Praja ff: Far away love updated chapter 11 on pg 15 - Page 13

Vibha

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Hey I will re-read the entire story and then Unress my comment

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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Vibha

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Hey I will re-read the entire story and then Unress my comment

Sorry

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beautiful writing 👏

Originally posted by: RuVa

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Will comment as soon as I can!

Lots of love,

RuVa

Originally posted by: dsm123

beautiful writing 👏

such an emotional update

feeling sad for Ratan...hope she gets justice soon

loved praja bonding ❤️

Originally posted by: poeple1234

Take your time Ruva!😊

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Excellent chapter Vibha!!


It was very revealing about Pratap's internal struggle about trying to keep Ajabde safe and taking her help to find out more about Ratan...

That is a touch question and you showed that inner battle very well!! 👏👏

Pratap going to sleep next to Ajabde and then Ajabe's cooking for Pratap, for some reason was so so lovely... ❤️ I think it portrayed their love for each other in a very elegant and beautiful manner 😳😳😳

I feel so bad for Ratan... poor thing was cheated by that monster US!! 😡😡

But Pratap just promised his Ajabde that Ratan will get her justice and we all know our Pratap always keeps his promise...

US, you are gone!!

Again, excellently written Vibha and I look forward to the next chapter!!

Lots of love,
RuVa

Originally posted by: RuVa

UNRESS


Excellent chapter Vibha!!


It was very revealing about Pratap's internal struggle about trying to keep Ajabde safe and taking her help to find out more about Ratan...

That is a touch question and you showed that inner battle very well!! 👏👏

Pratap going to sleep next to Ajabde and then Ajabe's cooking for Pratap, for some reason was so so lovely... ❤️ I think it portrayed their love for each other in a very elegant and beautiful manner 😳😳😳

I feel so bad for Ratan... poor thing was cheated by that monster US!! 😡😡

But Pratap just promised his Ajabde that Ratan will get her justice and we all know our Pratap always keeps his promise...

US, you are gone!!

Again, excellently written Vibha and I look forward to the next chapter!!

Lots of love,
RuVa

Originally posted by: poeple1234

Thank you so much for such a long review. I'm sorry that I hardly ever gave a long review to you or anyone, I hardly get the time. And then, thanks again for your kind words. I'm glad you found it good, that too after making all you guys wait for such a long time. Yeah, US is so gone! Will update soon.😃

Hi Vibha!

No need for sorry darling,I'm just happy to have you read the story at all 😃

And you are most welcome hun, you are a very good writer!! 😃😃👏

Don't worry about the wait - we are not going anywhere, will stick till the end of the story, 😃 😉

Lots of love,
RuVa