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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks to all my lovely readers for ur likes & comments on the previous update.

I was so desperate to QUIT writing so I was forced to End this story abruptly...Sorry for that!!

Dedicating this part to Shruti & Neha & Anish & Shriya B.k & Titli/ swagata

Warning - This part contains some matured stuffs...a bit cheesy update...so read at ur own risk...bachcha parties can skip that part...thanks!!

PART - 3

"Good morning, darling" Malik wished Madhu when she joins him the breakfast table.
"Good morning, Dad" She beamed at her father.
"Darling, Anything special? U look so happy" Malik asked while he puts butter on his toast.
"Yep!" She said & took a sip of her orange juice "Guess what Dad?" she asked him excitedly.
"Are you having a date with your Superstar?" He asked casually & madhu choked & spat the juice on the table from her mouth.
"How do u know, Dad?" she asked shocked.
"Simple! I have never seen u blushing before so I guessed it has something to do with him" he shrugged.
"Well, U r right, Dad. Y'day he called me & said he likes me & wanted to date with me...Um, u know I love him so much, he is my dream boy so I agreed" she said blushing.
"Darling, All I wish for is your happiness so don't get hurt yourself by blindly trusting someone. I know you are crazy for Rk but you can't say he is also crazy for u, he is a star, he loves seeking media attention so he dates with so many girls, He changes his girlfriends by every week or a maximum of every month. I don't want u to be one among them. You deserve the best, darling" Malik said with parental care. She smiled & took his hand in hers & said "I know, Dad. I just wish he loves me too like I do. I can't just see him as a star, I really want to spend my whole life with him. He is my happily ever after"
"Oh Darling, see, u need to kiss a lot of frogs before u find your prince charming" Malik said chuckling to bring some humor to their conversation as he don't want to hurt his daughter's feelings but at the same time he want to make it clear to madhu that she can't trust Rk so easily & fall prey for him.
"I wish he stays my prince charming till eternity & never turns to a frog, dad" She said smiling.
"Stay happy, darling. Good luck" he kissed her forehead & walked out.

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"Hello" She said nervously picking up Rk call.
"Hi, Honey. Do u remember our date plan?" Rk asked madhu coolly.
"Yeah...Yeah, I do...so tell me shall we meet for lunch??" Madhu asked him
"Nah...Nothing special about meeting in lunch...how about a candle light dinner? Some Romantic time together?" he asked huskily sending shivers down her spine.
"Um...yeah, sure" she agreed.
"Then we will see at sharp 8 pm in Hotel Purple Orchid (HPO), Honey" He said over the phone well aware she won't be able to see the evil smirk playing on his face.
"See you. Bye" she blushed & they both hung up the call.
After hanging up the call with Madhu, Rk called Bittuji & instructed "Bittuji, book a table for me in HPO & also Suite for tonight"
"Ji, Chief" He said back.

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"Hi uncle, How are you?" Sikky asked Malik entering their house.
"Sikky...come, sit. I m good. How is ur dad?" Malik asked politely though he was surprised to see Sikky at their place suddenly.
"He is fine, Uncle" sikky smiled.
"So?" Malik asked.
"Well, actually few days back I asked Madhu to come with me for Lunch & she said Monday She's free so thought to take her with me...Where is Madhu?" he asked while his scanning the room for getting a glimpse of Madhu.
"Darling!!" Malik called her & soon she hurried down the stairs from her room
"Dad, Trishna came?" Madhu asked not looking up as she was busy texting on her phone.
"No. See, Sikky is here to take u out for Lunch" Malik said.
"Hey, Sikky" Madhu looked up & waved her hand & he smiled at her.
"Sikky, my friend Trish will be coming shortly & we are going for shopping as I have a date tonight so..." On hearing that sikky's face falls but he didn't show much. "Well, If u wish we three can do lunch & then go for shopping, What say?" Madhu asked excitedly.
"Yeah, Sure. I'm free today so I can spend my time with beautiful girls" Sikky grinned. Soon Trishna too arrived at Malik's place & the three left for lunch out & then they went for shopping. Both Madhu & trish likes Sikky's company as he was really funny & entertaining & a nice person too. More than Madhu, Trish was highly charmed by Sikky & they too quickly jell with each other. Sikky even chose dresses for Trish & they both chatted like they knew each other for years. Madhu was busy finding the best dress for her first date with Rk. After rummaging for hours She chose a black color knee length dress. Then Sikky dropped Madhu at her place in the evening on time so that she could get ready for her date at night. Then Sikky drove off the car with Trishna.

