MaNanFS:Coz Mama am In Love With a Criminal..!Chp5(Last)/PG116/12-JAN - Page 67

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update it was dear
Never expected this to come


Brilliantly written

Loved it

Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
very emotional...😭😭
it's too difficult for them...

that bloody jerk harshad kabhi bhi manan ko happily nahi rehne deta..

manik will teach them a lesson now...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh god finally saare secrets r revealed... iska mtlb harshad is alive? ??? Bt how... ?? Sab ne chk to kia tha na... kahi yeh aryaman to ni??? ... update soon plzz.. n yaa happy new year in advance
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Posted: 10 years ago
Might be someone from harshad side.
Though harshad is dead
Someone else close to him.
Ahhh sorry girl of we have disappointed you.
Excuse us for this one time n.a..
Am not asking to completely remove it.
Just delay for few days than usual.
Not more than that pls.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mawara, I'm so sorry! I missed commenting on 3 updates but it was cause I was out of town!
Chapter 2: Nandini's first Kiss though it may not be the one what you usually expect but for her it was special cause she was kissed by the one she loves. Manik's promise to not come to meet him again did hurt her. His reason somewhere down the line is valid, he can't afford to lose her, she is too precious to him. They say the best way to make a guy confess is Alcohol & Jealousy! That's exactly what happened with Manik. He wants Nandini to be happy but seeing her with someone else wasn't as easy as he thought! With a little bit of instigating he confessed his feelings to her! Showed her how much he loves her!

Chapter 3: Manik is like a kid at heart! He after gaining consciousness the first thing that struck him was he hurt Nandini, he took advantage of her. He didn't want to hurt her that was the last thing ever possible for him. The way Nandini made him understand that he can never hurt her! Making him hide his face in her hair to calm him down & his grip tightening on her. He wanted assurance hence he kept asking her whether she hates him or not. Their moments with each other on the Terrace, he purposely avoiding questions so that she isn't hurt or stressed. The last part where he decides to leave her cause he knows how important a mother is! Her pleads & cries did hurt him but he can't go back to her cause he wouldn't want her go get separated from her mother.

Chapter 4: Harshad is a Jerk! He blackmailed Sakshi so that she doesn't agree for MaNan being one! Manik & Nandini even being separate from each other can't forget each other! The best surprise was Manik being an undercover cop! He did all this to take revenge from Harshad & Gang for killing his mother. Manik coming to meet Nandini after completing the mission, he couldn't go back atleast he had to see her once! Nandini's plead of wanting him to love her once in full consciousness! Manik giving her the most precious pendent which his mother gave him before going away.
I guess mostly Harshad took her away. Maybe he wasn't dead & just pretended.

Mawara we all love your stories. Don't punish your regular commenters by not updating. Update them the story on PM if you want! Honestly I can't wait for the next part & the showdown!
Do update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's maybe harsad or his close someone (if he died, take revenge 4rom manik)

Poor nandu. .kitna rulya


I love manik gangstar avtar


When you kill harsad I thought it's last part


Then I remember u as u have to make always twist after all u r mawara


From the starting I read ur ff I know this coming



Awesome








Beautiful




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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing chapter
Nandini n manik scene was so good
Finally manik took revenge:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb fantastic update dea. ...
Emotional too
Continue soonnn
Stay blessed
Keep smiling
Keep shining fr ur loved ones
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Posted: 10 years ago
so emotional..jis tarah manik or nandini ki pain dikhaya omg just fabulous fabulous...
I think wo kamina jerkshad hoga..
bloody moron zinda hai ..
aww pendant was awesome..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yrr di..dont get angry..srry di..and we commented...aur hamesha krenge..coz we luv u really very very very much..aur story ko bhi ..and about the update...it was amazing..too cute emotional touching..and beautifully penned...ab plzz gussa mat Ho na..and update jaldi se..luv u loads..and thanxxz

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