Arshi SS : Color of Distance : Thread1 : Chap 13 : pg 103 Apr9th

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Posted: 10 years ago
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finally u r back dear
that was a bang on update after ur return
lets c how are u going to unreveal the story
felt bad for the little boy

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Posted: 10 years ago
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K, My hearty congratulations for your next writing venture. The title "Colors of Distance" itself is very interesting and I am sure you will weave every chapter colorfully.

Prologue is very interesting and well written. At this time I don't want to speculate and will wait for the story to unfold.


Edited by jduke - 10 years ago
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Un res

I am pretty damn sure that the little boy is Arnav Singh Raizada, Its very refreshing to see Arnav hating his mom than loving her to fullest. I am guessing Arnav hates women now.

Amazing start akka, I love it
Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 10 years ago
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Welcome back P.

Very interesting prologue.

A woman who had a miscarriage recently, apparently not in the right sense of mind went away leaving her loving husband and weeping son behind and the worst part is the little kid seems to be affected a lot by his mother's going away like that.

Now I know its the Raizadas, but is it Arnav and Khushi or Arnav's parents is something which is to be seen.

But the prologue scene was very intense and waiting to see if the entire story is going to be this way or a roller coaster ride is in store for us later on.


Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago
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awesome prologue k...seems pretty intense ... now these he and she r arnav and khushi ...or arnav parents :)...just thinking as a boy falling and saying i hate u mom...so thought maybe ...:)...but i need to wait and read next... congrats u came back with a bang...all the best for ur new story...thank u so much for ur kind words and love :)...hugs and love
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The prologue was bang on , who are in the prologue is it Arnav and Khushi I hope not because Khushi cannot leave Arnav like that unless and untill she has a strong reason and she cannot say that she does not love Arnav anymore 😭😭 .

Thanks for the kind words I think you said too much about me 😆😆. Will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome back K. Very impressive start without revealing the characters. 👏

I think I know who could that couple be. But I am going to seal my mouth from guessing and let you reveal the story. Cannot wait to meet your Arnav and Khushi and the sizzling chemistry between them...😳




Edited by ToxicLove - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratulations my lovely pandu...nyc prologue...thoda jatke hein...i definitely feel its arnv parents. fingers crossed...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi,
Welcome back with a new story.
The prologue increased my curiosity on this story...
Thanks for pm.
Do update soom

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