Fanfic-Dil Mil Gaye...NEW...prt-47 pg-146

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Rhea

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Posted: 18 years ago

hey guys...

sum1 started dis fanfic n after dat....i wanted t continue it.....but i couldnt find d topic....soo guys im startin it again...n i want u guys t help me continue it...n yeah its ma 1st fanfic ever....hope u like it....ok...

soo lets start...

1st i'll put dat thing whch was wrtten in dat topic n afterdat we can continue...😉hope u guys help me....

n hey guys i need comments........
as comments make me write more n more....
guys if u read d FF den plz do comment.....
den only i can continue my fanfic.............
guys....plz comment if u read.....
i feel rilli nyc dat u guys r likin it.... 😉
i'll b w8in 4 d comments....😊

Index:-

Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 1
Part 3 - Page 1
Part 4 - Page 2
Part 5 - Page 3
Part 6 - Page 4
Part 7 - Page 5
Part 8 - Page 6
Part 9 - Page 8
Part 10 - Page 10
Part 11 - Page 11
Part 12 - Page 13
Part 13 - Page 15
Part 14 - Page 18
Part 15 - Page 19
Part 16 - Page 21
Part 17 - Page 22
Part 18 - Page 23
Part 19 - Page 24
Part 20 - Page 26
Part 21 - Page 28
Part 22 - Page 31
Part 23 - Page 33
Part 24 - Page 34
Part 25 - Page 36
Part 26 - Page 39
Part 27 - Page 42
Part 28 - Page 45
Part 29 - Page 48
Part 30 - Page 51
Part 31 - Page 54
Part 32 - Page 56
Part 33 - Page 61
Part 34 - Page 64
Part 35 - Page 65
Part 36 - Page 74
Part 37 - Page 80
Part 38 - Page 85
Part 39 - Page 92
Part 40 - Page 99
Part 41 - Page 107
Part 42 - Page 112
Part 43 - Page 118
Part 44 - Page 124
Part 45 - Page 131
Part 46 - Page 138
Part 47 - Page 147

do c n reply....😉

TO ALL THE SILENT READERS:-

Hey guys plz wen u read the new parts of this FF.....plz plz comment....i rilli wanna know wat ppl think abt my new FF's part.....guys plz.....it dosent tak long to post a comment, it just takes a min or 2.....plz guys....this is a request t all silent readers....

plz plz.....comment wen u read new parts of this FF...

tanx.....im w8in 4 comments from ppl who r silent readers..

Edited by rhea26 - 17 years ago

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sheena

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Posted: 18 years ago

well,we'll surely help u plzz do start it soon.

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Rhea

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Posted: 18 years ago

so guys d characters r d same....
now im starting....from padma in d icu..

so... part 1
-padma is in d icu....n shashank tells riddhime dat she is padmas daughter...n ridz cums runni t d hospitaln goes in d icu....n dere she sees padma..liein n takin her last breaths....
soo padma says t her all senti stuff n ridz is holdin padma's hand n den padma dies....
n riddhime starts cyin like anythin n she leaves d icu n runs to d locker room....
she runs n dere shes sittin on d chair n cryin...
armaan cums runnin after her...
n den armaan sees her cryin...
she turns n luuks at him...
n he opens his arms n riddhime cums runni she hugs him...
n den to make her comfortable he kisses her on her forehead....
😳
n den..dey do d ceremoniesof d death n all...
n angie is rilli pissed off wid shashank....
soo wen d ceremonies get over
ridz cums home....n den angie shouts dad mujhe ek nurse ki beti ke saath nhai rehna....
n den our swer luvin ridz says....its ok di..mai jaa rahe huun...aapki fikar karne ki koi zaarurat nahi hai...n dne she packs her suitcasas n goes out of d house n shashank is a sayin riddhima ruuk jao..na....

Edited by rhea26 - 18 years ago

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Rhea

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Posted: 18 years ago

part 2
- n dne shes standin outside n js walkin wid d suitcases....n den she turns assum light is cumin....n sees armaan standin....n den armman takes her suitcases n puts dem in his car...n jholds riddimas hand n says chalo riddhima....n den riddhima says nhai armman main tumhare saath nhai jaa sakti...
n den armman chalo riddhime mujhe kuch nhai sunna...
riddhima-nhai armaan
A-tum mujhhe aapna dost toh samajhti ho na...toh chalo
R-theek hai armaan par...
A-parvaar kuch nahi....lets go
she sits in d car n armaan smiles at her n den dey go t armaan's house....
n den armaan tella ramu kaka t keep d suitcases in d guest room...n den armaan shows her d rrom in whch she'l stay....n den he says....riddhime yeh hai tumhara kamra aagar tumhe kisi bhi chees ke zaarurat hai toh temme...im always dere at ur service..(hez tryin t cheer her up)...n dne riddhime smiles...n says armman tum bhi na....anyways tanxxx alot....tum bahut aache ho...main tumhe galat samajhti thi... 😉 n dne armaan smiles at her n says...raat bahut ho chuki hai...aab tum soo jao....main tumhe subha mila huun....aur haan main uus saamne walekamre mein huun.....tumhe jab aane ho aa sakti ho...😊guud nite.....n den ridz says guud nite armman....

