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suju143

@suju143

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

Woowww...New Story :))
OMG...This story concept is so Fresh & Amazing 😊
This is going to be My Favourite Virika story 😊
Just reading 1st chapter & it was Mind blowing !!
Loving Virika's convo at coffee shop :)
Viren & Adi Share some Amazing bond...Lovely <3
Looking forward to read next update very soon...:))
Virika & Adi r just Fantastic :))
Thank for pm :)
continue soon :)
So you don't continue your other Stories :'( "I loved you the First moment I Saw You" Is My favourite story. But I can understand...So Its okkk..!!!

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Fairuz Maliha

@virikamaliha

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

awesomeee...

i am gonna love that sotry...

just sooo sweet..

aadi is sooo cute...

the bond viren and aadi share just sooo sweet...

now i understand why u said that viren were frist parents...well said..

i lam looking forward to this story...u better not wait us more and update soon.. :p

i am sure jeevs gonna loves aadi..

i love the convo between aadi and viren...

update soon...

but plzzz continue YML plzzz...thats my fav one...

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Mansi

@MyKryan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow! New ff!

Loved it so much.

Tho I've Read some part of this earlier 😉

It was amazing!

The characters, the storyline, everything is perfect

And dare you discontinued the two stories. Atleast Bundle of joy, please just for me. 😕

Continue soon!

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dolly thakur

@dauli987

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

its NYC..
but pls continue yr stories
I really luv it

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sushmakryan

@sushmakryan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

wow new ff loved it

when i will read new story i will be happy

and i like your all story and i loved to read more

in the first update itself i loved it and it is becoming my fav story now

i loved all the character here and i loved virika conversation

and i loved addi it is a new concept and it will be the best

loved jeevika and addi relation

totally

amazing

superb

fantastic

mind blowing

splendid

wonderful

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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VirikaLuver

@VirikaLuver

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing beginning
Can't wait to start reading ur new story
Interesting n fresh concept
Adi n Virens bonding is amazing
Can't wait to c how the story continues
Update really soon
Thnx 4 the pm

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

awesome concept

so different

totally amazing

cannot wait to read more

continue soon please

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KryanVirikaLuv

@KryanVirikaLuv

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

This is such a lovely concept!
And what a sweet beginning <3
Loveeed it!!! Viren's relationship with Aadi was really well told
And his reaction about Jeevika "is she going to be my Mummy?"
That was so adorable!
Really interested in how the story will unfold
Do update super soon!