KaYa TS- ll Aafaton ke Parindey.. Ishaqzaade ll Ch. 1 (5/6)

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

hmm so they escaped and now busy with their own documentary 😉.

i would like to have them stranded in some cave or more conveniently an abandoned ''raj haveli ''.

I don't know if you have experimented with this setting still I hope and expect for something on haveli .considering the current track of show and your story I think an abandoned palace in the mid of jungle with lashing rains outside would look better.I also think that there are enough insects who can scare our Ms.Kashyap and compel her to make an ugly fall on Mr.Sharma.Just a Suggestion.😊😊

the story and lines were as always enthralling and enchanting.

thanks for the pm and awaiting for the next part.😊😊

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Diya0519

@Diya0519

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Brilliant story👏

Would want to know who helped them escape and how they manage to get outta the jungle.

Your stories are really intriguing and I've become a huge fan of your stories.

Eagerly awaiting next chapter.

Thank you for the PM

Continue soon

Regards,

Diya

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eternalasha

@eternalasha

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

my favourite part "it was unfamiliar for him to look at another woman and not feel threatened. It was unlike for him to immediately trust someone"

@bold - was so unexpected and yet made so much sense

Your posts a joy to read. and your fiction. No wonder your writing feels so familiar I loved Arjun and diligently read the wonderful Arakshi fictions.

Can you please send me a link of your blog with Beneath it All - Part 2

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frustrated12233

@frustrated12233

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

U Olways this good huh!!!!!??

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lakshmi

@ShasthaaPriyaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Wow man!Whenever i read your works I honestly fail to understand whom I Love more!KaYa or your writing skills!😃😳 Beautifully written!👏 Please continue soon!😭 I can't stop these stupid goosebumps!☺️

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supriya.ipkknd

@supriya.ipkknd

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

You write so beautifully <3

It was amazing.

The way you started.. The way you described the situation vividly... It created a visual imagination in my mind and I think that is very important for a writer to do... to actually bring out that scene in the reader's mind.

I think you were great. Absolutely brilliant :)

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

@PrInCeSs_dIVa

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Lovely!! it was amazingly beautiful!! :-)

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

So, the lovestory did pay off well, the guard helped the escape for sure.Though this isnot gonna happen in the show.
Even if they keep fighting, their concern for eachother remains the same, the mere thought of anything happening to the other scares them.
Dream adventure trails, documentary on wild animals, only Kabir Sharma can crack jokes in such a tense situation.
'Wohi hoga jo ek lovestory mein hota hain',
Well the real Love story begins now.
Great update.
Loved it :)

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Nice Story ... Her craziness will make his life all happening !

The pull is strong and equal.

Thank for the PM =D

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

mind blowing update
uff kaya nok jhok 😆
loll kabir answer on Ananya's question was quite funny 🤣
wow someone really helped kaya to escape 👏
awe ananya in kabir arms & just rain how romantic 😳
continue soon

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