FF: An Italian Serenade-pt3-pg17-9/28

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An Italian Serenade - Walias Go to Italy
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Short background:

Ms. Bani Dixit, the esteemed Horse Jockey who won Indian Derby got married to Mr. Jai Walia on the sly and got estranged from him after discovering she has a bun in the oven. Mr. Walia is a business tycoon who has a fat ego (for those of you who are expecting anything else, sorry!) , a quick , cutting tongue and even quicker, volatile temper.

So they love, they hate, they fight, they separate, they come back together -phew...finally!!

If Mrs. Walia is a horse jockey and a talented writer, Mr. Jai Walia is no less talented. The multi faceted Mr. Walia is horseback rider, airplane pilot, a violinist and an archer to the boot!

Then we have the usual suspects - Ranveer (rough edged renegade, who has a biting tongue and brooding attitude), Rano (acidity is thy middle name, a regular sour puss and compulsive gambler to the boot and I have a strong feeling she passed it on to her offspring, Rohan)....

Pia (Gee whiz, she forgot her witch's broom when she was born, in this FF, but a fashion designer who wants to revamp Walia's outdated wardrobe and put the pizzazz in Pushy's already zany get up), Pushy is the womanizer with a roving eye, who got caught in Pia's fishing net...Poor chap.

Tarun is wooing Rashi...I think he is really chasing the client in the hope Rashi would sue Ranveer for ditching her to go after Rano. Walia is not paying him enough.

Jigyasa is booted out from the Walia mansion, but Adity needed someone to sharpen his wit on, so she is back traveling with them.

Anu and Rohit: Anu is preggers, recently married, after the fact (of course)...

Nachiketh Walia: Recently accepted by JW as the not so hip sibling who has the ill fortune of being the son of a very hip mom who is attracting rich and eccentric men who have the 'A'ddiction to 'A' words...

Vishesh aka Vishy and Vikrum (Vik), the Rakhi brothers of the Dixit sisters. They are from Hyderabad/US who are accepted members of the Mensa, whose quick wit makes even the best of the lot to shiver in their boots.

Sahil, Dadi, Maasi are of course in the game, Sahil the only dim witted member (I think some one switched him at birth)...Dadi is in search of Salman Khan, she heard he is from Italy in Dil De Chuke Sanam..Maasi was overruled by dadi, no teerth yaatras for her, she heard that Italian men like portly women with a taste for good food...

Of course there have to be little people in the equation, little Reya, the rays of fire (Named after JR - Jwala Reya) - daughter of JW and BW;

Rohan (a kissophobic kid who wears glasses like mama and a tikka like his dad) - OK - I don't want your brains to be overworked on whose kid he is...Rano and Ranveer's ladli beta...

Both Reya and Rohan are 5+ years old.

Occasional occurrences are good looking hairy I-talian men and Portly, hairy I-talian women, The Ad-bhoot Aparajit Dev and if the story develops my brain might even make an appearance.

SO what are the Walia's doing in Italy??

They are in search of Maansi - Vikrum's ex-girlfriend who ran away five years ago, I think she was mad that she was not a member of the Mensa....

So now that introductions are over, I will continue the story tomorrow....

Yes, this is kind of like Munnabhai goes to America, even though I haven't seen it...Plagiarism be damned... Did I say that, don't worry, Tarun Sablok is making a friendly appearance and he is not into copyright law....

Links to other parts.

Prologue:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=719293&T PN=4

Part 1:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=719293&T PN=8

Part 2:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=719293&T PN=14
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I will post the prologue tomorrow...

PS: You don't have to read CITW (which according to my word doc is about 435 pages) to read WGTI (Walias to to Italy)...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh wow... 😛 Sounds interesting... 😃 Great start Di... 👏 Can't wait for the first part... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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carry on sounds really great
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow, sounds interesting...the way you put it makes me think that we are in store for a comedly? Am I right?
btw I love when you said "Tarun is wooing Rashi". I got a very funny image in my head of Tarun running after Rashi begging her to be his 😆 😆 - me and my silly imagination, we are quite a pair!

Can't wait till you post it!
Lots of love
Sweetu
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Lighter vein coming up? We are all for it!!! I'm excited, getting the popcorn...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This spin off sounds extremely interesting and the manner in which the characters were described was awesome with a touch of humour in it 😆 👏 Can't wait to see now how the entire Walia Khandaan's trip lasts
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free to make inapproppraie comments?? 😆 😆

well most likely mine wont be funny.. bt you start the story and then we'll see!

Loved the introductions!!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Hello all:

This is a spin-off to Candle In The Wind...

Introduction


The Walias go to Italy -

Short background:

Ms. Bani Dixit, the esteemed Horse Jockey who won Indian Derby got married to Mr. Jai Walia on the sly and got estranged from him after discovering she has a bun in the oven. Mr. Walia is a business tycoon who has a fat ego (for those of you who are expecting anything else, sorry!) , a quick , cutting tongue and even quicker, volatile temper.