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(Hotel Purple Orchid)
"It's very delicious. Thanks for tonight Superstar" Madhu said smiling, tasting her dessert.
"Nah...This dessert is nothing when compared to u...u would be more delicious & I can say that proudly if u would let me taste u" Rk said back grinning salaciously & his eyes were dark & then takes madhu's hand & places a soft kisses on her knuckles making her legs go jelly & her cheeks turned redden.
"So? Do u wanna end the date with The Superstar Rk here or u wanna honour me in the dance floor??" Rk asked raising a brow at her.
"Um..huh...Would love to dance with u, please" she said blushing & he smirks.
"Have ur drink & then we will hit the dance floor" He commands gently.
She nods & sips her white wine not taking her eyes off of him & he was gazing at her with a hint of lust.

"U look hot & sexy now, Honey" Rk whispered near madhu's ears after the song ends & they slipped out of the dance floor. He handed her a glass of champagne & she took with a thankful smile as her mouth went dry & her legs weak.
"You dance with ease & grace superstar, u made me feel like even I can dance" she said with a shy smile. He gazed her sipping his drink.
"U r tipsy, um...u wanna sit here?? But the music is so loud so shall I take u out with me from this dancing hall?" he said & extens his hand expectantly.
"Where you are gonna take me??" she asked suspiciously.
"I have booked a suite here for tonight & if u wish we could stay the night together" he said grazing her knuckles with his thumb & she spits the wine from her mouth not in a sexy way as she was utterly shocked hearing his offer but still it turned on Rk & he gently leaned down & he greedyly sucked the wine away from the sides of her mouth.
"Hmmm" he groaned a sexy sound & she closed her eyes marveling in his proximity.
"Best wine I have ever tasted" he said appreciatively & her head spins with alcohol, tiredness & all the more Rk's presence, his closeness. she still cant believe she was dating the nations superstar.
"You are cutting me to the quick, so tell me honey will u spend the night with me? I want u so badly" he said, his eyes longing for her.
"Um...don't u think that a step too far...I mean only today we started dating & now..." her words trailed as she don't know what to say, even she wanted him, because she loved him but she knows the feeling was not mutual. He liked her but does he love her?? No! he only lusted her.
"No. I don't think we should do that. I'll just get back home. Thanks for the diner" she said with a smile & made herself steady to head back to her home & but before she could make a move Rk clutched her wrist & she spun around & she hits his hard chest & he releases her wrist & wrapped his arms around her waist pulling her close to him making hard for her to breathe.
"No one had ever said NO to me" he hissed making her shiver. Feeling her whole body tremble he softened & huskily asked "Do u want me, Honey?" she was dazed in the proximity, she could feel butterflies at the pit of her stomach & she surrender herself to his arms & nodded her head in agreement.

He smirked & quickly he released her & took her hands & dragged her to the elevator. Once the elevator halted at the top floor he scooped her in his arms & hurriedly unlocked the door & kicked it back to close automatically & then gently dumped her on the bed, all the while she was stunned at his action.

