MaNanFS:Coz Mama am In Love With a Criminal..!Chp5(Last)/PG116/12-JAN - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm
Only one word.. Wow
Like seriously it's such an awesome concept
N I toh just love it
Can't wait for next update
Update soon
So excited already
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahaha...manik fallen for nandu...she is too cute re...
Cabir dhruv abhi teasing manik n supporting nandu...tooo good
Bad boy good girl...lovely concept I must say...
Waiting for more...
Loved it
Keep writing
Tanvi
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Posted: 10 years ago
nanidni is really crazy
but i like this nandini

so manik also have feelings for her

but he is doing this to keep his girl safe

last part means the kiss was unexpected

but waiting to see what will happen next

update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
manik also had a feelings for nandu but to save her he don't tell her ok

nandu's mom also know manik is criminal omg
nandu always cute.ur awesome
thanks for pm
continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing...
I am loving this story alot...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow so cool yaar
I'm really liking it
Itna pagalpan hai nandini ke andar manik ke liye
But she should understand manik
Maybe he has lost someone in his past bcoz of his criminal profession and he don't want to lose nandini
But why did she kissed him wo bhi itne scary moment pe kuch ho gaya to
Thank you so so s much for making so much efforts so that we can read and enjoy our time
Seriously dil she thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazinggg
Awesomeee
Superbbb update
Nandu toh crazy fan hai manik ki...itni crazy hai manik ke kiye...manan kiss...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally u updated [:D/] ...and yes u r right..mere chehre pe 1000 watt ka smile aa gaya.. 😃 love u janoo for these amazing updates...

Ok so here u r with my most awaited update of ur new OS...MAWARA believe me when I m saying this...it was awesome...most fabulous story with fabulous presentation...I LOVED it ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ...

From the starting to the end it was awesome in every step...so Nandini is stalking Manik...aww and she loves him...but she is so innocent yar...Manik usko bhaga raha hai and wo puch rahihe "Hum date pay ja rahy hain?"..haha seriously yar maza aa gaya...Manik sent her by trick...hehe
I loved Cabir's dialogue very much...seriously it was lovely...so Manik also loves her ...but yea even he is right...he can afford to loose her.
But I must say MAWARA ur idea of propose was so unique in this story...yar I loved it.

Hmm Nandini's mom knows about Nandini's craziness...yar what a sweet mom she is..
Hehe Nandini phir pohonch gayi aadde pe...Cabir is Cabir...Juliet..seriously ????? I loved the way she complained about Manik for his ignorance...yar even I felt bad...but the scene was really heart touching where Nandini went wiping her tears and Manik saw him from distance...Nandini is so crazy about him na...she can't live without him

Hehe here is Mawara's magic...everything in a single update...love, cuteness, and of course dhisum dhisum...oh take positions...wow so awesome na...the scene was so romantic...and a little emotional also...their dialogues were superb...but first slap and then kiss...wow !!!! Aur wo bhi initiated by Nandini...haaye !!!!!

Thanks for this amazing story Mawara...and yes I will love to read it more and more...so please please please if u will make it a TS I will be extremely happy...please make it at least a TS...
Mawara in advance sorry...mere final exams start ho rahe hai...31st tak packed up...so may be I will be late to comment or may be the comments will not be up to the mark...please naraz mat hona..thanks for pm..please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow amazing concept dea...
Superb mind blowing
Loved every bit of it
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
Stay blessed
Keep smiling
Keep shining fr ur loved ones
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was just an awsm story line
Ur concept was quite interesting
N very new
it was too good
Continue soon

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