Fanfic-Dil Mil Gaye...NEW...prt-47 pg-146 - Page 48

dat was rockin part yaar! i luved it! i just cnt w8 for da nxt part nw! u have to update it soon or? ok i dnt know or b u have yaa! 😛 😳

Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

dat was rockin part yaar! i luved it! i just cnt w8 for da nxt part nw! u have to update it soon or? ok i dnt know or b u have yaa! 😛 😳

nxt part 2morrrow....

n tanxx 4 ur comments...😉

Originally posted by: afifa2

RHEA!!!...tumne toh kamaal hi kardi!!...it was absouloutly faboulose!!
i extremely love the cute scene...i almost cried lol..when armaan got hurt and how they were seperated for a while 😆

really.hats off to u!!

love
afifa 😛

tanx afifa...ur 2 sweeet....n gues swat armaan got hurt in his right hand n now ridzi will feed him food....ha ha ha...

tanxx again 4 ur comments....😉

Recap

-armi's sister calls on armi's cell but ridzi picks itup....soo ridzi misunderstands richa di as sum gf of armi..n den she stopd tokin to him...n den shashank cums....ridzi tells everythin to shashank...n den shahsnak tels her t go t arman n tok abt dis...n den ridzi goes t arman toks to him....n den solves out everythin...

PART 35

-Armaan n Riddhima r in armaans room...
A-waise riddhiam tum...vaha merese baat karne dad ki vajah se aaye na????
R-aa...voh...um...mein...
A-hann haan...aa..voh..aa...mein...
R-haan armaan dad ne mujhe aane ko kahan tha...
A-tumhe mujhpe bharoosa nahi raha riddhima....
R-armaan nahi aaise koi baat nahi hai......its just dad...jab bhi mein tumhe kisis aur ladki ke saath dekhti huun....i dont feel guud..
A-its k...ridddhima hota hai....
R-smiles...
A-aacha chalo dad se milke aate hain...
R-ok...but pehel change ur shirt....its full of blood...
A-he he...ok w8...
R-kie..
A-gets his shirt n removes d one hes wearin rite now...
n den riddhiam helps him wear his shirt n he has got hurt in his hand...(he banged his hand on the glass painting..in part 34..u all must b knowing..)
R-ho gaya....now lets go....
A-yeah...

AR go to shanshank...
Shash-toh riddhiam beta aab sab theek hai???
R-yeah dad...n den she smiles....
Shash-aur armaan...aage se meri beti ko sataya toh dekh lena...
n den all laugh....
A-tanku dad...
Shash-kis baat ke liye???
A-dad aagar aap thooda sa bhi late ho jate aane mein...toh mein toh mar hi jata...
Shahs-laughs....ur welcum beta...n den he hugs armaan..
R-armaan tumhe pata tha dad aane wale hain??
A-um...voh...um...haan....
R-gives an angry luuk....toh yeh aap dono ka plan tha..
Shash-mera aur maine armaan ko bhi involve kiya...
A-haan....uuse raat wen i was teasin u dat im tokin t sum gal...at dat tym i was tokin to dad....
R-i hate u guys...
Shash-riddhiam i wanted to give u n angie a surprise...
oh btw....mujhe angie se bhi toh milna hai...chalo lets go..
AR-yead dad...

AR n shashank go to the orphanage...

Shash-beta...gimme a hug...
Angie-cums...hey dad...n hugs shash....
Shahs-kaise ho beta??
Angie-dad im fine...toh aapko tym mil gaya mere paas aane ka...
Shash-nahi beta aaise koi baat nahi hai....armaan aur riddhima....lad rahe the toh i was solving deir problem...
Angie-oh i c....n gives an angry luuk to riddhima...
Shash-chalo u guys...enjoy...main aunty se milke aaya...im sure mujhe uunse bahut dad peetegi...

All laugh...
shashank goes to amrita...

