Niraj - SS- Tum mere ho... Chapter 5 pg 9 updated - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: suhani.rahman

Omg!!!!!!!! Too romantic! You should have been the writer of nauc.Awesome yaar..


ha ha ha ha.. well thanx for the compliment.. but i think its too much..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
what an amzing update very cute story loved it !!!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishqnme

What about Zehnaseeb, or Shaayrana. Oh my God thinking of a better song, Samjhawan, or Tumse hi tumse hi... just thinking...


They played some of these in either SBB or SBS
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
OMG. I like this thing so much. I love your SS. You are just fab. You write so well.
Please update soon. 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Aww..so romantic...waiting 4 cousins next move...:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
wowww nice story yaar...update soon...read all th chptrs in one go
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
please write in english... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: sigmundfreud

Chapter 4

Viraj is getting impatient every moment to talk to nisha alone.. almost 1 hour has passed and nisha is surrounded by her cousins and friends and he is busy with guests... Now it is getting too much.. He wanted to talk to her for few moments.. infact he wanted to say her how beautiful she is looking today.. Infact some of the same boys from his office is continuosly staring at her and passing some comments within themselves.. this is making him more furious.. but it is really very hard to cross all the barriers and reach her now..
Suddenly he saw her walking towards the bar.. he felt a little relieved..

Excuse me.. Viraj asked the guest whom he was talking with and marched towards nisha..

Nisha was having a glass of water from the bar...

Humein nehi pata tha ki ladaku imaan sirf paani hi pite hain.. agar pehle pata hota toh hum to khaane ka arrangement karte hi nehi.. - Nisha got starttked by the sudden words from her back.. She turned around to see viraj..

Nisha - Sir.. wohh.. nehi toh.. aisi koi baat nehi hain sir...

Viraj - Accha?? shyam se aap kam se kaam 7 glass paani pe chuke hain..

Nisha - aap baare notice kar rahe the mujhe? aur waise bhi mein bass.. wohh mujhe pyas lagi thi..

Viraj - itna??? kamaal hain.. aur dekhie apko itna paseena kyon aa raha hain? ( Viraj smirked at nisha's uncomfortableness)

Nisha - nehi toh.. woh.. actually mujhe yeh sab gown wwaon ki adat nehi hain na.. toh isi liyee..

Viraj was enjoying nisha's shy and uncomfortable answers..
Viraj - acchaa.. humein laga ki aapko humein dekh k paseena aa gaya..

Nisha - ( shocked) - apko ? apko dekh k kyon ayega?

Viraj - toh phir aap humare taraf dekh k kyon nehi baat kar rahe hain? nazre kyon chura rahi hain humse?

Nisha got more uncomfortable and started to leave the place but viraj stopped her by putting his one arm on one side of the wall.. When she started leaving from the other side he again stpped her by putting his another arm on the wall.. Now she is stuck between his arms..

Nisha - sir aappp...

Viraj got very close to her... So close that they can now hear each others heart beat and can feel the warmth of their breath.. Viraj stared at her continuosly and nisha downcasted her gaze out of shyness...

Viraj - Aap humse hameesha vagti kyon rehti hain nisha?

Nisha - Sir wohh.. nehi toh.. aisi koi baat nehi hain...

Viraj - accha?? khud ko dekha hain? gaal bilkul tamatar ki tarah lal ho gaya hain.. priyanka ne bekar hi apke upar itni mehnat ki.. apki toh make up ki zarurat hi nehi thi..

Viraj came more closer to her.. Nisha can now feel his lips just a few inches away from hers.. Her heart started beating so hard that she thought viraj is going to hear it..

Viraj - waise sach kahein apko kabhi kisi make up ki kabhi zarurat hi nehi hain nisha.. aap waise hi itni khoobsurat hain.. ap agar yeh sab nehi karti tab bhi aap khoob surat hi lagti hain hameesha.. lekin aaj aap bahut zyada khoobsurat lag rahi hain nisha.. hum shyam se apko yehi baat kehna chaate the..

Nisha stared up at him and they shared an eyelock for a few seconds..

Bhaii... They heard priyanka calling viraj..

Viraj left nisha and nisha immediately tried to flee away from there but caught by priyanka in the middle..

Priyanka - arre.. aapn dono yeha pe ho? yeha kone mein kya kar rahe ho?

Viraj and nisha shared a look and got a little hesitant..

priyanka - Nish.. kahi bhai yeha party mein bhi apse kam ki baat to nehi kar raha hain? ( she smirked while saying this as she also knew that there was nothing like that)

Viraj - Priyanka.. kya hum apko itna tough boss lagte hain? aisa kuch nehi.. woh hum bass aise hi..

Priyanka - ohh accha tab sayad aab nish ko daant rahe the na?? bol rahe honge ki kya miss nisha aap iss gown mein kitna buri lag rahi hain..

Viraj - wat?? no.. she is looking absolutely stunning.. ( Viraj realised what he has said but it was too late)

Priyanka - Accha???? oh hooo.. kya baat hain bhai.. ha stunning toh woh lag rahi hain..

Nisha - Priyanka mein abhi aayi tum dono baatein karo..

Before they stop her she flew from there...

Umesh - Arre nishu... aisi harbarahat mein kaha ja rahi hain?

Nisha - Kuch nehi umesh bhaiya.. mein aap logo ko hi doond rahi thi.. chaliye na kuch khaate hain

umesh - haan woh to khayenge hi.. lekin pehle chal na dance floor pe chalte hain.. dekh na sab woha hain..

Nisha - wat???? mein aur dance??? pagal ho gaye hain aap??? sachme umesh bhaiya.. suku thik kehte hain.. shaadi hone k baad na apki dimaagi santulan hil chuka hain...

unesh -.. arre chal na yaar.. thik hain tujhe dance nehi karna hain toh maat kar.. lekin humare saath chal to sahi.. company de dena..

Nisha -- par bhaiya...

Umesh - arre chal na..

He grabbed nisha's arms and took her forward.. at the back he showed a thumbs up sign towards priyanka and other cousins and asked them to come on the dance floor by sign language..

saurav smiled at this and thought .. chalo plan A to kameyaab huya.. aab plan B..

interestig i read all the update in one shot
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
at least valentine's day par toh update banta hai!!
plz update it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Update karo na please
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