Edited by rhea26 - 18 years ago

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Rhea

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Posted: 18 years ago

w8in 4 replies n den i'll continue... 😊

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-Nayab-

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hi!

Do please continue! I'm loving it so far! 😆

Nayab!

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Rhea

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Posted: 18 years ago

part 3
-riddhima...is ready to go to sanjeevani n shez drinkin coffee...n suddenly she gets a call form sanjeevani dat 2day....d doctors dont hav t cum t sanjeevani....deres sum work goin on...n extra doctors hav been kept....to lukk after d patients..n den riddhima goes t armaans room t tell him dis....she opens d door..n dere armaan is sleeping.....he's wearin superman tracks.. 😆
n a white sleevless shirt...hes luukin 2 hot...n hes sleepin n for 5 mins riddhima keeps luukin at him....den she goes near him n shez watchin him sleep...n den she keeps her hand on his forehead...n she smiling... 😳 luukin at him...n den ramu kaka knocks d door....n den he says armaan baba uuth jao...n den riddhima suddenly removes her hand from his forehead...n den she says armman uutho....n den armaan gets up n says....sone do na kaka....n den he opens his eyes n says...sone do n he closes his eyes n den realizes dat its riddhima not kaka n den opens his eyes again n says riddhima tum.... 😆 😆 😆...haan armman main...lol...n den he take s d sheet is hez coverin himself...n dne riddhima is laughin n she says kya hua....itne ghabrai hue kyun ho....n den armaan says kuch nahi tum jao mein aaya...n dne ridz says pakka??? im w8in 4 u outside in d lobby cum fast..n den he says haan haan paakka u go im cumin n riddhime is laughin like anyhtin n den she goes...

Edited by rhea26 - 18 years ago

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aanchal

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Posted: 18 years ago

its 2 gooooooooood plzzzzzzzzzzz continue ya plzzzz fastttttttttt...... 😆

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Rhea

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Posted: 18 years ago

part 4
- armaan takes a bath n all..n den he cums t d lobby...n before sittin he shouts kaka breakfast plz...
n den kaka-abhi laya beta
n den riddhime is still laughin....
A-kya hua riddhima???
R-kuch nhai(laughs)
A-arre kuch ho hoga
R-nahi kuch nahi btw mein tumhe batana bhul gaye lovely ka phone aaya tha...aaj we dont hav to go to sanjeevani...
A-oh dats soo kool....1 day off...whew...
R-armaan tum bhi na...
A-toh chalo lets go sumwhere
R-par kahan????
kaka gets d food n dey start eating...
A-hmm......where ever u want t go.....
R-umumum(thinkin...)
A-idea....lets go shoppin...im very bad at it 😆 ...u can help me...
R-hm..ok lets go...

dey both sit in armaan's car n go 4 shopping...
dey enter d mall...n den dey enter a UCB shop...

armaan starts luukin at clothes...n even riddhima is luukin 4 clothes 4 armaan...n den armaan picks up sum shirt n says...i'll js try dis n cum....
n den he cums out riddhima says nahi armman its not guud..n den like dis armman tries 1000 of shirts n riddhime keeps rejecting.... 😆 😆 😆
n den finally riddhima tells him t buy 2-3 shirts whch she likes...n den armman says riddhima just a sec...he goes gets 2 icecreams...1 4 himself n 1 4 riddhima.... 😊
n den dey do masti over dere...as in...eat food,luuk 4 clothes n all
den dey cum bak home.... 😉
n den riddhime n armaan hav dinner at home only...dey r sittin n havin n armaan is luukin at riddhima...n den riddhima luuks at armaan n says armaan kya soch rahe ho..n armaan is like kuch nahi kuch bhi toh nahi....
n dne ridhime says chalo im goin t sleep....cya tomorrow..bi...n den even armaan goes t sleep....

gusy puuhlez reply den only i'll continue....
hope u guys likin d story 😉

Edited by rhea26 - 18 years ago

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sheena

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Posted: 18 years ago

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well,if m not rong the first 2 part of this ff is done by rushri n may u r not aware of it that it is still being cont. by her it has reached till the 11th part n i know u thought its not being cont. by her n u thought 2 cont. by ur own way but dear itz being cont.

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