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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am on vacation these days and watching Reporters in hotel room..
I am not happy with this ongoing track...😭
Here, I write one shot on KaYa...
It's emotional one..
Worthy for tomatoes and eggs.
I didn't even checked it and I seriously don't know how I wrote..Please forgive me if I did some mistakes..
And one more thing, part in red is mature content. Read at your own risk..It's quite 18+. It wouldn't be so hot as I wrote it without paying much effort...



Ananya's pov...
Time has advanced and the world has changed a lot. But I am still the same as you left me. I am middle-aged women for the world but I am truly the same girl whom you loved. You brought me out of darkness and filled my life with love and care. I am living for fulfilling your last wish and I completed my purpose today. I know you are always around me and loved me in the same way. I know you are not the part of this human world but the difference of these two worlds can't separate us. I am standing in front of your portrait. Your eyes are making me remember the time when we met.

*~Flashback~*

I am a living corpse marching on this road. I am broken and hopeless soul who didn't want to further suffer the twinge of being a reliant girl. I wish to hug my death. I gazed at the deepness of sea jerking under the bridge. I know that the waves are ready to welcome me and I don't want to waste a moment to visit them. I closed my eyes and prepared to secure myself in the lap of this sea. Next moment, I felt a force pulling me back to ground. I opened my eyes to comprehend the situation. I found a man holding me tight. His eyes were filled with care and concern. He is not looking like other men whose eyes were filled with lust. I heard his words "Are you alright ma'am?" His voice was melodious and loving. I didn't have power left in my body to admire him and I collapsed on the ground and lost my senses.

I woke up and found myself on bed. I located the picture of same person on wall. I realized that I am at his home. I never met such nice person in my life. Then, I saw the same figure coming towards me. He asked me for food and I denied. He insisted me to have food and I went weak in front of him. He asked me to sleep on bed and he could adjust on sofa. I agreed but I am feeling guilty to snatch his comfort from him. I tried many ways but my eyes are not getting ready to close and let me swing in my dream world where there is no pain and sufferings. I get up from bed and stand on his window recalling worst memories of my life. I know a tear is sliding from my eye to my cheek and then to my chin. These tears are worthless water and it will end up evaporating from plain and will mix up in this atmosphere. But I felt something different. A fisted hand caught it and it absorbed in his skin. I looked at him and he was looking at that drop trickled from my eye.

Third Person Pov

Kabir looked at her and placed his hands on her shoulder. He made her sit on couch and tried to comfort her.

Kabir: What happened to you? I know there's some major problem which is bothering you but you can confide in me. Sharing lessen the burden. I know you don't me but you can trust me.
Ananya: My parents died in road accident 5 years ago. My custody was handed over to my uncle and he also became my legal guardian. He had the power of attorney till I turned 18. On my 18th birthday, he made me sign the documents of permanent company handover to him. Afterwards, he behaved badly with me and one day, he sold me to some lady. I somehow managed to escape from there and then I decided to end up my life and you saved me.

Ananya was horrified and hugged Kabir due to the sound of thunderstorm.

Ananya's pov...(Mature)

I am so scared with the sound of lightening that I hugged him. He is so warm and I am finding comfort near him. I can feel his heart beats fastening. He may like my touch. He takes my arms off from him and looks at me. I am forgetting each and every pain when I am looking in his eyes. I can feel his hands cupping my face. He comes near me and drinks my tear like he is saying that he will take away all my sorrows. He kisses me on my head and then places his lips on my cheeks. He looks at me once again and closed his eyes. He decreases the distance between us and I can feel his lips brushing with mine. I opened my mouth a bit and next moment I can experience his tongue revolving in each corner of my mouth. I love this emotion. He slowly separates his lips from mine. He picks me up in his arms and set me on his bed. He once again crashed his lips with my lips. I can feel him touching all over my body. I want to show more to him. I rise a bit and pulled down chain of my top. I see him smiling. He slides my top down my shoulder and kissed me on my jaw line and collarbone. He also gives me some wet kisses on my shoulders. He raised me a bit and takes away my upper clothes. I thumped on bed. I realize that he is staring at the beauty of my upper body. I closed my eyes and turned my back to him. He kissed me on my back and I can feel his bare body touching mine. He turned me to face him. He gazed at me and he was checking my expression. He buried his face in my cleavage and cupped my feminity. He tasted the cherries on my cup cake which made me moan loud. When he gratified by my upper torso, he moved down. He freed me of my lower clothes and I didn't hesitate to show myself to him this time. He took a look on my body and went down. Next moment, I felt something wet and ticklish in my womanhood. He was roaming his tongue and I was quite screaming. He came up and cupped my face. I realized that he freed himself from clothes. He locked his lips with mine and then I felt the most blissful moment. I felt his manhood in me and I was shouting in his mouth. It was painful for me but it was equally pleasurable. He took away my innocence and purity but he did the honor of turning me into woman. I wrapped my leg around his waist to let him feel me more. After few minutes, we detached from each other. He brought me closer and gives me peck on my lips. He kissed my forehead and I rested my head on his chest.

