MaNanFS:Coz Mama am In Love With a Criminal..!Chp5(Last)/PG116/12-JAN

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys..!
So I have got another idea i don't if there is a story of this kind on forum or not but i will try to make it different and unique..!
If it matches with any plot then pardon me bcz i didn't did that intentionally..
Here you go with a glimpse..!


Glimpse:

"You can't hide from me..!"Suddenly Nandini shouted in his ear and Manik was about to fall off the stool due to her sudden shout..! Cabir and Dhruv were holding their laughters..


"Hi..!"Nandini waved her hand in front of Manik's face and he sighed..!


"Tumhara kya kaam hai yahan? Bachoon kay any ki jaga nahi hai ya..! Ghar jaoa..!"Manik said coldly adjusting his cap and Nandini frowned..


"To whom you called a bacha? You know Manik me pory 22 years ki hoon..! Aur tum 24 years kay it's an ideal age difference...!"Nandini explained wisely and Manik wanted to bang his head in a wall..


"Mera peecha chood do..!"He said angrily..!


"Why? Main tmhy achi nahi lagti? See myny tmhra favorite red pehna hai..!"She said sadly and Manik felt helpless..! He wanted her out of all THIS..!


"You know na who am I??"Manik said looking at her in a serious tone..


"Haan pata hai..! Manik Malhotra..! The biggest gangster of underworld...! But sachi koi farak nahi parta mjy..!"She was so so adamant to be with him...!


"Tum aisy nahi mano ge..!"Manik said angrily and got up. She was so 'dheet' that she was not even scared of his 'gusa'..! Manik held her arm and started dragging her with him..!


"Hum date pay ja rahy hain?"Nandini asked happily all the way being dragged with him..!


"Haan haan date pay he ja rhy hain...!"Manik said hell annoyed tone..!


"Wow..! I knew it..!"Nandini exclaimed and Manik smiled faintly on her childishness..! He came to her car which was parked in the parking..!


"Tum yahan q lye ho let's go on your car na..!"Nandini was still confused and pointed towards his Ferrari..!


"Haan btata hoon pehly betho tou..!"Manik said in a serious tone and Nandini sat in her car..!


"Ghar lay jaao isy..!"Manik spoke to the driver he nodded and Nandini's pupils dilated..!


"Oye..! Tum mery driver ho us ki baat q sun rhy ho..!"Nandini yelled on her driver but he drove away and Manik sighed in relief..! He wanted her away from everything..! She didn't knew him..!

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I will try to update soon but please be patient..!

Please drop your comments below if you want me to continue or not?


Lot's of Love..

Mawara

Chapter1: Why Are You doing All This?

Chapter 2: Why Does It Hurts So Much?

Chapter 3: I am With You..! But?

Chapter 4:Revenge!

Chapter 5-LastChapter : Walk Down The Memory Lane!

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Rits3016 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Haha
pehle manik Oxford return
Fir Manik ACP
Ab manik gangster
Tumne to Manik ko bahut versatile bana diya...vow
But frankly telling I enjoyed all these diff roles of Manik
And now looking forward to this one too.
So don't make me wait more
And continue soon.
All the best
Love ya tons💔
Edited by i-love-manan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oye hoye kya dhashu concept hai Mawara..I m already loving it...
Last time I was laughing like a mad reading Manik as ACP but it was an awesome piece...I loved it more than the first one..but I m so sure that I will love this one most...and that is because of the image of a gangster Manik and innocent bubbly Nandini...I mean wow !!!! She knows Manik is a gangster and still she is mad for him
I m already loving this idea so much
Please continue soon
I really want to read it badly 😊
Edited by Naj91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Lol
This ws really funny.
Hahahha..
Eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting...
Lolzz

Nandini manik k piche h...use patta ri h...
Lolzz


Waahh

Update soonish :) ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome concept
Manik underworld gangster
Nandu behind him after knowing every thing about him
Loved the concept
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Oh god this nandu na. .
Hahaha
plz continue
it sounds fun. .too much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow amazing concept
interesting
Hum date pay ja rahy hain
omg its so funny yaar
continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Wow...
So mao is back with her ts...
Its too cute yaar..
Manik gangster...
Nandu loves him...
Luved the title...
Nandu is soo cute hm date par jaa rahe hai...
Luved it...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mawara first of all welcome baaack . I missed you thou I am a silent reader

Now abt this two shot, It's reallly awesome and refreshing as usual. Continue spoon .
It's really interesting and intriguing trust me

Update soon 😊

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