Kaya OS || Gone ||

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys! I am Supriya. My first piece on Kaya! I recently caught up with the show and it is one of the best things I have ever seen. Kaya <3 They are a dream.
This OS or you can say a drabble since it is just too damn small, is based on the precap. The OS isbquite ordinary, didn't put much effort into it but I just had to write something on Kaya. Couldn't help it. Hope you like it. Its kind of sad :(
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Gone


I begged like I had never begged before. I screamed like I had never screamed before. I could feel the man beside me, ready to press the trigger. Strong, powerful hands gripped me from behind. I had never felt so helpless, so impotent. I had never been this afraid. Suddenly, he pulled the trigger. The loud, slicing sound ripped through my ears silencing everything around me, its echo reverberating...
And then..
I saw her fall...

I could feel a tug at my heart, an emotion of loss so powerful, so tormenting that I had never encountered before. I mustered all my strength and pushed the sturdy arms binding me, away. I ran towards her tranquil figure and sat down beside it. She gazed at me with her half open orbs. I could see the growing fear inside her eyes, the fear of losing everything, the fear of leaving everything behind. I gently placed my hands beneath her head and rested it on my lap. Her lips were moving. She was trying to say something but no voice escaped her lips. Or maybe I couldn't hear it. I couldn't her anything. With all my nerve I moved my gaze to her deep wound. Her red dress camouflaged the blood pouring out of her chest. The gash was so profound, it shattered half my my hope. Her hands gripped my fingers begging me to try and listen to her, begging me to help her.

And I looked at her, brushing the curly locks of hair away from her pale face and rested my hands on her cheek. I took a deep breath and curved my lips into a small smile to calm her down. Her grip around my fingers was loosening and I could feel a lone tear escape my eyes.

"Shhh... It's going to be okay", I whispered, unsure of my own voice. I gave a small reassuring nod conveying to her that I would take care of everything. She would be okay. And as if she magically understood she gave a small smile. Her eyes were unknown to me, devoid of the sparkle, the fire, the playfulness they usually carried. I held her hand, praying for a miracle, begging her to stay. But deep inside I knew. I knew what was coming. Every second I spent with her flashed across my mind.


"Aapko lagta hain na main Team Manav me hoon. Toh thik hain. Aaj se mujhe bhi yahi lagta hain"

"Aap mujhpe trust karte hain!?"

"Mujhe pata hain aap mujhse nafrat karte hain. Main bhi kuch esa hi feel karti hoon"

She was wrong. She was so wrong.

I bent down and placed a gentle kiss on her forehead. Her gaze never left me. I stayed there, an inch above her face as I saw the light fading out of her eyes, her hands turning cold gradually and finally her grip on my fingers was lost. I don't know how long I sat there, staring at her peaceful face, a gentle smile playing at the corner of her lips, the breeze giving life to her curls. I couldn't bring myself to accept it. But I knew.
She was gone.
Long gone.

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TeekhiMishti thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res 🤣
kyunki tujhe pehle gaali dene ka haq hai sirf mera 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tum ne to maar hi diya ananya ko!!🤣
Wese it was really emotional i almost cried..
Awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haah...it was emotional b8 beautiful darling...keep writing...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oye!! Bechari ko maar dala 😆

You penned down everything so nicely 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maine kya ek raat jaldi sone ki koshish kiya ke tune depression mein Ananya ko mar di 😆 😆

This is actually quite wonderfully written Supi, I usually don't write or read much of tragedy though I do watch it. This is piece described Kabir's emotional mind set in such a situation quite vividly and I could imagine Kabir reacting like this.

It was a very sad ending nevertheless it was good despite Ananya having to die 😆

Kab se bol ri thi KaYa pe likhna hai, likhna hai, likhna hai... aur tune likhte likhte tragedy likh di apne phele KaYa OS mein 😆 wo bhi bahut zabardast tragedy ending.. Heroine ko hi mar di 😆
Edited by .Rinnie. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was beautifully written. But too tragic. If Ananya died in his arms, Kabir would become a living corpse himself. Do you intend to write another part - an epilogue of sorts of how Kabir lives his life after Ananya's death? That would be awesome.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing mind blowing



Love and prayer
Yogini
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well written but you killed my anamya😆
I mean what was that???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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