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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Arunima

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Cheeni, if you give such beautiful pieces of writing as birthday treat, I wish you had birthdays every month.😆Frankly, I don't mind if it is a drabble or OS as I enjoyed it fully.

Watching the sun rise over the horizon is one of the most beautiful experiences of life and I am lucky to have experienced it. I love sunrise because of another reason, my name. :)

Having lost his mother, Arnav realised that very high ambition could cost some valuable part of our lives. When he was sitting at the beach, there was guilt, pain. Then came Khushi as the sun played peek-a-boo with the clouds, and gave his life a new direction, a new motive. I loved Arnav for defying logic and science at least this time and enoying the beauty of nature. I am sure his mother would have been really proud. :DThe picture in the banner is serene. I hope you get a convertible soon and fulfill your wish. :D

Aww! I am glad that you feel I understand you the best. Love you <3 🤗

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aimmy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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It's a drabble? I was expecting an OS. But I'm more than happy as It's your first drabble you see 😆

Let me start with the banner. So soothing. And taken by you? Awesome👏

Before starting the actual Comment let me ask something. You have a thing for lawyers?😆

Feel free to ignore this so Dhanno type question😆 You know all stupid questions solemnly belong to me😳🤪

So here we have an other Shade of Arnav Singh Raizada. An ambitious guy who gave everything to his passion and profession. He couldn't make it up to his mother even when she was breathing her last.

Running behind anything that too crazily often leaves you just like him. But I felt his pain. I'm imagining the picture of him standing on the seashore at the sunset with a lost look. And it breaks my heart. Again an Amazing Arnav. He was late but he did understood his passion for his work was taking his sanity away.

My picture of him sitting at the seashore suddenly became bright with the arrival of a Sudden Gupta. The Dimension of the Picture has changed. The sad scenery has changed into a romantic one. Two souls and the sea. Mera din ban gya!

Let me say what I always say. I loved It!

In urdu we use a term. "Darya Ko Koozay Mein Band Karna"

The way you summed up everything in a single drabble! Hats Off!

Do give me more stuff like this!🤗

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Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

I don't even know what is this.. 😆

What the? Birthday treat humare liye???? Haaaye...

Bday girl se buri nazar uthaar rahi hoon :D

Aww this was sooo good! I loved this drabble.. Okay I am not this Khushi. I am not such a fond lover of nature. Two days se bore ho jaati hoon. Silence is not my thing. One day is fine.. So, Arnav's thoughts about what his mom said was understandable. But you know what in this fast paced life, we are always behind materialistic thing, which give us momentary happiness. We end up assuming this to be the real happiness, we have been waiting for. Alas, only when it really happens, do we realise. "We understand value, only when we lose it." Same is Arnav's case. It is okay to not participate in the rat race. It is okay to sit back and enjoy. The real pleasures can be experienced only then. Ah she is surely the streak of positivity in his life. Sometimes, it just clicks and it happens. And life has really a strange way of making us realise and understand. But the impact is there. If you observe, it creates a catastrophe and gives a gift too. That is life! Wow these two kissed. Ahem ahem Arnav is fast! Ah Saturday here too? My heart is wishing for the next Saturday and its happenings. Will you fulfill it? Please my sweetie.

And OMG OMG you have written this especially for us. Wow I am so happy. You are the best! Absolutely best!

I am always here for you Cheenu! We haven't known each other for long, but we both Have gelled together like house on fire. I will always love you my black cheese girl!

My special gift to you:

Googleji se better pic nahi mili.. Chal I am off to sleep too! Bye baby <3 I love you, bas! Forgot to tell, wow this click was too good...Aww We are special that we get your click as the banner!

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cheesemad

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Posted: 10 years ago

Updated! Now off to sleep, I LOVE MY BED <3

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Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad
Updated! Now off to sleep, I LOVE MY BED <3

You don't LOVE CHEESE SANDWICH OR BLACK COFFEE, SUGARLESS?!! Morning breakfast I am serving! 😉

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Rish_Rubles

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Was this romance? Was it emotional? Was it a story filled with regret or the start of a new Lovestory? I couldnt understand and the other thing which is not making me satisfied is how do you fit all the genres in a single story, heck a drabble? Writing drabble on a single genre is hella task for me, and did you just mix all of them in your drabble? *face palm*

Can I just hug you for writing this, I had fought with my mum after something and just laid down to read some stuff when I came across this one, and you here were sitting to teach me lesson, Thankyou for that. Parents are the biggest blessings, one should care for them and their desires till they are alive rather than looking after our own silly wishes. Our wishes can wait, not matter how important they are, our parents desires should be our first priority. This world will end someday for all of us, nobody knows the time when, so we should actually care for everybody around us!

Arnav's story was sad but at last he found solace in a new entry which is Khushi. Her character is seriously so soothing.

Brilliant job for writing this piece. Love you!

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Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I am So glad someone sent me the link n NO it's not u who did tht 😔🥱

But umm I am assuming that N is me 😳🤗

Will be back

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Omg I actually felt I was standing with Arhi there while reading this ...it was beyond beautiful 😃

Khushi is as always the crazy self 😉?..and I loved the somber Arnav 😛

Pretty palpable and Though I haven't been to This place u mentioned but I felt like I have been there ..see that is the power of ur writing ..u make me wanna " visualize " and Cheeni that is a HUGE thing 👏

Sorry for the late reply ..I am catching up 😆

Love u n Thanks so much for the special mention 😛U deserve it 😳

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