FF- Pretty Woman || Chapter 11 updated

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Hello guys,
My friend from DTB has been writing a FF and I thought to share it with you guys.
THIS IS WRITTEN BY PREET not me!

INDEX:
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 11

Please leave a comment and like. Thanks 😃

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Chapter 1:

*Not proof read*

Shagun panics are Ashok's threats surround her mind she feels faints, and grabs the nearest thing she could grab. She rests on the step & decides to call ishita as she does she thinks because of her everyone is in trouble & everyone will have to pay for this.

Ishita cries infront of the mirror wondering what she is missing ? Why did Raman go to Shagun ? What am i missing ? Does he not love me anymore ? I wish i could see what he see in her but not me ? Shagun phone flashes on ishita mobile Ishita wipes her tears & say's hello ? Why have you called me now ? You have taken Raman away from me ! What more do you want ? Shagun screams and says STOP ! You need to listen to me, come meet me in the hospital storage room. Ishita rushes over too hospital where shagun is hiding in the corner, she say's what is this nonsense ? Shagun say's Ashok wants to kill Raman ! He's furious & if i don't he will kill our kids ! Even your child ! Ishita looks on & looks at shagun's stomach ... This is my child ? She cries & hugs shagun.

Shagun say's we need to call Naina, Ishita askes who is Naina ? Shagun say's well when i left Raman, Naina & her mother helped Raman & everyone a lot so Raman sent Naina to England to study she eventually finished her studies & opened her business she never came back because Raman asked her to stay there & only come back if he says so ... Ishita say's oh i get it ! Naina is everything Ashok needs ! We will have to call her now, Ishita rings her from Shagun's phone & say's hello Naina i need your help ...

Naina say's shagun ? But this doesn't sound like you ? This is Ishita Raman's wife & we need your help can you come to India as soon as possible ? Naina say's im coming tonight

Meanwhile Shagun & Ishita plan Shagun's fake death to fool Ashok & buy some times whilst Naina arrives. Naina catches her flight to India & wonders what may have happened.

The next morning Naina arrives & waits for shagun & ishita ... They i from her about everything that has happened & she looks on & hugs ishita as well as shagun she says "im glad to be helping such brave ladies" shagun say's Ashok will do anything to get with you and you will have to do anything to get him to trust you ! Ishita says you don't have to if you do not want too ... Naina say's anything for bhai !

Later on in the evening she gets ready to grab Ashok's attention. Shagun say's simple yet classy, he'll be ready to take you home & i'll be ready to trap him ... Shagun & ishita give naina her car & show a picture of ashok ... Naina say's don't worry i did my research on the plane.

Naina walks into the club whilst all head turns besides one, Ashok's he turns back & say's 'hey she's Naina Kapoor the British business women?' I need to fix myself a date with her ...

Naina walks over to the bar & sits besides Ashok. He watches her & tries to strike a conversation ... 'Hey im Ashok' Naina looks over and say's 'Hey ? Aren't the great business man Ashok Khanna ?' He looks on & smirks so you've heard of me ? The good or the bad ? Naina looks on & say's depends ? She strokes his blazer & say's but i like bad guys ... Ashok pulls her closer & say's maybe you should come with me & get to know this bad guy a bit more 😉

Naina's outfit:

Naina throws her bag at Ashok and pulls his tie, let's go ... They both get into the car & Ashok holds onto her hand ... Naina looks on & say's i won't run away, ashok pulls her closer & kisses her ... Naina strokes his hair & say's we should get to your house now ...

They arrive at Ashok's home, he grabs himself & Naina a glass of wine she looks on, he sits on the sofa & pulls her onto of him & passes her the wine, she sips it & she's her phone flashing, Ashok looks on say's who is it ? Naina say's 'my mum' & gets up & answers the calls she looks at behind as Ashok smiles, 'hey mum, how are you ?' Ishita & shagun say be careful Ashok may try to get you drunk & convince you to stay the night ... Naina say's don't worry, i will handle it.

Naina & ashok become very drunk overtime & ashok askes Naina to join him in his room, naina texts ishita & shagun & tells them what's happens ... Ashok closes the door & throws naina's phone off to the side whilst pushing her on to the bed, naina grabs ashok & pulls him closer she say's 'i have never met a guy, like you'

'I have never met a guy, like you' Naina repeats Ashok pushes Naina hair away from her face and says 'like me eh ? I know im charming, tall and well irresistible no lady would be able to keep her hands off me, like you ?'

Naina slides back leaving Ashok chin meeting the bed. She laughs and raises her eyebrow, 'irresistible' you say ? Ashok brings himself up and gets closer to Naina 'yes irresistible if i do say myself 😉 ' Naina moves in closer ... She pulls Ashok's shirt and comes closer to him, he could feel her breath on his neck she stroked his hair and sense the tension build up. Now who's 'irresistible ?' Ashok adjust his collars and smirk 'i underestimated you'

Suddenly, the phone rings Naina looks over as soon as she goes to pick up ... Ashok pulls her back 'baby we need to spend some quality time' Baby ? Huh ? Im your baby now ? Naina rushes over & picks up the call 'hey mum ?' Ishita responds 'thank god you're okay we thought ashok may have realised who you are' all of a sudden Ashok approaches Naina from behind and grabs the phone 'Hello Mrs Kapoor, you have a very beautiful daughter whom i'd like to spend the night with ? Ishita replies back with 'kya night' Ashok coughs and say's i mean the rest of the evening were just getting down to do some business ... Shagun looks and and indicates Ishita to carry on with the conversation. Ishita says 'okay bye i will not disturb your meeting then ?'

They walk over back to the bed, Ashok asks Naina 'why have you come to india ?' Naina replies with 'well my mum wants me to find a husband as well as a capable business partner' Ashok smirks and thinks 'she's the one, she has money, a business and will look great with me' Naina nudges Ashok and asks 'what are you thinking about ? Marrying me ?' Ashok pulls Naina towards him and says 'maybe, depends on how this night goes' Naina blushes. Ashok picks her up & lays her on the bed and removes her necklace. As Naina removes his tie and throw it behind her.

Ashok moves closer and kisses Naina's neck. She tries to resist him but gives in and wraps her hands around him.

Chapter 2

Edited by Tc_Tc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi

Is this story about Ashok?

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi

Is this story about Ashok?

thanks for the pm


Yes it'll be fairly about him
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mmm it's about Ashok .., it's different
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mmm not sure about this - poor Naina why is she giving in to Ashok and why are Shagun and Ishita making her do this????
Raman will be so angry when he finds out!!!!

Thank you for the pm!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting dr.continue soon.thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Is this story about Ashok & Naina's love story?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its about ashok I guess
Let's c how it continues..
Update soon
Hope day dis naina doesn't fall in luv vd ashok..
N dump ishgun
Update soon
Pm me also
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story
So its about Ashok
Poor naina

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