Next morning, I was the first to wake up. I looked at his face and he was looking like some Greek god. No one loved me at this extent. I saw lust for me in eyes of many men but this man was different. I could only sense love in his eyes last night. I realized that he was gazing at me

Third Person Pov...

Kabir sat on bed and hold her hand

Kabir: Don't think last night as some one night stand. I did it unintentionally. I crossed my limit because I have fallen for you. Yes, I am in love with you since the time I first caught a glimpse of you. I don't know about your reaction but for me, it was only and only love. I want to say that I love you. I didn't take advantage of situation. I truly love you and I made you mine.
Ananya: I love you too. I didn't protest because I trust you. I believe you more than myself.
Kabir: That's little awful but can I know your name?
Ananya: My name is Ananya
Kabir: Ohhh..Nice name. My name is Kabir and I work in Air Force as pilot. What is your profession?
Ananya: I was appointed as Junior Reporter but my uncle didn't allow me.
Kabir: I can understand the pain of losing family. I lost my parents three years ago in road accident.
Kabir took her in his arms. Ananya met with the companion who filled the void in her life. A person who gave her immense happiness. Their time passed in knowing each other's likes and dislikes, loving each other and spending such heavenly nights. Days have passed and one day Kabir received a letter from Air Force Department.

Kabir: I have to leave Ananya. My joining date has proponed.
Ananya: It's OK. That is more important. Apko jana chahiye. Vaise bhi apne bahut holiday bana lia.
Kabir: Fine. I love you and take care of yourself.
Kabir left his house in an hour. She bid him good bye and wiped her tears.
After two weeks, Ananya came to know that she was pregnant. She called Kabir to inform him about the news.
Kabir: Yes Ananya. Is there any problem?
Ananya: Mai aap se tabhi bat karungi jab mujhe problem hogi...
Kabir: Nahi baba.. Mai to aise hi bol rahe the..
Ananya: I want to tell you something. You are going to become father.
Kabir: Really..I am so happy Ananya..Thank you.
Ananya: Also thanks to you.
Kabir: Always take care of yourself and my children. I have to leave now. Bye

Kabir cut the call and went to runaway. He sat in his jet and instructed his co-pilot. Conversely, Ananya was standing in front of his portrait and caressed her belly.
Ananya has nothing to do in evening. So, she switched on TV and turned the channels. She stopped her finger for pressing Ch+ button at KKN news channel. KKN was showing the latest updates of mini war that broke out recently. She glimpsed at the Breaking news and she was downcast after noticing it. The world which was increasing its speed every second has stopped for her. Her emotions were jammed in her body and the voice box stopped to work. She was anesthetized. The words Squadron Leader Kabir Sharma showed his bravery till last breath. He crashed two enemy jets and he bumped into third one to stop its further attack'.
Then a loud scream filled the room. Ananya was back in her senses. She realized that her world has shattered. She sat on floor and cried for hours. In the morning, Ananya was still squatting on floor and her eyes were observing the glittering eyes in the portrait. Then, she heard a sound of doorbell. She opened the door and witnessed the sight that she never wanted to face. She saw a coffin wrapped with the national flag. One of the officers handed her a letter. She unfolded it.

Dear Ananya,

I know when you read this letter, I would be far away from you but don't think it as end. Our love can't be ruined by the phenomena of life and death. We always connected to each other by our soul. I can't stand in front of you but still we can feel each other. We now live in different world and the distance of this world can't be conquered and I don't want to conquer this. I am always grateful to you for giving me so much love and of course, someone to take my name further. You are not alone as I left my part safe in you. Take care of it and I want her/him to serve this nation. I want to name my son as Rajveer or my daughter as Kayra. Moreover, start your life once again and settle yourself with someone better than me. Moving on will never keep you away from me because we can't be away from each other. My eyes, ears and heart stopped to work but I never loved you by my heart. I always loved you by my soul and no one can destroy my soul.
One more request, don't shed your tears. I can't see your tears and not even when you can't see me. Give my last farewell with the same smile which made me fall for you.
I love you and will always love you.

Kabir...

Ananya wiped her tears and prepared for his grand farewell from this world.

Ananya was standing in front of his flaming cadaver. She has the same smile but her eyes were still moist. Then her gaze fall on Kabir's spirit which was looking at her lovingly. A white aura has wrapped him. She smiled to look at him and he too smiled back.

Present...

"Mom"
Ananya turned and looked at the person who inherited the appearance and qualities like her love. She smiled to look at him and placed her hand on his shoulder. He is none other than his part which she kept safe with her.
Rajveer: Mom, I am appointed as Captain in Indian Army.
Kayra: Oye..Don't forget me. I am also appointed as doctor in IAF.
Ananya placed her hands on cheek of her children. She took care of Kabir's two parts and she accomplished her promise today.
Ananya: I am really proud of you and your dad is also proud of you.
Rajveer: More than us, he must be proud of you Mom. You did a great hard work for bringing us at this place.
Kayra: Yes Mom. You cleared every obstacle of your life bravely. Being a single mother is itself a big challenge and you completed that challenge.
Ananya: I love you both. Just work hard and achieve more success. Now, I have to leave.
Kayra: Where are you going Mom?
Ananya smiled and exited from her house. Kayra tried to enquire her once again but Rajveer stopped her.
She signaled her to let their mother go wherever she wants. Kayra nodded and headed back to their living room.