Amrita-in the kitchen...
Shash-namaste aunty...
Amrita-oyee...shashank puutar....tu kaise hai???
Shash-main changa huun...aap bataye....
Amrita-arre itne dino baad tumse milke itna aacha laga...
Shash-mujhe bhi aunty....
Amrita-smiles...
shash-aunty aap anjali aur riddhime se milne na??
Amrita-haan dono ek dam tujhpe gaye hain...
Shash-smiles..
Amrita-aur riddhima toh...bahut hi zyaada sundar hai...
aacha shashank riddhima ko pata hai padma ke baare mein..
Shash-aunty...padma nahi rahi...aur haan riddhima ko sab pata hai...
Amrita-itan sab kuch ho gaya aur kisi ne mujhe khabarbhi nahi di..
Shash-sorry aunty...

n den shubhankar cums
Shub-aur kya baatein ho rahe hai..sir aap mujhse nahi milenge....
Shash-oh shubhankar tum...kaise ho??
shub-main theek ho...sir...aap kab aaye...
Shash-bas 1 ghante pehle...
Shub-aacha ..
Amrita-chalo bahut baatein ho gaye....aab sabko bulao aur sab khanna khao......
Shash-smiles....
Shub-main sabko bulakar aaya...
Shash-ok....arre shubhankar...ridhiam aurarmaan ko mat bhulana...
shub-kyun??
Shash-laughs n cums...abhi abhi uunki ladaye hui hai...dono ko ek duurse ke saath waqt beetana chahiye...
Shub-laughs...theke hai....waise sir...inko dekh ke mujhe aapne din yad aa jate hai...
Shash-ha...mujhe bhi...main bhi smriti se chooti chootu baatein pe ladta tha..
Shub-hm...aacha main uunk bula kar aaya..
Shahs-ok...

Shub-chalo anjali,sapna aur atul..khanna khane aa jao..
AR r busy teasin each other...dey didnt even noticed dat
shubhankar has cum to call dem 4 lunch...

A-mujhe bahut bhuuk lagi hai....
R-mujhe bhi hm...w8 i'll get from the kitchen...tum room mein jao main aati huun...
A-hm..ok....jaldi aana...
R-yeah..

R goes to the kitchen...
Amrita-yeh lo riddhiam tumhare aur armana ka khannna..
jao aur kha lo..
R-tanku aunty...
Amrita-smiles...

R goes wid the food in armaans room...
dere riddhima feeds him as he cant eat(hes got hurt in his right hand..)
A-yummy food..aur tum khila rahe ho toh aur bhi aacha lag raha hai...
R-blushes....
R-yeh lo...
A-eats n den bites riddhiams hand...
R-armaan...tum kitne gande ho...
A-laughs...sorry....w8 mein tumhe khila ta hun...
R-nahi armana u hav got hurt....main aapne aap kha luungi...
A-w8 na...
he feeds her wid her left hand...
R-tanxx armaan...
A-smiles...aagar tum mujhe khila rahe ho...toh kay main tumhe nahi khila sakta...
R-smiles...
n den suddenly armaans phone rings...
A-kiska phoen hai...oh richa di...
he picks up the phone...
A-hey di...
Richa-armaan ur soundin happy...sab theek ho gaya...
A-haan di...
Richa-c i told u na...
A-yes....hey di tok to riddhima..
R is shocked as she dosent even know richa di...
R-hello..
Richa-hi riddhiam..richa here...
R-hi...
Richa-u can also call me di...
R-hi di...
Richa-soo how r u??
R-im guud...
Richa-mera bhai bahut pagal hai...tum uuse jhelti kiase ho???
R-laughs...
Richa-i know i know...u luv him...so jhelna toh padega na...
R-laughs..again...
Richa-chalo soo wen u gusy cum bak to mumbai na....do give me a call...i wanna meet u...
R-ok di...
Richa-chalo den buuhbi....tc...n hav fun..(says in a naughty tone..)
R-tanx...bi..
A-kya hua??tum itan haas kyun rahi ho....
R-nahi bas aaisehi...
A-hm...kya baat hui di se..
R-kuch nahi...
A-smiles...ok...
R-chalo ab..
A-yeah chalo....

