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Diksha sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi m new here I m going to start a new story in arsh,iske starting chapters kisi story ke chapters ke jaise hi honge par mujhe us story ko continue karna hai.l hope kissi ko bora na lage... Character sketch Aaj hi de rahi hoo... I hope Sabko pasand aaye...😊

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prologue on pg 1

Pt 1 on pg2

Pt 2 on pg2

Pt 3 on pg 3

Pt 4 on pg 4

Pt 5 part a on pg 4

Part 5 (b) pg 5

Part 6 on pg 6

Part 7 on pg 6

Imp. Note on pg 6

Part 8 (a) and (b) on pg 7

Part 9(a) and (b) on pg 9

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Diksha sharma

@shdiksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi m new here

I love arsh,so I m writing new story on arsh

I hope u guys like it...

characters sketch.

Main characters.

Armaan Singh rathore ( Dr. by profession)

Shilpa ( about her u will read in story)

Others

Armaan family

Armaan father

Mr.vikram Singh rathore(play by ronit Roy)

Mrs.ananya v.rathore(shalini kapoor sagar)

Viren Singh rathore (karan tracker)

Abeer Singh rathore (pearl v puri)

Arjun rathore (karan kundra )abeer twin

Simran (sukirti kanpal)

Armaan best frnds

Prem juneja

Man Singh khurana

Kaisa hai

I know boring hai

Agar acha na large toh bhi rply kr me btao

Plz and do suggest some name

Prolugo kal doogi

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Aju

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Posted: 9 years ago

good initiation😊 👏 keep going...😃

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Diksha sharma

@shdiksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Maine Abhi title nahi socha hai😊

Kal prolougo de dongi

Uske baad agar koi title name suggest kar sako😊

Vaise maine socha hai

😆😆😆~~~~second chance to love~~~~😆😆😆

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Aju

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shdiksha
Maine Abhi title nahi socha hai😊
Kal prolougo de dongi
Uske baad agar koi title name suggest kar sako😊

Vaise maine socha hai
😆😆😆~~~~second chance to love~~~~😆😆😆

nice jaldi continue karna we r w8ing..😊prologe do phir we can suggest a title if u want👍🏼

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Diksha sharma

@shdiksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Prologuo

"Vivah sampan hua".

Pandit Ji say yeah sun dulhan apne gughat mein se apne dulhe Ki oar dekhti hai par usse dekh nirrash ho jati hai kuyki voh uski or nahi dekh raha hota...

Fir Dono bado ka aashirwad Lee kar apni nai zindagi ki taraf kadam rakhte hai par kya yeah rasta otna hi seeda hai jitna dikh raha hota hai ya es mein inhe saath chalne mein wakt lagge ga...

Sab ladkiya dulhan ko uske pati me kamre mein le jaati hai,

Dulhan baar-baar apne haath mal rahi hoti hai,USSR dekh saaf pta chal raha ki vo gabra rahi hai,

Sab USSR vaha chod kar chale jati hai,ladki idar odar dekh rahi hoti hai itne mein dulha vaha as jata hai,

Usse vaha dekh ladku kuch kehne lagti hai par is she pehle hi ladka bolts hai,

Ladka:tum yaha kya kar rahi hoo.

Ladki:jii voh mein...

Ess say pehle voh apni baat keh paaye ladka kehta hai

Ladka:chup mujhe tumse kuch nahi sunna or nahi kehna hai bas itna kehna hai ki

""Tum yaha nahi reh sakti"".

Ladki:Ji par hum...

Ladka usse shoulders se pakar leta hai or kehta hai

"Tumhe ek baar kahi hui baat samajh nahi aati ki tum yaha nahi reh sakti...

Yeh keh kar firh usse kamre say bahar nikal deta hai..

Vo ladki vaha she chalk jati hai vo kisi or ko end dab baato me liye pareshan nahi karna chahti ISSI liya ghar me ek hisse mein ek chote she kamre mein reh Latin hai taking koi uske pati oar ungli na othaye

Usska pati world topmost youngest business tycoon & also handsome

Mr.armaan Singh rathore.

