Heartbeat Soul & Life... Bonus Chapter On Page 63 [26/09/2016]

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krystle_21

@krystle_21

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#131

I just read the last few chapters in one go! They're all great chapters!
The kiss! <3

Keep writing awesome chapters! :)

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megha Agarwal

@megha1996

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#132

nice update...
jealous jeevika awesome...
viren was casonava in his past i didn't expect it...
viren trying to manofy her...
finally he accomplished his task and she forgave him on certain conditions..
update soon and thanks for the pm...

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virika-23

@virika-23

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#133

superb update loved it continue soon

Edited by sushmavirika - 10 years ago

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virika-23

@virika-23

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

missing adi and virika update please

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kryanfan1

@kryanfan1

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Unres.

Superb Update dear.

Too good.

Please update soon.

Waiting to read more.

Edited by kryanfan1 - 10 years ago

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

awesome update

totally loved it

superb

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KryanVirikaLuv

@KryanVirikaLuv

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

It was great reading these last 2 updates in a row!

The pace of this story is wonderful & as for not knowing where you're taking it, you may not know now, but trust me, as a writer, I know the ideas will start taking shape soon ;)

Trust me, girl, you can write romance! That kiss in the kitchen had me swooning

Jeevika's jealousy was actually so adorable, but Viren coming in and spinning her around was something so sweet, it brought a smile to my face

Aadi's is so adorable, I actually want to just steal him

Eager to know what Viren will plan to get from Jeevs :P

Update soon!!

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Mansi

@MyKryan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Read the last 2 parts in one go!

Loved both the updates!

Their convo in the kitchen and the way he lifted her and swirl her around was beautiful. Then the little confession by her and they caught romancing by aadi adds a cherry on top.

Loved their sleeping posture. Also how aadi mimicked him in front of the mirror. They both are adorable. How he waked up his boy was so cute and my most fav part during that.

What Will I Get In Return?" Wiggled My Eyes Mischievously.

"What Do You Want?" She Frowned.

"I'll Think Of Something And Tell Ya." I Shrugged.

These lines make me want more of Virika romance and hopefully a kiss to happen or even hell a confession. Maybe both ;)

Update soon!

PS~ This has became my fav story now! :*