACP said, Deshmukh kept on writing, "ACP..." "Sir aapka koi naam bhi hai?" Deshmukh asked irritated with the drama, who did he think he was, his voice sounded so horse yet familiar. He was still sitting with his back to Deshmukh not even gracing him with a look. "Haan" he said "likhiye, ACP MOHIT KISHANCHANDANI..." the horse voice also became normal with the last words, and Deshmukh stood up startled, hearing the name and recognising the voice. "Kya?" he said. The chair flipped around, to reveal that intense handsome face of Mohit, "Rock and roll" he said, with that swaggy one sided green, and suddenly the other four also came out of the adjacent room with a grin plastered on their faces and stood beside Mohit. "Yeh kya mazak hai mohit?" he said really angry now "Aur itna dinon se tuh kaha thha" "Mazak nahi hai sir" Mohit said standing up and grinning ear to ear, he was wearing a brabd new police uniform without the cap and stars "Yeh dekhiye" He handed him his badge. It had his photo, and clearly read ACP Mohit Kishanchandani. "Aur sir aap puchh rahe thhe na Mohit kaha thha" Hameer said "Wo Delhi mein thha" "IPS ki training kar raha thha sir" Uttara said. "And he passed top of his batch" Ayush said. "Aur phir direct posting to Mumbai, wo bhi aapke area mein." Dilnaz said pride was evident in all their voices. The last of their Khotey sikkey gang had aced the exam of life. Deshmukh looked at the 5, his heart was swelling with pride, it felt as though it would burst with happiness. For the first time he wished that he could show his emotions better. But the 5 did not need him to speak, they read it in those tough eyes, they knew their Desi Sir cared for them, more than anyone had ever done. "Yaha aa" he called Mohit. All the five walked round the table to him, Mohit stood in front of him. "Tere stars aur topi kaha hai" Deshmukh asked, all of his anger was now gone but roughness and suspicion were his habit. "Sir wo" Mohit looked a little embarassed now "wo main chahta thha ki...I wanted that...maine stars aur topi isiliye nahi pahni cuz I wanted you to put them on me, because you are my role model, varna police main aata hi nahi. So if you will, agar aap chaahe toh" He produced the star and the cap. Deshmukh took them, he put the star on Mohit's shoulder, and made him wear the cap. It was a moment to behold. Mohit who knew his parents did not care for what he was, nor would they like a police officer's son. But he could see that he had made Deshmukh proud. Deshmukh who never had children as he did never marry, but he could not help feeling like a proud father today looking at the HIS khotey sikkey. "Par itne dinon tu koi contact mein nahi thha" Deshmukh said "Aur tumlog, jaante the yeh kaha hai, phir bhi achha natak kiya" "Sir inhe maine hi mana kiya tha" Mohit said "Pehli bar iss vardhi mein aapko suprise dena chahta thha. Aur jab mujhe pata chala ki meri posting yaha hine waali hai toh maine jaan bujhke aapni joining ek month delay karvayi taaki aapke birthday ke din aa saku. And iss natak kiya taaki aap ko suprise kar saku. So how did you like the birthday gift sir?" Mohit asked pointing to himself. "Bohot achcha" Deshmukh said, looking at him from top to bottom. "Aur waise SIR yeh aapka maafi nama" Deshmukh said handing the letter to Mohit. "Sir aap bhi" Mohit said "Aise hi Patil aatey hi pichhe par gaya" "Maine kya kiya sir" Patil said chosing that moment to enter "Ab naye ACP hai..." "Paatil kya yaar tum bhi" Mohit said. All started laughing. "Waise sir" Hameer said "Ab toh Dil, Aayush and Mohit tino ap hi ke saath kaam karte hain, ab mujhe aur Uttara ko bhi bula hi lijiye. Pls sir" "Thhik hai" Deshmukh said "Waise bhi main mana karunga toh bhi tum log kaha sunoge, dekhta hun agle case mein. Waise mujhe ACP sahb se baat karni paregi. Kyun sir hum karein inhe include" He said turning to Mohit "Sir pls sir" Mohit said pleading "Achcha accha thhik hai" He said hitting Mohit on the side of his head. "Sir ab toh cake kaatenge na" Dil asked, as Aayush brought the cake from other room. Deshmukh blew the candles and cut the cake, they did not sing as that would get Kadam suspicious and they did not want him here. "Waise sir" Hameer said "I am serious about getting back. Pls sir." "Arey thhik hai bola na main, zyasti pareshan mat kar." he said "Next case mein dekhta hun, koi case toh aaye tab toh solve karoge" "Matlab friends, hum fir honge heroes." Aayush said. "Aa" Mohit said "Tuh thha bhi nahi, aur hoga bhi nahi" All laughed. And so it began again, the Khotey Sikkey back in action...

Here is it the update...I thoroughly enjoyed writing it, reliving the khotey sikkey...hope you also Enjoy it. Don't forget to read and review.
Love all my readers
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