She gazed him with wide eyes & her heart was thumping as he pulled his shirt out & he came on top of her to capture her juicy lips. She didn't even take a moment's time to reciprocate his kiss because she was equally longing for him, for his touch, for his kiss, she had dreamt of all this right from the day she had fallen for her Superstar. He was not only a star to her but also her dream boy. He kissed her possessively invading her territory with his tongue as if he owns it & in the passionate state his hands started travelling all over her body making her moan in pleasure. His hands teased her body targeting on the sensitive spots, then losing his patience he tore her dress & she gasps in shock & slightly pushed his chest away from her body when she got back to her sanity & she tried to refrain him. He looked at her shocked expression & before she could say a word he again hover her with his mouth. She felt as if he would swallow her mouth anytime & then he grazed his teeth along her jaw line & rained her with wet smooches. When again passion took over her, she started responding to his touch. He trailed kisses deep down her neck & his hands squeezing & teasing her breast.
"Rk, please" she moaned.
"I want u, Honey" he whispered near her ear & bit her earlobe sending tingles to her body.
She curled her hands around his head, entwining her fingers with his hair & pulled his head to top for a kiss as it was buried in her cleavage.
"You are unbelievably sweet & beautiful" he said nuzzling her lower neck. She was feeling giddy, as the alcohol & the havoc he was creating on her took its effect.
"I have never felt this desirous for anyone..." he said in a sexy tone.
"You beguiled me, Honey" he kissed her throat. She moaned in replying with her eyes closed.
"You are a sexy bitch" he breathed through his teeth.
"Look at me. I want u to see me, feel me...I want u to drown in burning passion" he said, his voice commanding. Her eyes flung open hearing him & she could see her passion reflects in his eyes.
He removed even the minimal barrier between them & towered her with his body.
She turned her gaze in shyness. "Don't be shy" he said planting a kiss on her lips. Then his hands skimmed down her thighs & she squirms. She scrunched her eyes wondering what she was doing is right? She loved him...yes, she can do this with the man she loved with her heart & soul. She was bathed with his warmth & hot breathe. She was confused, she wanted to stop him but her body was not listening to her & he was not letting her to think, he has her entire bodies possession. She took a deep breath & pulled him up & kissed him passionately & between their lips she confessed "I LOVE YOU, Rishab" & surrendered herself to him & before shutting her eyes she took in his shocked & surprised gaze.

Madhu woke up in the morning, her head was fuzzy & her body was draped with cool crisp sheet. She looked at the surrounding as she knew she was not in her bed but somewhere else. Then realization dawn her, she was in the hotel room & her eyes scanned the room in search of Rk but the room was empty. She sat up & quickly she pulled up the sheet close to her chest covering it as she realized she was naked. She slipped out of the bed covering herself with the sheet protectively. She looked around for him in the en suite bathroom, balcony but no sign of him. Then her eyes fell on a note on the bedside table & she dragged her feet close to it & picked up the note & read aloud "GOOD BYE, Madhubala"

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Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Here goes the final part of "CRAZY IN LOVE"


Dedicating this part to Uma di/ uma88, Kashu di / kashish_smile & Nina/ Ni33 / Teekay


PART - 4


(One week later)


"Darling, open the door. How long u'll be cooped up in your room??" Malik gently knocked at madhu's door.

"Dad, please leave me alone" she said with a cracking voice.

"Darling, won't you let your dad in?? won't u share ur worries with me?? I thought we are more like friends than dad & daughter?? Please darling open the door, we will talk" Malik pleaded her. Hearing his pleading voice madhu couldn't help but run towards the door & she opened it & hugged her dad & cried her heart out.

"Darling, Stop crying" he patted her back & walked her back the bed & made her sit on the bed & took a glass of water & handed it to her. She took a tentative sip her throat was parched. Then Malik sat beside her & wiped her tears away from her cheeks & caressed her hair affectionately letting her to calm down.

"Dad, he...he cheated me" she accused Rk.

"He didn't cheat u...it's you who cheated yourself & blindly trusted him, darling...we always do the mistake & blame others" he said softly. She stared at him wide eyed. "Yes, I'm a fool. I should have known that he was star... like a star in the dark sky, he was only to admire but I tried to reach him & lost in the dark sky"

"Did u tried to talk to him?" he asked.

"I tried but he is not answering my calls. I asked his P.A Bittuji about him but he said he was in his outdoor shooting. He is avoiding me...he didn't love me...he only..." she lowered her eyes in shame & silent tears were shedding down her cheeks.

"Darling, please don't cry. I have never let my baby cry...please I can't see u broken & in tears" he hugged madhu in his embrace.

"U warned me dad but I didn't listen to u...I'm sorry" she choked.

"Darling, u love me??" he aksed.

"You are the only man I can trust & love...I love u dad" she said with a faint smile.

"Then will you do me a favor?" he asked. She knows what his favor was. She was not ready for it but she really didn't want to break her dad's heart too. She wants to forget & move on in life & she knows very well by doing this favor she will make her dad happy.

