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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Hey guyz!!! Sorry for dissapearing...but a series of problems cropped up so really sorry...here is an update...pls read and review..
Chap 7: Did it go wrong...

The morning was busy in shed...everyone was really pumped up about the plan. There was lot to be prepared for.
Hameer: Dil, scared?
Dil: Ha scared my foot, us ko toh main kal bataungi, saala mujhpe line marta hai.
Mohit: Nahi Dil, keep him engaged usse samajhne do ki u have fallen for his charm.
Dil: Haa Mohit I get that.
Uttara: Dil pls keep still na yaar, camera thhikse lagane de...aayush dekh signal aa raha hai
Ayush: Yes boss...pura clear picture hai...
Mohit: Camera GPS tracker bhi hai...lekin Hameer...tereko abhi tak koi call kyun nahi aaya?\
Hameer: Samajh nahi aa raha...shayad ladkiyon ke gayab hone ke baad aayega...
Desi: Shayad tu hi sahi...Lekin Dilnaaz bohot sambhalke...unko ratti bhar bhi bhanak nahi lagni chahiye ki tu police ke saath hai...samjhla...aur tere ko bhi Hameer...
Hameer and Dil: Yes sir (With a bored expression)
Mohit: Ok, Dil ki dress ready hai...
Uttara: Yeah..
Mohit: Hameer, hopefully woh tujhe phone karein...Varna problem hai...kyun ki humare aane tak you have to keep them engaged...
Desi: Aur Dilnaaz and Hameer, humare aane tak koi pagalpan mat karna...
Dil: Of course, sir..
Ayush: Ok saari tayyari ho gayi...so lets break up for now..
Mohit: Yeah shyam mein milte hain...
Hameer: Ok...agar tu aa paya toh..
Mohit: Arey aaj toh ana hi hai...kal showdown jo hai...

Next day, Raikhali jungles, Raichand resort:

A normal party, the likes that goes on in the fashion circles...where coordinators brings new models, to get them introduced to designers. But the only strange thing was the only person here was Mr.Raichand, who did own a very famous clothing line, but he wasnt a designer...he just owned the line. Dilnaaz behaved normally, but her sharp eyes were all over the place. 15 girls in total including her, she knew 8 of them, Varun ke through he pehchan hui hai, but 3 toh koi influential gharon se hai and the rest 5 are from Mumbai only, they stay with their family...so that rules them out... so 6 left excluding her. Varun was aproaching her...that leach she thought...
Varun: Hey gorgeous, looking beautiful today...
Dil put on a flirty smile and replied: Common...
Varun: Arey sachchi, aur yeh main nahi Mr.Raichand keh rahe hain...he wants to sign you for the launch of his new collection...
Dil (jumping with fake excitement): Really, sirf main...
Varun: Well, you and two more girls...tum teeno ko party ke baad rukna parega...its a huge break...
Dil: Of course rukungi...this is the best day of my life...
Varun left, Dil's heart was beating fast...so she was their target now...but what now, had the sikkas seen this...

Shed:

Ayush had been glued to the monitor, and had seen Varun aproaching Dil, the speaker in the camera was weak but Varun was so close that he could make out the gist roughly...and it was that...Dil was the bait, he called Mohit...
Raichad resorts, Raikhali:
The party had almost ended, the last of the few other girls left, except the three.
Raichand: Congratulation girls...after this contract you will be huge...
The girls smiled happily at each other...
Varun: Sir isi baat pe champaign toh banta hain...in ladies ke naam..
Raichand nodded.
"Ho na ho, isi champaign mein yeh kuchh milane waala hai. I have to somehow find a way to not to drink it" Dilnaaz thought.
The drinks came round. Dilnaz and the girls accepted the champaign, it was white expensive champaign...looked almost like water. Dil took her bid, she excused herself to the toilet and casually carried the glass with her. There she drained the glass, and filled it with water. Then she walked out casually, taking little swigs from the glass.
Varun: Want another shot babe?
Dil: No, I dont wanna get drunk tonight...
Suddenly one girl fell down, Dil knew she needed to act.
Dil:Arey usse kya...aahhh
Dil fell down and acted unconscious. And then the third girl. Then Varun threw away their phones. He called for some associates and they carried the girls to a truck. As they carried the second girl, Dil opened her eyes just enough to see their faces. But varun was sharp his eyes caught her act.
Varun: Ohh toh tum behosh nahi hui...humare saath game haan...get up.
Dil:You will be dead very soon, loser..
Varun: Yeah...but no actually you will be sent abroad...as a concubine of a rich sheikh...pehle tumhe search to karlu...pata nahi koi tracker ho..
Varun searched Dilnaaz and found the camera...
Varun: ohh recorder...lets break it...
Dil:No..
Varun: yess babe...well ab tum behosh nahi hui...toh ek dose LSD de dete hain...waise bhi tum behoshi se zyada madhoshi mein achhi lagti ho...
Varun broke the camera.

