CITYLIGHTS - ARNAV AND KHUSHI FAN FICTION;CH15;PG43 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
I really want to know arnav's past

Awesome updt
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just read the prologue, it was intriguing and very interesting! There are number of questions in my mind.
i will soon try to finish all the chapters:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CITYLIGHTS

CHAPTER 7 - WARMTH


'Oh love, give me another chance.Perhaps the beauty lies in your heart.'

"Khushi" he whispered as he sat next to her.She lifted her face to see him with her red eyes realising his eyes were just as red.

"You...you were crying ?" She asked in a barely audible voice.

"No. I wasn't."

"Your eyes are red." she accused.

"Ya. I got some allergy." He replied, looking away from her.

"Um. I'm sorry Khushi. I shouldn't have shouted like that." She looked up to him and started sobbing again.

Before he could say anything ,the light went out and she hugged him tightly, scared.Trying to find solace in those unknown arms, trying to find love from someone who was still a stranger.She cried, her hands drilling more and more in his shirt.Her heart pained, she was tired, she was vulnerable.

To her surprise, he hugged her back tightly as well. He hugged her, closing his warm eyes.
Trying to solve this puzzle in his life.Trying to find comfort in her. He didn't cry but he didn't let her go.He wanted her. He didn't know why.He just wanted her to be there with him at that moment. Feeling her cry against his chest all this was unknown, mysterious and strange yet he didn't know why it felt so lovely.
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"NK, I don't care. You know the rules. You break them, I shoot you."

"But sir, I have been loyal throughout my life. I wish to end this."

"You can't son. Now leave or you want hell ? By the way do give me your wife's number, been some time since I last saw her." The man winked.

"You're disgusting." An enraged NK said as he slapped him.

Bullets echoed the whole building.
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The dog's howl brought them to the present. They both came out of each other's embrace and looked at each other.

That was the first time he noticed the depth in her eyes.

Something had happened, they didn't know what. Suddenly something had changed and something had developed.

He got up from the bed and gave her some water.

"Did you eat anything ?"She nodded her head in a no.

After a few minutes, she found him returning with a plate of noodles.

"Um, I'm sorry. I just know how to make this."She was touched, he cooked for her.She tried to eat but her body had got extremely weak due to all the crying.

"Um. Wait." He said as he held her hand and started feeding her.

"Thank you." she smiled at him.

Khushi got up in the middle of the night and saw him sleeping.Her head was paining she felt shivers down her body.

"Are you cold ?" His calm voice asked her.She simply nodded her head. It indeed was one of the chillest winter nights.

"Do... do you want me.. to hug you ?"

"I don't know."

He touched her forehead and saw the temperature lowering.Without another word, he took her in his arms and she immediately fell asleep in his arms. He closed the lamp and slept keeping his head on hers.
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HI EVERYONE ! 😃
I know, I know ! very short again. My apologies.
THANKS A LOT TO ALL THOSE WHO LIKED AND COMMENTED. ❤️
P.S. - CHECK OUT MY FIRST ARSHI OS - THE WINTER SOLDIER





Edited by Citylights28 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
wow awesome update loved it can't wait for next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Hey dear..
read it in ago..

I loved this kind of stories..

Lots of suspense...

But at the same time, my head is breaking without knowing further.. Please do update soon..

Its already a day since u updated yarr...

I dont like this sheetal... please dont allow her to touch Arnav anymore dear.. I hate her.. I just hate her..

Its my kind request

and about NK.. I would love to have in this story..

Please dont kill him na... pls pls pls... I love NK soo muchh..

Shyam as a doctor.. varey vaa...

I liked Aman's role in it.

On the whole I loved it.. after so many day, I got to read something like this ...

Thanks for the PM..

sorry If i spoked too much.. hehehe ..

Its my habit.. speaking
Edited by Nakshu_Haya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its intriguing
plss solve the mystey soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey!
So, when I read your other story, The Winter Soldier I thought I should give a try to your other stories. I liked the prologue as I have mentioned earlier in my comment. It had right blend of information and mystery, I liked that.

Honestly, I can never write a story like this because I feel I have to think a lot to write something of this genre. So, I appreciate and admire every mystery writer :D

Coming to the story, I am liking it. I liked Khushi's character and I loved Aman's character too but I could not get anything substantial about Arnav. I am a bit confused, why? I would love to tell you:

(1) He cares for Khushi, I liked that.
(2) He had a bad past, which has not been revealed yet, I would love to know about it.
(3) What is he doing with Sheetal. I can understand he is tolerating her because of her brother and his boss. But even after marriage he is involved with her, I did not like that still it is too early to judge his character.

So, all in all it liked the story very much.

Also, I am a little confused between what is present and what is flashback. At one moment, ArHi are talking at the other moment NK is cursing someone.

Also I would like to say that, please do not stop writing this story as you have very well built the mystery and I am looking forward to know what future holds :D

Thanks!
Edited by cheesemad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ch6: My heart aches for Khushi 🥺 She has been thrown into this farce of a marriage not knowing anything about her supposed husband. A husband who doesn't love her, cheats on her and yet married her. Why Arnav? I fail to understand... 😒
Edited by brishti84 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ch7: So he feels guilty and is being nice towards her. I guess that's a start. Arnav has lost so much and gone through so much pain. Hopefully he'll be able to see that's he's putting another innocent person through similar heartbreak through no fault of her own.

Sorry for the late comments but do continue this story. Thanks for the PM.

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