Praja ff: Far away love updated chapter 11 on pg 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys! On demand, I've posted a sneak-peek of a new ff, Far away love. Please read and comment. I'll start if I get enough encouragement.


"Ajab, you know I've to leave you behind even if I don't want to. You know that right?, he said, glancing at her. He knew she would be upset. " It wont be safe for you to go with me right now, I'm really sorry I broke my promise..." he trailed off as he felt his cell vibrating. He picked it up. " Hello...yes, any update on the situation...oh no...I'm coming asap...". Her beautiful doe kohl-lined eyes stared at him, searching him for answers. Pratap looked at her with guilt in his eyes. She knew immediately. "Do you have to leave this evening for London?", she asked in a low voice. He nodded. "You should change first you know" he told as she stood up to help him with the packing
"I don't think you'd be able to move around in your wedding attire" She quietly nodded and as she went past him, he caught her arm which was decorated with henna till her shoulder. He stared at her...

That is all for now...


Index

Pg no. chapter no.
2 1,2
3 3
4 4
5 5
6 6
7 7
8 9
9 11
10 13
11 15
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful start vibha! ๐Ÿ‘So,praja are getting separated on the day of their wedding.
Pls continue as i'm waiting for the updates..๐Ÿ˜›
BTW,i'm first.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice start! Please continue and update soon๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

Beautiful start vibha! ๐Ÿ‘So,praja are getting separated on the day of their wedding.
Pls continue as i'm waiting for the updates..๐Ÿ˜›
BTW,i'm first.๐Ÿ˜Š

Yes my firstie! Ajab has just arrived in her in-laws home. let me get a few more likes and replies then i'll start... i know i'm being selfish... BTW, have you received everything for the NL?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey vibha interesting start seems promising ๐Ÿ‘
I definitely want to read more ๐Ÿ˜Š
Continie asap ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poeple1234

Yes my firstie! Ajab has just arrived in her in-laws home. let me get a few more likes and replies then i'll start... i know i'm being selfish... BTW, have you received everything for the NL?

@bold-No vibha!๐Ÿ˜ญ Still 2 entries are remaining-dialogue of the week and veer putra/putri of the week.I'm waiting for them to start with the NL.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful starting plz update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey vibha nice prologue do continue ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

@bold-No vibha!๐Ÿ˜ญ Still 2 entries are remaining-dialogue of the week and veer putra/putri of the week.I'm waiting for them to start with the NL.

we have to do something about it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poeple1234

we have to do something about it...

Well,i have sent PM's to them.Hope they reply soon.

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