AR go to the orphange...
every1 is checkin the kids dere...
R-armaan i'll meet u in a bit...
A-aw...no...
R-armaan plz...
A-hm...ok...
R-bi...
A-bi....

Riddhima goes to sapna n dey r tokin n checkin d kids...
Atul goes to armaan...
Atul-oye armaan....tune ridz ke saath ladaye ki???
A-but champ aab sab theek ho gaya hai...
Atul-hm...oyee yeh bandage kyun lagaye hai..??
A-lag gaye yaar....
Atul-oh ok.....

Sudenly angie is cumin towards dem....
A-oye champ...ignore her..sirf kaam ki baatein kar..
Atul-ok yaar....lets try dis..
Anjali-hey guys..
Atul-hi angie..
A-stares at atul n gives him an angry luuk.. 😡
Anjali-atul tum aaj koi pagal panti nahi kar rahe...
Atul-dosent say anythin...
Anjali-atul im tokin to u...oh atul....hello...atul..
Atul-armana mujhe jaana hai..bi..
A-bi atul..
Anjali-yeh atul ko kya hua...
A-god knows...
anjali goes...

atul cums running...
Atul-kya hua armaan wat did she say??
A-yeh atul ko kya hua...dude its workin yaar...
Atul-oyee i luv u yaar...i luv u....
atul hugs armaan n kisses him on his cheeks..
Sapna n riddhiam cum t dem
S-aare armaan atul...tum yeh kya kar arhe ho...
A-luuks at riddhiam n pushes atul..
R-laughin....
Atul-yaar main armana ko kiss kar raha tha...
R-oh kiss...ok continue continue...
A-riddhima ko....
Sapna-laughs...
A-chi chi....champ i hate u....shit...w8 i'll js wash my face n cum...
R-laughs like anythin...
Atul-dost dost na raha...
A-aage mat gayeo atul..

n den suddenly...cum gal cums..
atul n armaan turn deir heads n luuk at dat chic..
n atul is almost abt to faint....
Armaan's mouth is open...n dne he luuks at riddhima...
n closes it...
n den closes his eyes...
R-gives him n angry luuk....

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soo guys part 35 ends here..
i knwo dis part didnthav dat gr8 AR scenes...but dis part was important 4 dat gals entry n amrita n shashank tok...

hope u liked it...
DO COMMENT
im w8in...
guys pplz comment..

it's ok if it did'nt have more AR scenes yaar..it was nice n the patch-up was pretty gud 😊
do continue!! 👏 👏

i actually read the new part before u pmed me😊..thnx soo much for the pm rhea..im glad u always make an effort for it!!
MUAAHH!!😊

Originally posted by: Sanaya_86

it's ok if it did'nt have more AR scenes yaar..it was nice n the patch-up was pretty gud 😊
do continue!! 👏 👏

tanxx sareena..

dat soo swet of u...

hey!tht was also a vry gud part n the last 2 lines of ur part where u said "atul is about 2 faint n armaan wid open mouth n ridz wid angry looks was quite funny"
plzz cotn.soon

Originally posted by: sheena_12

hey!tht was also a vry gud part n the last 2 lines of ur part where u said "atul is about 2 faint n armaan wid open mouth n ridz wid angry looks was quite funny"
plzz cotn.soon

he he...

nxt part is gonna b damn funny...i promise...

wid lots of AR n AA scenes...😉

n atnxx 4 appreciating...

hey it was amazing .. and there were sum a-r scenes too .. and d best part is dat it was a long part .. it was really cool ..
i specially luvd dat part where armaan tells shashank dat "agar aap thode bhi late hote toh mein toh mar jata "
and also dat scene where shashank tells shubhankar dat dont call a-r as they mite want to spend sum time together .. dat scene was not romantic or funny but it just reflected dat he understands their relationship ..


keep writing and keep rocking ..




--Tia--