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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update... post soon & plz do pm me plz...
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Good u continued...
I was thinking where u disappeared...
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#13
its a cute story
continue soon

imagine in the show Niyonika coming with aarti ka thal
it will be so shocking for everyone
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Great update...looking forward to the meeting
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Amazing update... post soon & plz do pm me plz...
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CHAPTER 3

nyonika: i have a surprise for you!

manik: what ma? tell fasssttt!!!! you know na i can't wait.

nyonika: wait!! wait!! have patience

manik: tell fast na ma!!

nyonika: i have renowated your room!

manik: what???...why??

nyonika: what why? i am your mom i have the right to do anything!

manik: aree...mom i don't mean that...i am telling you know na that i like to keep my things in my own way.

nyonika: calm down! first go and see your room i am sure you will come and thank me!

manik: what?

nyonika: go fast and see..

(manik runs to his room)

manik was shocked😲 to see the room with the pics of girls on the wall

manik: mom...mom...mom (he shouted)

nyonika: kya hua itna chila kyu rhi ho?

manik: yeh kon h kiske pics lagahe h?

nyonika: tumne phechana nhi😲?

manik: nhi...batao na who is she? she looks familiar.

nyonika: aree... yeh tumhari girl h ...jisai tum itna pyaar karte ho...jise tumne aaj airport pai dekha😊

manik: really😲...??

nyonika: yup

he was so happy and staring at nandani and he thanked her

MURTHY'S HOME

she came home and met her parents, amms, brother and chacha n chachi. she talked to them about 10 years. and they ate food toghether

nandani's mom: nandu i have a surprise for you!

nandani: kya mom?...jaldi btao u know na i love surpries

nandani's mom: go see ur room

nandani rushed to her room and seen the room was full of manik's pics
she rushed towards her mom and thanked her

nandani's mom: liked it na?

nandani: my best surprise till now...mom i am very happy

nandani's mom: i have one more surprise for you!!!

nandani: what?...say fast na

nandani's mom: i have done your admission to space academy

nandani: wow!!!...manik's colg😃

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how's it guys?? do comment!!!!!
sorry for typos
reply about my work please
and how i am doing
stay tuned...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update please continue soon and this time long update please this update is so short.
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Awww... the mom's r so sweet... can't wait for the meeting
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awesome loved it update soon
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chapter 4

malhotra mansion

nyonika: happy? finally u seen her?

manik: yaa mom she is soo beautiful

nyonika abhi bas kaar aur niche aa ja mai khana laghati hu

manik: hmm

after 10 minutes
manik freshen up and comes down for dinner

nyonika: i have one more surprise for u

manik: kya??

nyonika: kal bhatahunghi

and nyonika goes in kitchen to keep the things after dinner

manik: mom plz tell me now na plz!!!

nyonika: nhi

manik: plz

nyonika: acha baba btati hu rukk!!

manik: jldi!!!!!!!!

nyonika: nandani ka humare colg mai admission ho gya hai

manik: what?? really??😲

nyonika: yes and vo kal colg bhi aa rhi h yeh dekh uska form

manik: sees her form and he is damm happy

chal abhi soo ja kal ussai milna hai na

in morning

murthy's home

nandani's mom: nandu utth ja colg kai liye late ho jaheghi aaj tera phela din hai

as she hears this and get up in hurry and shouts manikk!!! she reays fast and come down fast and taken and apple and hugs her mom and leave for collage

malhotra mansion

nyonika: manik uth ja aur colg ja late ho jaheghi!!

he too gets up while shouting nandu's name and fresshen up and messages to fab 5 that he will be there to pick all in 5

first he picks up kabir then dhruv than alya and than mukti

fab 5 in manik's jeep way to colg:

cabir: aaj itna kush kyu lag rha h?

dhruv: ha buddy to humsai kuch chupara hai kya?

mukti: aur yeh baar baar phone kyu dekh rha h?

alya: yeh tumhare phone pai konsi ladhi ka pic h?

cabir: abhe oye tune humai btaya bhi nhi kisko pta liya? aur nandani ko bhul gya?😲 aur kisi aur ko?😕

manik: guys shut up! phele mujhe kuch bolne ka mauka toa do!!

fab4: jldi bol

manik: nandani aaj colg aa rhi h

all: kya😲???? kaise???

manik: mom told me that her admission is done to our colg and she will be further studying with us

all: what ?? really???😲

manik: yes😳 and i have one more thing to show you

all: what???

manik takes his phone and shows nandanis photo to all

all: yeh kon h??

manik: thoda socho...😉

all: nandani?

manik: ya😳

mukti: aww...sho chweet he is blushing guys

alya: aww...manik

cabir: the manik malhotra blushing abhi toa yeh sabko pta chalna chahiye jo ladka muskurata nhi hai aaj vo itna kush h and blush kar raha h vo bhi nandani ki pic dekh kar toa aage kya karegha baba mai to nandani kai pahu chungha usne the monster manik malhotra ko bina dekh kai badal diya😛

manik: cabirrr😡!!!!!!!!!!!

cabir: hahahaha the monster malhotra is back!!!

dhruv: bas karo tum sab n buddy ko tang nhi karo

they all reach to colg and manik is very happy and nandu is very happy to but nandu is nervous too she was thinking if manik had forgoton her if he dont like her then😔

then manik turns and sees a girl with ice blue jeans and pink crop top and she was struggling with her hairs and her papers

manik: guys u all go inside and i will be in audi in 5.

nandu: aiyapa yeh sab mere saath kyu hota h

manik comes there and help her

after hellping he sees her face and said nandani

she sees up and sees its manik

she was happy in mind

nandani was schocked to see him he was looking dam hot

she sees her from top to bottom manik was wearing blue t-shirt and black jeans

nandani: blushed☺️ and said thank you and ran away

manik wats to run after her but he get a calls from cabir and he asks where are you? manik says bus aa rha hu he thought she is here only na will meet her again

cabir: kha tha tu?

manik: vo mai...

mukti: nandani ko dekha?

manik: vo...

alya: guys usse tang mat karo

cabir: aa ghi manik ki cham chi no.1

mukti: bta na manik?

dhruv: guys bas kar manik ko tang nhi karo

mukti: lo yeh bhi aa gya aur ek manik ka ladla

manik: guys bas karo ...mai btata hu...ha mai nandani sai milke aya...but maine ussai baat nhi ki...

all: kyu?

manik: vo blush karke bag ghi ☺️

all: ohhh...

manik: bas abhi hum practise kare


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so guys how was it?? plz comment your views and was it short?? should i continue?? waiting for your replies!!!

sorry for typos

stay tuned and share your views...


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