"You want me to get married right?? I m ready" she said confidently.

He gave her a bright smile in back & hugged her & said "Thanks darling, then tomorrow you will get engaged"

"That's so soon, dad" she said little worried as everything was going in super speed. What if Rk loves her?? What if he got busy with his work but still wants her?? What if he comes back to her?? Should she wait a little long?? No, she can't & she won't. if he loved her then he would have told her but wouldn't have abandoned her in the hotel room. He even didn't try to contact her & also not ready to respond to her tries. Yes, he purely lusted her, he got what he wanted & left her...she was crazy in love & but not anymore, she's out of the daze.

"He said he can't wait long to get engaged...so we thought why not tomorrow as it's an auspicious day too"

"Who dad?" she finally asked who was her groom

"You know him well" he said smiling.

"is Sikky the groom??" she asked

"Yes" he said


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(Next day evening)

Malik mansion was glowing with colorful lights & thongs of guests were gathered & media was there to capture the biggest event of the year.

Madhu got decked up in a beautiful baby pink & silver lenga. She was looking gorgeous & beautiful & if anything was missing then it would her lovely smile. Trsihna came to madhu's room & took her down to the engagement hall as everyone was waiting for the event to start. She slowly descended down the stairs with her head down facing the floor.

"Darling, u r looking beautiful... My princess" Malik said in pride & Kissed her forehead & she smiled faintly & then he took her to the dais. She looked up to see Sikky standing nervously on the stage. She forced a smile at him & he politely returned her smile.

"Shall we start the event, Darling" Malik asked. She slightly nodded & took the ring which was Trishna offering to her. She inhaled sharply & Struggled to keep her tears in bay she looked up & raised her hand to slip in the ring on Sikky's finger & he forwarded his hand shakily & madhu frowned at him. Suddenly she saw a hand on Sikky's shoulder pushing him aside & Sikky smiled in relief. Madhu's eyes popped out in stunned shock seeing Rk smirking at her. She felt million butterflies tingling in her belly, her heart was feeling blissful & she did a quick dance i her mind seeing him, her love of the life but suddenly reality hit her hard, how could she feel happy on seeing him?? Why he is here?? To play another seduction game & spend a night & abandon her?? No, she won't let him break her heart again.

"Sikky" she yelled at him & turned to his side to see him hugging Trishna & smiling happily. What the hell is happening??

"What are u doing here?" she asked Rk angrily.

"What sort of stupid question is this, honey?? In my engagement you expect me not to come??" he asked her sweetly.

"Don't call me Honey & It's my engagement not yours so just get out because u r not invited" she hissed at him

"Honey, listen to me?" Rk took her hand to explain her & she swat him away.

"There is nothing to listen. You are a cheater. You are a coward. You could have faced me like a man & told me that we are over...Go away I don't want to see u"

"My jungle billi is on fire...ahaan!! I like it" he smirked at her.

"Ha...Don't smirk. I hate it." She shouted. He smirked & grinned widely.

"Will you let me talk?" he asked little pissed. She gets startled & took a fearful step back seeing his angry gaze.

"First thing I'll smirk because I look hot when I smirk & u likes it too, right" he asked raising his brow. She glared at him murderously.

"Secondly I don't need any invitation for my own engagement" he said sternly "& thirdly You look sexy in this lenga, honey" he said this in a whisper close to her ear so only she could hear & she couldn't help but blush.

"Dad, tell him to leave our house now" she said to malik.

"Darling u agreed for the marriage? What is this now?"

"Dad, when I asked with whom I'm getting engaged u said I know the person right?"

"Yes, don't you know Rk? Isn't he the one you love?? Isn't he your dream boy, your prince charming?"

"Dad, when I asked is sikky the groom u said yes, didn't you?"

"Yes, darling, he is ALSO getting engaged today & he is not ur to be groom but my Trishna's. Trishna is also like a daughter to me" she turned towards Sikky & trishna. "Madhu, end your drama fast so that even we can get engaged" Trishna chided her.

"So shall we?" Rk extended his hand to take her hand

"No. I won't marry you, Mr. Superstar" she said angrily crossing her arms on her chest.