In shed:

Ayush watched the screen go blank. His heart was jumping out of his chest. The plan just got jeopardized. He reached for his phone and in a frenzy he called Deshmukh.
Ayush(his voice quivering): Sir..
Desi: Ayush kya baat hai?
Ayush: Sir Dilnaaz is in trouble...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Superb update
oh no varun caught dil.
hope she will be fine
hope desi sir and everyone reach there fast
thanks for the update
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Oh no dil caught hope she will fine soon desi and khotey sikkey came and save her eagerly waiting for nxt dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Guys this is the penultimate chapter of the story...pls read and review quickly...and all those people who review thank you so much...specially sheetal1979 and Shah10 thanks for being with me from the very first update of this story...
KS_Minion where have you disappeared pls come back, read and review...
And to all those silent readers who read and don't review...thanks a lot to you to (But pls try to review it feels good)...
So next chap will be last of this story...pls read and tell me how you like it...
Love all of you guys

Chap 8: The final show down...

Hameer, Uttara, Mohit and Deshmukh arrived as fast as they could. Ayush was almost having an panic attack but still he tried to track Varun's phone...but it was static at Raikhali jungle...he probably had left it there purposefully. Deshmukh placed a supportive hand on his shoulder.
Desi: Ayush! Kya huya?
Ayush: Wo sir...Main baithha thha..sb thhik thha... then that guy he saw...Dil...
Mohit: Ayush calm down... Yeh le have some water...ab thhik se bata...ek kam kar video dikha de
Uttara: Ayush Dil ko kuchh naho hoga, we will find her..
Deshmukh(in a harsh tone): Ayush...
Ayush played the video...all were shocked...Deshmukh was seeing his worst fears...whenever the five had worked with him right from initial cases where he was forcing them to work their safety had always been his concern...first it was his obligation but slowly it had becoe more than that...later whenever any of the five had got hurt he had discovered that he was scared that something would happen to them...and today Dil was with these people...who treated girls like objects...his anger was building up..but he needed to stay calm and act detatched like he always had done...
The others were also a bit overcome by shock...some how Hameer found his voice
Hameer: Ab main kya karu?
Ayush: Matlab?
Hameer: Mr. Raichd ka message aaya thha...he has asked me too wait near his office, aur waha se he will pick me up aur hum koi secret location pe ja rahe hain..so ab main kya karu..
Deshmukh: Tuh zaroor jayega, ab sab kuchh tere pe hai...yeh case aur Dilnaaz ka zindagi...
Mohit: Hum tujhe follow karenge...Dilnaz ko dekhtey hi tum hume koi signal de doge, one miss call anything...
Hameer: OK
Deshmukh: Hameer, bohot sambhalke sirf tera nahi Dilnaaz aur saari ladkiyon ka jaan tujh par hai...wo aur bhi chaukanne honge...unko zara bhi bhanak nahi lagna chahiye...
Hameer: Ji...ji sir
Ayush: Main tera phone continuos tracking pe daal raha hun, and tere ghari mein bhi ek gps laga raha hun...and tera wo jacket pehen ke jaana jiske cuffling pe mic hai...
Mohit: Hameer, tujhe thheek se karna hi parega...
Hameer: Yeah ok...mujhe nikalna parega...
Desi: Uttara tu yahi ruk...Mohit, Ayush chal mere saath..
Uttara: sir main yaaha nahi rukungi..
Desi: Uttara orders lena sikh..
Uttara: Itne saalon mein nahi sikha toh aaj bhi na sahi...pls sir main chalungi..
Desi: Thheek hai...Hameer tu nikal..hum tujhe follow karenge..
Hameer went Raichad's office and waited near the parking lot...while the others waited at the cross road waiting to follow them, they cant risk bieng spotted.
A car came and stopped near Hameer, and Hameer getting that it was for him went in. There was just a driver inside.
The car started towards their destination, it went straight from the cross road and went on the highway. After about 2km the car turned left to an isolated kachcha road.
Deshmukh and company were following the car until it turned the kachcha road, but as soon as Deshmukh saw the car turning..
Desi: Aarey yeh toh raikhali ki taraf hi jaa rahe hain...Mohit yaaha mat ghumna woh log samajh jaayenge aagey jaa ke ek aur kachcha rasta hai...Aayush tu trace karta rah
Mohit turned on the next kachcha road.
Uttara: Sir yeh zarur samundar paas kahi dera lagayenge...oh my god Raichad ke resort se jungle ke andar se yeh log docks tak pahunch sakte hain...
Desi: Sahi soch rahi hai tu Uttara...
Mohit: Sir back up bula lijiye..fast
Desi: Haan
Mohit drove towards Raichad's resort...Deshmukh called Patil..
Mohit: Par yeh resort mai ladkiyon ko toh nahi rakh sakta...
Aayush: Shayad koi basement hoga waaha rakhenge actually shayad yahi hai kyunki Hameer ke gps ka signal weak ho gaya hai...and he is within 30m radius...
Desi: Mohit gaari rok...hume bohot sambhalke andar jaana hoga...
Aayush: Sir Hameer ne cuffling ka camera on kar diya..
Hameer on the other hand went in the resort and from there he was taken to the managers room where the went down a trap door to a basement. In the basement, he saw 2 boxes of diamond and 20 girls all were tied up and scared, but where was Dilnaaz.
