Niraj - SS- Tum mere ho... Chapter 5 pg 9 updated

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Chapter 1
hey guys i am very much in love with niraj.. so writing for them for the first time..

It was a cold chilly night.. The whole jaipur was getting geared up for the new year.. The fresh smell of the water and the mesmerizing decoration of the arjun singh palace was making the evening more beautiful.
Viraj was getting ready in his room. He was looking dashing today in his blue suit. Suddenly daarji knocks at the door..
Viraj - Kaun hain?
Daarji - Hum hain chote hukum.. neeche sab apka intezaar kar raha hain.. party bas suru hi hone wali hain. aap aa rahe hain na?
Viraj - Bas daarji aa hi rahe the hum.. sab aa gaye?
Daarji - Ji chote hukum, saare guests aa chuke hain.. Priyanka aur buaji bhi neeche hain.. apka intezaar ho raha hain..
Viraj ( in a curious and shy gaze) - okk.. auurrr... ummm.. its ok daarji aap jayiye hum aate hain..
Daarji (smiling) - Chote hukum aap sayad yeh poochne ki kosish kar rahe hain ki nisha beti aayi ki nehi.. nehi chote hukum abhi tak nehi.. par uske saare cousins aa chuke hain..
Viraj - okk.. accha laga sunke woh log aaye hain.. humein to lag raha tha ki nehi ayenge..
Daarji - kaise nehi aate chote hukum.. apne bulaya tha.
Viraj - Ok aap jaiye hum aate hain

Daarji left. Viraj looked at the mirror and lost in his thoughts.. yeh nisha kaha reh gayi.. apne cousins k saath nehi aayi to kaha gayi?

In the hall downstairs-

Suketu - Kya party hain boss.. aisa lag raha hain sach mein kisi raja ki ghar aaye hain
Umesh- Suketu mere bhai tu sach mein ek raja ki ghar hi aaye hain..
Suketu - haan haan.. pata hain.. zyada chirao mat..
Kirti - How blahh.. chup karo tum dono.. mujhe to bahut boring lag raha hain.. look at the crowd.. 1k bhi handsome ladhke nehi dikh raha hain mujhe..
Umesh - Kirti.. saram kar teri shaadi hone wali hain ritesh se.. aur tu..
Dolly - chodo na umesh bhaiya yeh ladhki aise hi hain.. hum party njoy karte hain.. meri gown kaise lag rahi hain guys? kaashh sumit yaha hota..
Jwala - uff ho.. shut up all of u.. kya kar rahe ho aap log.. kabhi socha hain ki nishu bro kaha hain aab tak? kiske vajay se humein yeh invitation mila hain wohi gayab hain
kirti - are par nisha ko to priyanka le k gayi na zabardasti upar.. mujhe kal priyanka ph pe bata rahi thi aaj to nishu ko gown pehnak hi choregi..
Umesh - ha sherni k gaale mein ghanta badhne ki kosish.. jo lagta hain bekar jayegi
Dolly - arre nehi mujhe lagta hain woh kar payegi.. dono ajkal itne acche dost ban gaye hain.. jabse priyanka ko pata chala tha ki nishu ne uss din sharab k naashe mein usko bachayi thi uss din se woh bahut change ho gaya hain.. infact in 1k mahine mein woh dono itne acche dost ban gaye hain..
suketu - haan aur humare bhi.. haayyy.. kitna hot hain na woh? ( gazing with a mesmerizing look upwards )
Kirti - how blah suketu.. itni bhi nehi hain.. aur tu chup kar kisi sun liya na.. to khare khare humein hot cool sab bana denge woh my my..
Everyone burst out laughing hearing this..
Jwala - lekin sachme.. nishu bro hain kaha..

meanwhile sourav reached there..

Saurav - hey guysss.. tum log aa gaye? nishu kaha hain?
Umesh - arre yeh to humein poochni chahiye.. priyanka usse le k gayi upar aab tak kya kar raha hain
Saurav - serious;y.. lagta hain nishu ko gown pehnate phenate priyanka khud faati huyi jeans aur t shirt pehenke neeche ayegi..

Again everyone burst out laughing...

Upstairs someone was trying to make a forcefully turned tomboy into a girl.. God knows what awaits tonight...

Thanx guys.. plzz give feedback so that i can continue...
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Princess1398 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome ya pls continue soon
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Wow
Awesome
Like the concept
Seems interesting
Update soon
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Awwwh loved it. Can't wait for the next part!
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Hi
Can u write the dialogues in English
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Awesome story...
I loved sourav's last dialogue especially 😆
Can't wait to read more...
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Amazing and interesting . Cont soon.😊
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Awesome...⭐️⭐️
pls update soon...
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Awesome and i think cvs should take idea from this
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Nice ss pls be continue 😊😊😊

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