mananff for me love is you (part 4 updated )

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princess_dia

@princess_dia

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

hi guys i am a silent reader. so i am here to write a story for you guys hope you guys like it.

FOR ME LOVE IS YOU

let me introduce the characters:

MANIK MALHOTRA: he is a rich guy. he is mumma's boy he studies in u.s and loves a girl whom he had seen 10 yeas ago. 10 years he studied in u.s. now he is of 19 years and coming back to his own space academy for further studies with his 4 friends.

NANDANI MURTHY: she met her soul mate 10 years before and she dont know how he looks and she only knows his name. she was in delhi for 10 years and now she is coming back to mumbai.

rest all the characters are same as show.

INDEX

chapter 1

chapter 2

chapter 3
chapter 4

note: (click on chapter it will open automatically)

chapter 1

manik: hi mom. my flight will reach mumbai @9am. so plz send my favourite jeep to pick us all.

nyonika: hi babu. yahh beta i will send it and take care of urself

and eat properly.

manik: ya mom!! now bye i have to check in. they are waiting for me.

cabir: ooo... mumma's boy come fast!!!

manik: shut up!! cabir.

cabir: ok mr.manik malotra if we have ur permission can we?? or have u changed ur mind?

all laughs!!

manik: chal abhi.

In plane,

manik pov

manik remembers his girl. he thinks will she be there i am desperate to meet her.

pov ended.

dhruv: kya hua buddy?

manik: kuch nhi.

dhruv: kya soch rha h?

manik: kuch nhi.

mukti: uske bare mai soch rha h?

manik: umm...ya

alya: dont worry u will meet her!

cabir: hum mr manik malhotra kai liye usko kidar sai bhi dhundh lahengai.

cabir cracks some jokes so that manik can smile.

plane lands!!

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guys plz tell me hows it??

very desperate to know

should i continue?

sorry for typos

and sorry for a short update.

Edited by princess_dia - 10 years ago

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neelakshi.swain

@neelakshi.swain

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

Pls continue dear...
I will def read it..
Pls include nandini next time too..
😃

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Ayesha Nazrat

@musicialtie

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

nice yaar...

nice start...

its cute concept...

bus one suggestion... hange ur title as same is already on air of forum...

so if possible changed the title... Dont take me worng...

continue soon...

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aparnainbox

@aparnainbox

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

It's lovely!! Do continue.. Next time please give a bigger update.. 😉

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anika mehjaben nahin

@mehjaben_nahin

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

seems interesting will deffo read it plz dear cont soon amazing start

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Dhariya

@Dhariya_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Too good

cute concept

Cont soon

(with a bigger update plzz)

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

hey concept seems intersting

Cont soon

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

beautiful concept... loved it
pls continue soon

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

congrats dear 4 story nd wlcm to ky2 forum interesting update I like it update soon

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princess_dia

@princess_dia

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#10

fast update for you guys 😊

chapter 2

plane lands!!!!

they all take their luggage and procedded to check out.

while coming out manik saw a girl in shorts and a loose t-shirt hw was shocked seeing her.

he was seeing her continously and seen her going to a women who was came to pick her and he sees the name on card "nandani murthy".

he was stunned and shouted "nandani"

fab 4 asked what happen??

he told fab 5 that i seen her finally i want to met her now she is here only on airport.

they asked where????

as he turned to show them all she disappeared.

cabir: kidar h??

manik: chali ghi😭

dhruv: tune kisi aur ko dekha hogha

manik: nhi buddy i am sure she was my nandu

cabir: chal lets search have u clicked her pic? or u know her dress so we can find her?

manik: ya i know her dress. she was wearing a blue shorts and white t-shirt.

mukti: lets search guys!

alya: ok we will meet here in 10.

they all splitted in all directions

but they didint find her as she was left with her mom.

manik: milli?

fab 4: no

dhruv: manik dont worry we will meet her. dont worry!!

cabir: ya we will find her

MALHOTRA MANSSION

nyonika: seema,ashok,reena,sab yah aaho

(seema ashok reena and all are the workers work in manssion)

they all replied: yes mam

nyonika: go and clean manik's room and make his favourite dishes

he will be there in 1 hour go fast

they all repled yes maam!!!

after 45 minutes

nyonika's phone ranged

nyonika: bolo manik beta

manik: in low tone he said "mom i will be there in 5 min"

nyonika: haa beta. kya hua tumhe?

manik: kuch nhi mom...i will come and tell u

nyonika: ok come fast cant wait more

manik: hmm mom.

after 15 minutes

MALHOTRA MANSSION

manik arrived

manik: mom mom mumma!!! where are u??

nyonika came with aarti

nyonika: wait dont come inside

nyonika takes his aarti and then tells him to come now

he hugged tightly to her. nyonika can feel he is sad

nyonika: what happended? why are u liked this?

manik: i seen nandani

nyonika: wow u meet her!! how is she? where is she? did u talked to her?

manik: naa i seen her but i didint talked. i want to meet her now😭

nyonika: i have a surprise for u

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so hows it guys??

sorry for typos

stay tuned...

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