Raichad was seating on a chair.
Raichad: Aiye Mr. Rizvi kaise lagi aapko yeh titliyan?
Hameer(putting on his facade): Kamal ki..
Varun: Titliyan toh dekh li aaiye aapko ek junglee billee se milaun...le aao use...
Two men brought in Dilnaaz, she was battered and drugged by some halucinogen as her eyes were open yet lifeless. Hameer cursed under breath.
Here outside, Deshmukh's blood boiled when he saw the girls, all with the innocence of their youth...and then when they brought in Dilnaaz, what he felt was pure hatred, how dare they touch his child...Mohit, Aayush, Uttara were almost horrified...
Mohit: Sir hume dheere dheere andar jaana parega..
Desi: Uttara, Ayush yahi ruko...mujhe koi behas nahi chahiye...force aane pe Patil ko lekar andar aana
They entered the resort premises stealthily, hiding from the eyes of the gaurds...they croped up behind the two gaurds in front of the manager office door and knocked them unconscious. In the managers office Mohit tapped on the trap door thrice...three sharp knocks. And then both Mohit and Deshmukh hid behind the curtain, there was just one man in the passage and two in the room they needed to get rid of this one guy first. Hearing the sharp knocks this one guy came up to check what was wrong no ones supposed to be in this hotel now. As soon as he came up, Deshmukh sprang at him and threw him aside. Mohit and Deshmukh went down the trapdoor. They stealthily cropped in and waited near the door. They heard Hameer conversing with the two.
Varun: Iss billi ko masal ke maar dete hai. Waise bhi mujhe isse masalne mein bara maza aayega..
Hameer: Isse humara niksaan hai, ye police ho ya reporter hume isse bech dena chahiye...
Raichad: Mr. Hameer is right..
Varun: Issne humara chehra dekh liya hai...
"Sirf isne nahi police nebhi..." Deshmukh and Mohit walked in...their guns pointed at Raichad and Varun...Hameer siezed his chance and promptly opened the ties of the girls...
Hameer: Jao...go through the trap door...upar humare saathi milenge...waha wait karo hum tumhe tumhare ghar pohucha denge
Desi: Hameer tu bhi nikal...
Hameer: Nahi sir Dil Mohit aur aapko liye bina main nahi jaaunga...
Raichad: Mr. Rizvi aap in kaminey police officers ke saath...
Mohit: Mind your language Raichad..
Raichad: Aur Mohit tum bhi...
Mohit: Mohit nahi ACP Mohit Kishanchandani...and your games over..
But suddenly Varun who was slowly slinking towards the wall...cut a sudden rope and an anchor swung towards Mohit, Mohit dived to save himself but lost his balance and his gun fell out of his hand...and taking chance of this commotion the goons drew out their guns. Mohit and Deshmukh rolled to avoid gire and his behind drums...while Hameer dragged Dil behind a box to stay safe.
Deshmukh knew Hameer and Dilnaaz were in danger, they were unarmed. The fight raged...Mohit shot one on leg. Deshmukh taking Mohits cover fire ran to the still unconcious Dil and Hameer. And gaurding them he started firing at the other guy...while Mohit shot at Mr. Raichad's leg who was trying to run. Suddenly Deshmukh heard a chilling shout, Mohit has been shot by Varun near his chest. Seeing Mohit Deshmukh lost his mind, he blindly shot at Varun's hand making him lose his gun...he then rushed to Varun and started beating him.
Desi: Saala ladkiyon ko bechta hai...aapne aapko bara mard samajhta hai...teri Mardaangi yahi nikal dunga...
He kept on beating Varun, while Hameer cradling Mohit's head tried contacting Ayush. Deshmukh had beat Varun half dead, when someone grabbed him from back refraining him from Varun. Patil had come with force, and two officers had arrested Raichad.
Patil: Chhod dijiye sir mar jaayega..
Desi: Patil choda mujhe..
Patil: Sir Mohit, Dilnaaz...unhe hospital...
This calmed Deshmukh down, he walked back to Mohit and sank to his knees checkin for pulse...yes his heart was still beating..the ward boys came in and carfelly carried Mohit and Dilnaaz back to the ambulance...while Deshmukh and others followed. These five had risked their everything again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Superb dear well written u described each and every part beautifully fab narration u done great job I luvd it a lot and thanx to u for gave such superb short congrats and waiting for nxt
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Superb story!👏👏 I love detective stories. This one is very good.
Sorry for late reply. Actually I was having my exams and class tests so could not open IF.
Feeling sad for Mohit and Dil😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ShreejataD.

Superb story!👏👏 I love detective stories. This one is very good.

Sorry for late reply. Actually I was having my exams and class tests so could not open IF.
Feeling sad for Mohit and Dil😭

Its good to have you back dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Superb update
hope mohit and dil will be fine
do continue plz
waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Hey Tani, is that you?
Do you remember me?
I'm Anna, was in Ipkknd Forum long ago. I used the name 'Annathomas' there.

Are you the same?////////

let me know.

Love
Anna

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