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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice banner and lovely update dr. naina ashok love story is interesting. continue soon.thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Nycc update
eager to knw whether ashok has actually fallen for naina or not
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice
R dy felling in luv fr real
Feel so
Let's c hu changes
N hu beats whom
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update & Banner is good dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 6:
*Not proofread*

'To spend the rest of my life with you' Says Ashok.
Depends what do you want ? says Naina ...
'To spend the rest of my life with you'
Naina smiles and says 'I have to ask my mum before i say anything'
She turns around and begins to walk inside. Ashok grabs Naina's hand 'i'll take that as a yes then, if so wear this ring tomorrow when i see you'

Naina goes inside and thinks 'i have to tell ishita and shagun. It's also time Raman Bhai knew i am in India. She walks over to a counter where she sees music playing she changes the track to 'Tu jaane na' and sings along to the song 'Kaise btaayein kyun tujhko chahe yaara btaa na paaye' Ashok walks in and stands behind Naina 'Often when people pick out a particular song it expresses their feelings' says Ashok. Naina looks down and sees a tear drop hit the counter, she wipes her eyes and turns around 'is that so Mr Khanna ?'

The ring :-


She changes the song once again and selects 'Lat lag gayee' she comes closer to Ashok touches his shoulder and walks around him. Ashok say to 'Lagta hai aisa haal dil ki tum zaroorat ho' Naina laughs and says 'meri lat laag gayee ? Well im the expensive time so be careful'

Meanwhile Raman discovers an article of Naina being in India. Ishita ! She yells ! Guess what ?! Naina is here ! I can't believe she didn't tell me ? But she probably surprising her brother after all that's what she does. Ishita looks at Raman nervously, 'how do i tell him the real reason Naina is here ? He will be so disappointed' Raman laughs and says 'oh yeah you don't know who Naina is ? Well let me tell you she is a wonderful human and as far as i know her if she's came back to India it must be for something big ! You see once she wants something she doesn't until she gets it. Raman snaps his fingers Ishita ? Are you even listening ? She sounds wonderful says Ishita and hugs Raman.

Back at the restaurant, Naina and Ashok dance. Suddenly, Naina phone begins to flash 'Mum' appears on the screen she leaves to answer it 'Hey mum i have something important to tell you and i will come and meet you tomorrow !' Ishita replies 'Okay Naina but Raman knows your here now !' Naina says 'Don't worry i'll come over tomorrow and spend a lot of time with Bhai and tell him the truth, he deserves to know' Naina ends the call and thinks 'Well at least Ajay's article makes it easier for me to confront bhai. She walks back inside and says can you drop me off ? Home ? My home or yours ? Naina smiles 'My home i need to finish off some paper work and now would be a good time to leave' Ashok nods his head and says 'fine but you owe me ! Mrs Khanna' ... Miss Kapoor to you, i havent said yes yet says Naina. Well i know it will be a yes.

They walk towards the car, Naina sits inside and texts 'Mum' and 'Mum2' asking then to skype her once she gets home. Naina home arrives he gets out the car and Ashok pulls her arm 'where's my kiss goodnight' Naina says 'I owe you but not now' she walks towards the hotel and goes inside, she stops are reception 'can you send up a bottle of the strongest liquor you have' she gets inside her room and calls Ishita and Shagun 'are you guys ready ? Im going to call you ... The door knocks and her bottle arrives she grabs the bottle in one hand whilst on the phone to Ishita and Shagun. 'You don't drink Naina' says Shagun ... Well when your trying to numb the pain you do smiles Naina. What pain says Ishita ? Did Ashok ?? Naina laughs and says no, no ... What is the plan for tomorrow we can't keep it a secret anymore ? I have to tell Raman Bhai, also Ashok has asked me to marry him ? What do i do ? He gave me this ring, i have until tomorrow to decide. Shagun and Ishita look at one another 'you can't spend the rest of your life with him' Naina says 'hasn't Raman Bhai told you how stubborn i am ? I will do what is the best for everyone' Ishita says 'yes but what about yourself ?' Naina says 'Everyone has done enough for me, it's my time to do something' Shagun looks on and says what if he divorces you after the marriage ? He can't says Naina i have made the business papers in such a way he will lose either way. Shagun smiles and says 'I always knew you were smart and brave you have made me proud' Naina smiles as she pass out on the bed. Shagun and Ishita scream Naina ! Naina ! Naina !

Naina gets up and says 'Im joking guys !' Alcohol doesn't really do much to me, it's like drinking water' So i will come and meet Raman Bhai tomorrow at 9:30am sharp ! I'll some flowers for you Ishita Bhabi and this personalised gift for my Bhai. Seeing Bhai after so long ! Im excited and scared he's not going to like Ashok or my decision.

Chapter 7

Edited by Tc_Tc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
So now Raman knew that his Sis is here..
Waiting for their confrontation..
I still feel Ishita & Shagun r stupid..
Naina is either a genius or a pothole for sure..
Cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nycc update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Nice update
I m waiting for raman and naina confrontation
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update dr. continue soon. thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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extremely sorry for very late reply dear

banner is cute dear

i am happy that raman know that naina is in india but feel bad that if it create any problem between ishra

ishra hug was cute

ashok is more serious in his relationship with naina

i dont know what will raman reaction but what i want ashok has to punish but not by destroying some one life (naina) dear

naina think she is smart but i feel she is weak in love with ashok

surprise was cute

dressing to make ashok fell down was cute

dance and ashok proposing was cute dear

cant wait more

please continue soon dear

thanks for pm me dear


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