Ananya reached the place where Kabir's jet crashed. It was an open field filled with various kinds of crops. She crouched near his memorial and kept her head on the stone. Then, she felt someone touching her shoulder. She rolled her face and looked at her love. Kabir sat near her and placed his hands on her cheek.
Ananya: I completed my all responsibility today. I fulfilled your wish...You are happy with me.
Kabir: I am very proud of you.
Ananya placed her hand on Kabir's cheek and pecked her lips with his. She was loving him in the same way she did when their bodies were not separated. After few minutes, they took apart their lips.
Kabir: Why didn't you move on?
Ananya: You asked me to move with someone better than you but you are best. No one was better than you.
Kabir smiled and brought her in his arms.
Ananya: Kabir..Will you fulfill my wish today?
Kabir: Of Course...
Ananya: Take me with you.
Kabir: But Ananya.. !!
Ananya: Don't say no. I have finished all my duties. Now, I want to unite my soul with you. I want to break the barrier of this body. I want to clear the distance between our different worlds. I want to live with you. I have spent my holidays on the earth and now, I want to join your world with you. Take me to your world.
Kabir nodded and placed his hand on ther forehead to close her eyes. She smiled and lay down.

Rajveer and Kayra were watching TV. Rajveer went near balcony to attend the call and then he heard a loud scream of Kayra. He went to her and looked at news flashing on screen.

"Editor-in -Chief KKN News Channel has found dead near the memorial of her husband. No one is aware of real reason behind her death".

Rajveer took Kayra to their father's memorial. She saw her mother's lifeless body. She run to her and shaken her in the hope she will get up. Rajveer placed his hands on her shoulders and Kayra hugged her brother.

Rajveer: Don't cry Kayra. WE have to celebrate that Mom is now reunited with Dad. We should be happy that they are together.
Kayra nodded and Rajveer burnt their mother's lifeless body at the place where the same ceremony of their father took place.
Both hugged each other and bid good by to their mother happily.

Kabir forwarded his hand to help Ananya in climbing the stairs to heaven.
Kabir: I always want to achieve this distance with you and that's why I was waiting for you.
Ananya: And now we are going to the place where we can never be parted from each other. The place where all phenomena failed. Now, nothing can separate us.

Kabir and Ananya hugged each other and covered the further distance...

Love can never be demolished and if it is demolished, then it was not love. Love is immortal. It accompanies us even after death.
The End...

That's my crazy piece..I know you all are not going to like it. But try karne me kya jaa raha hai..

Your criticisms and jootas chappals are most welcomed

Edited by KaYa_licious - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW...Beautiful was the only word that came to my mind after reading this. You have written such a wonderful piece or rather master piece. I had tears in my eyes while reading this especially the end was so emotional. Believe it or not... but my eyes were moist semi consciously. The union was written beautifully. KaYa were as usual magical so was their love. The name Kayra was very sweet. The reunion was absolutely amazing and wonderful. Kabir at last took her to his world and him going to heaven with her was marvellous. you were saying that this was worth eggs and tomatoes. Don't disrespect such a lovely piece by saying such things. I really love your KaYa and expect more from you.Do write more and Pm me of ur writings. Thanks for such a beautiful story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi
the os is so nice
ananya awho lost everything found kabir who made her life beautiful but after giving her the love he too got separated from him but left behind his part in her womb and the responsibility of their upcoming bringing
ananya as she promised her love performed her duty but as last she went back to the world where here love was waiting for her

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Otherworldly is what this was!
Simple and yet heart felt.
They were meant to be together in this world and the next!
Good one!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Itna emotional??
Tumne to mujhe rula diya...
It was awsome no words to describe


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazingly written

U deserve a 👏


Love and prayer
Yogini
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG sanya what an os
i was amazed
this is so mind boggling
loved it to the core
beautifully written
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful...
what an os dear!!
such an amazing piece of writing.
u gave voice to your words and they are telling each and every emotion perfectly.
HEAVENLY and MAGICAL os.
i was so stunned to read this awsome peice of work.
and plz after writing such an awsome peice don't say we will through tamatars on you.
tremendous...
marvellous...
what an portrayal of eternal LOVE.
and the ending took my heart away.
it was soo blissful.
m in love with this os.
lots of love...
lavi.
Edited by krazykaju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!! And just wow! I have tears in my eyes!!
Really this is just awsum..!!
Salute to you 😊


~Amber~
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful, absolutely perfect.
The message the book carried was beautiful.
You should write more.

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