MaNanFS:Coz Mama am In Love With a Criminal..!Chp5(Last)/PG116/12-JAN - Page 91

I read all the chapters in one go

U make me cry

update was awesome
loved harshad ki pitayi very much😆
bada hi beghairat insaan nikla harshad goli lagne k baad bhi nahi mara😡
but harshad killed nandini's mom too😔
manik was always there to protect nandini but he was unable o protect her mother
nandini's pain was well described
finally manan got married😊
mayur convo with his grannies was awesome...they still remembered their mothers as no one can take their place😊
nice story loved it
take care
keep smiling😊
and keep writing😉

Ty for d pm...

It was jst fab... i really never wnted it to end itni jldi bt still.. its ok.. m sure u'l come up wid more.. dis whole story ws very xciting and intrsting one.. every tym i used to b vry eagr to knw wats nxt? Heheee... i srsly luvd it.. nd d ending ws also minblowing... amazing.. nandu's mum too died nd manan wer d only one fr each odr in dis world.. nd dey wer so madly in love..
Luvd d fyting scene lyk manik ki hero wali entry.. nd dt jerkshd hw dare he slap her... ache se dhulai kri manik ne..heheee..nd nandu ws so scared n stnding der n praying fr manik...so lovely.. nd den at last manik won..bt dt jerkshad usne piche se shoot kia.. looser.. nd nandu ki mum came..nd saved manik... nd d way she gav him d responsibility of nandu nd nandu crying so badly fr her mum..dt ws really vry emotionl one.. nd manik controlled nandu by hugging her.aww...nd he ws der fr her nw.. Nd nandu wsin trauma nd manik hlped her in recovring n his unconditional love hlped her ofcourse... the feeling dt ur luvd one is wid u always isd best thing evr... i really luvd der bond..frm fyting n ignoring nandu to d kiss n again made her away frm him..nd den again dey met n lived d beautiful momnts to again pain n seperation nd den finally being togethr forevr.. was jst bravo... awesm it ws.. hatsoff yrrr... u wer too gud jst suprb.. luv yaaa loads..
Den aftr marriage chotu sa romance nd der son mayur... aww he ws really adorable..his tlks to his grannies ws supr cute nd manan wer living a happy life.. all wer happy infct grannies too... :) it ws jst aperfct ending.. i really luvd it... all d prts wer freaking awesm.. i'l miss dis one too... thnks fr al d pms too.. u r best fr me really... nd m really sorry fr being sch a bad reader m nevet on tym dese days na.. m sholly.. aysha is very sorry mawara scchi... bt its al bcz of ending of session tym n lots of pressure of studies... cnt xplain.. i hope u knws really well abt dis :) i havnt read dheere dheere frm soo long..m shollyyy i'l surely read it n cmmnt lmbaaa too... till den 'l b waaaiiitttiiinnnggg fr oder stries n prts... luv yaaa..keep smiling..spread love...tc. :) :)

Finally, i read the whole chapters and m sowy for not reading earlier when you did pmmed with other stories.. Kya krti you had already reached more than half that time toh.. And yeah, i know m kamini reader🤣🤣.. Okey, so finally read it toh yeah, m feeling sukoon.. But trust me it was painful, emotional but mawara words daldiya tha na 'ruswa' and all toh thoda hass v liya.. But trust me more than harsad i hate aryamaan here.. He was being the cousin of nandini flirted with her!! He should have proctected her like a brother but chi chi same on him.. Okey, love you..

amaizng FS...
loved it...

stubborn nandini n sensible manik...
nicely penned down...

keep writing

Wow..
Loved this story to the core