Bun in the Oven?😆😆😆 That is the cutest term I have heard for a Pregnancy!

So they love, they hate, they fight, they separate, they come back together -phew....finally!!

All great love stories are based on the theme of love and hate! And they never fail to win their audience!

If Mrs. Walia is a horse jockey and a talented writer, Mr. Jai Walia is no less talented. The multi faceted Mr. Walia is horseback rider, airplane pilot, a violinist and an archer to the boot!

A horse jockey? Wow...Now that is truly different! Any woman who loves horses will definitely have a good taste in everything, including men!

And any guy who can play the violin has my heart already!😳

Then we have the usual suspects - Ranveer (rough edged renegade, who has a biting tongue and brooding attitude), Rano (acidity is thy middle name, a regular sour puss and compulsive gambler to the boot and I have a strong feeling she passed it on to her offspring, Rohan)....

I like it, I like it a lot!

Pia (Gee whiz, she forgot her witch's broom when she was born, in this FF, but a fashion designer who wants to revamp Walia's outdated wardrobe and put the pizzazz in Pushy's already zany get up), Pushy is the womanizer with a roving eye, who got caught in Pia's fishing net...Poor chap.

😆😆😆 Your description for Pia has me in splits. Poor Roshni must be ruing the day she agreed to take on her character in KS!

Tarun is wooing Rashi...I think he is really chasing the client in the hope Rashi would sue Ranveer for ditching her to go after Rano. Walia is not paying him enough.

Tarun and Raashi? Haila...That is one combination to die for! Jobless lawyer in love with Sanyasin in the making.

Jigyasa is booted out from the Walia mansion, but Adity needed someone to sharpen his wit on, so she is back traveling with them.

One of my favourite KS Jodies!

Anu and Rohit: Anu is preggers, recently married, after the fact (of course😉)...

Is mein bhi?😕😆 Some girls never learn, do they?

Nachiketh Walia: Recently accepted by JW as the not so hip sibling who has the ill fortune of being the son of a very hip mom who is attracting rich and eccentric men who have the 'A'ddiction to 'A' words...

I love Nachiket, both the character and the actor, plus that beard he has now on KS makes him look very cute! Just like his older brother!😳

Vishesh aka Vishy and Vikrum (Vik), the Rakhi brothers of the Dixit sisters. They are from Hyderabad/US who are accepted members of the Mensa, whose quick wit makes even the best of the lot to shiver in their boots.

Sahil, Dadi, Maasi are of course in the game, Sahil the only dim witted member (I think some one switched him at birth)...Dadi is in search of Salman Khan, she heard he is from Italy in Dil De Chuke Sanam..Maasi was overruled by dadi, no teerth yaatras for her, she heard that Italian men like portly women with a taste for good food...

Of course there have to be little people in the equation, little Reya, the rays of fire (Named after JR - Jwala Reya) - daughter of JW and BW;

Rohan (a kissophobic kid who wears glasses like mama and a tikka like his dad) - OK - I don't want your brains to be overworked on whose kid he is...Rano and Ranveer's ladli beta...

I am loving the sound of this guy already! He seems to be a carbon copy of my moppet!😃

Both Reya and Rohan are 5+ years old.

Occasional occurrences are good looking hairy I-talian men and Portly, hairy I-talian women, The Ad-bhoot Aparajit Dev and if the story develops my brain might even make an appearance.

Ad-bhoot ke bina koi namak nahin hai! And I will be waiting to see if his brain does make an appearance!😆

SO what are the Walia's doing in Italy??

They are in search of Maansi - Vikrum's ex-girlfriend who ran away five years ago, I think she was mad that she was not a member of the Mensa....😆😆😆

So now that introductions are over, I will continue the story tomorrow....

Yes, this is kind of like Munnabhai goes to America, even though I haven't seen it...Plagiarism be damned...😉😉 Did I say that, don't worry, Tarun Sablok is making a friendly appearance and he is not into copyright law....

If it is indeed like Munnabhai, then I am looking forward to read it all the more! And yes, Plagiarism be damned indeed!😆

Love,
-- SR

++++++ You are free to make any appropriate or inappropriate comments in regards to my supposed short story, which might or might not be funny ++++++++

Will be waiting for you to continue the story and hear a lot about Italy! I have begun reading your Candle in the Wind and I just flipped out on the first few chapters! Its brilliantly and wittly penned and is obviously very popular, judging by the response it has been getting!

Cheers,

MT

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow ba..sounds dam interesting,do continue..the introductions are very different 😆 love jai's!Tarun wooing rashi 😆 😆 how do you think of all this? 😆 😆 😆

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