Aaj ke liye itna hi.😊

~~~kaisa laga~~~

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sreelekshmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

superbbb...continue soon...agar aap chaahe tohaap iss story ko facebook pe dill mill gayye story episode page pe bhi likh sakte ho...aap bass us page pe request send karo...plz dont stop this story...continue soon...

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Diksha sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 1

" new day new life"

Today is her first day as a daughter-in-law of rathore family.She is very nervous because she has no idea in which type of people she is right nowpar who ek baat me liye sure hai ki yaha uski life esay nai hai...

Woh apne naye din ki suraat krne ke liye uthti hai,asmaan ki or dekh kr kehti hai

"Hey mahadev Ji humari raksha krna or Sab theek kr dena "...

Subah ki pheli kiran uske chera par parti hai or vo dekhti hai ki voh aaj late hai apni shaadi me baad phele din hi late..

Won kehti hai "hey mahadev Ji aaj phele din hi late San kya soche ge humare baare mein an Hume or der nai krni chahyi hum jaldi tyaar ho kr neeche hate hai...

Red color ki saari mein tyaar ho kr voh neechye jaati hai jisme won bilkul hi apsara lag rahi hoti hai...

Won dekhti hai ki uski saas akele hi kuch sooch rahi hoti hai,shipla uske pass ja kr uska aashirvad Lati hai.

Shilpa ko dekh uski saasu maa khush hoti hai...

Fee won pooja ghar mein ja kr pooja kr shaadi me baad ki baaki rasme bhi poori krne lagti hai.

Shilpa ki saas dekhti hai ki voh chip hai ,voh puchti hai sab theek hai na..

Es par shilpa kheti hai ki Sab theeh hai woh chinta na kre..

Shilpa se yeh sun kr won khush hoti hai "USSR lagta hai ki armaan ne es shaadi ko apna liya hai par yehi uski sabse badi galti hai...

Won shilpa ko much meetha bnane ko kehti hai shilpa ha keh kr halwa bnane ki tayari krne lagti hai...

Baaki Sab cooks naaste ki tayari krte hai..

Shilpa halwa bna kr naaste me table par rakhti hai fer voh apne father in law ka aashirvad Lati hai.fee San naashta krne late hai sgilpa dekhti hai ki vaha par bas uske saas-sasur or vahi hai or koi nai...

Na hi uska pati armaan,uski saas Usse kehti hai ki voh meetha parose toh voh ek bowl me aati hai or table par rakhti hai,halwe ko dekh kr armaan me dad khush ho jaate hai or khushi she kehte hai "gajar ka halwa"...

Unhe es tarah dekh armaan ki mom kehti hai ki 'aap bacho she kam nahi hai' halwa dekh itni khushi...

Par voh apni wife ko ignore kr apna Saara intension halwe par lagate hai or shilpa ki tariff krte rehte hai...

Armaan ki Mon notice krti hai ki shilpa be much nahi khaya hai es liye voh puchti hai ki voh naasta kyu nahi kr rahi,es par shulpa kehti hai ki voh San me baad kregi,par who kehti hai Ki Abhi ghar mein Bas wahi hai or koi nahi toh voh naasta kr le..

Woh kehti hai ki ghar mein or bhi bahut saare lig rehte hai par Abhi koi nahi hai or armaan much kaam se busseness trip par gya hai jald hi as jaye ga...

Par yeh sun kr shilpa ka man bhar aata hai kyuki use ota hai voh es rishte ko avoid krne me liye gya hai naki kaam se Jo ki sahi hai..

Shilpa ko upset dekh Jo ki voh chupane ki koshish kr rahi hai armaan ki mom ko doupt hota hai Per voh kuch nahi kehti,or armaan she baat krne me liye chali jati hai, par uska no. Nahi lagta toh voh es baat ko Jane deti hai yeah soch kr ki shayad nai jagah or naye loogo ke bhich voh akelapan mehsoos kr rahi ho..

Asse hi San rituals mein saara din nikal jaata hai...

Raat ko armaan ka phone aata hai uski mom ko toh voh usse shilpa me baare mein kehti hai, armaan kehta hai ki usse shilpa me bare mein koi baat nahi krni hai,kyuki Usse es shaadi mein koi interest nahi hai or yahi usne shiloa se bhi kaha hai...

Armaan se yeh sun uski mom shock ho jaati hai or sochti hai ki kahi kisi masoom Ku zindagi toh nahi barbaad krdi. Par an kya ho Sakta hai. Par apni tasali ke liye voh shilpa ko dekhne jaati hai par voh armaan me kamre mein nahi hoti,fer vih usse San jagah dekhti hai or usse ek chote se kamre mein dekh kr upset ho jati hai or kuch Kane bins chale jati hai..

Es tarah shilpa ka shaadi me baad ka phela din chala jata hai par Abhi bhi uske maan mein much sawal hai jinke koi jawab nahi hai..

Ek rishte mein bande do log jinka ek dosre se koi rishta hi nahi hai,ek assa rishta jiska koi kal hi nahi hai,ek ASA rishta...

Kaisa laga plz rply krna...

I know bahot time baad update kiya hai par exams the essi liye.. Ignore mistakes jaldi mein likha so plz a just kr Lena...

Edited by shdiksha - 9 years ago