"So you don't want this Superstar for yourself, for all you life time?" he asked with a smirk. She looked confused. Confuse because she doesn't know whether she wants him or not. Well, she wanted him but she felt betrayed by him so her heart was not letting her to accept him back & the whole situation was very confusing to her, her dear father siding Rk & all his talks were puzzled.

"Honey" "Darling" both Malik & Rk called her at a time. Malik gestured Rk to carry on & he smiled back.

"Hon.."

"U stop" she stopped him showing her hand & he nodded like a obedient child trying hard to control his laughter. "I don't want to hear a word from u. Dad u tell me what you wanted to tell?" she asked Malik

"I want to tell you to listen to Rk what he is gonna say" Malik said softly.

"Ahhh, when u sided him dad??" she stomped her foot like a small kid making Rk chuckle. "& you two get a room" She barked at Sikky trishna who were shamelessly romancing in public.

"Honey, if u marry me, u ll get the chance to watch all my movies on first day, first show" he beamed at her. He knows which button to hit.

"Really??" she asked excitedly. "Will I get to see your shooting on live?" she asked clasping her hands in glee. He smiled seeing her childish antics & innocence.

"Of course honey. If u wish u can be my heroine too" he winked at her.

"Nah...i always love to be your biwi & enjoy watching you on screen" She smiled.

"So shall we get engaged first then only i can make u my B.I.W.I" she nodded excitedly.

"You know what, You Are Crazy" Rk said smiling & slipped in the ring on her ring finger.

"Crazy for you superstar" She winked at him & put ring to him.

Then Rk & madhu got engaged first & a week later their marriage got fixed & Then Sikky & Trish also got engaged & Both the couples took blessings from their elders.


(One week later - Rishbala wedding night)


"Rishaab...please." she moaned & Tilted her head up to give him better access to kiss her throat.

"Rishab, stop!!" She pulled him up by clutching his messy hair.

"Ahh...biwi. U r hurting" He rubbed his head where she pulled him.

"I said stop & answer me?" She yelled at him.

"what the hell you want to know?" He screamed at her.

"Do you love me??" She asked staring at his eyes to gage his expression.

"honey, is this the time to ask?? Its our suhaag raat & U r my priceless gift so left me unwrap my gift first & Enjoy it later u can ask me anything" He said irately & buried her face on her neck nuzzling it.

"Rk, its important for me to know besides i m ur gift which u had already unwrapped, did u forget our night at hotel??"

"what?? No!! We didn't do anything apart from kissing" He said i a serious tone.

"what??" She shouted in shock.

"we made love right??" She asked still doubting what he said.

"No! I...I didnt cross my limit that night but please dont think i m a saint, i really had the idea to have u for myself that night but...but suddenly u declared ur love for me, i was shocked...i dont know what to do...i could see the true desire & Love for me in ur eyes so i couldnt take advantage & Insult ur pure love for my lust so i kissed ur forehead & U slept, then i left a "Goodbye" note to u & i left the room & before heading back to my mansion i thought to grab a drink & There i met someone, a very special person & because of him we are together."

"who??" Madhu asked curiously. He smirked & Fed her the incident which happened on the night at hotel.


(Flashback)


"I love u, rishab" Her words kept ringing in his head. No!! She cant love him.

"Refill my glass, man" Rk said irately but a man stopped the bartender from doing his job & He took the scotch bottle from him & Asked him to leave the bar. Then the man refilled rk's glass & Poured one for himself.

"So Rk, if u wish u can share your problem with this old man"

"How do u know?" Rk asked surprised.

"Oh c'mon how i'll not know the superstar rk?" he asked chuckling.

"Nah..not that. How do u know i have a problem?" Rk asked him.

"hmm...sometimes back i saw u on the dinner table with a girl...ur girlfriend??" he asked but rk turned his face not knowing what to say.

"u were so happy then but now u r here drinking & looking all tensed...so guessed it"

"U r right. Yes, i m in a big problem. Will u hear my problem??"

"i m all ears so tell me & If i could i'll help u too" he assured.

"Honey said she loves me"

"Honey??"

"Her name." Rk said & gulped his drink.

"I thought her name is Madhubala" The man said.

"Media..Media is like forest fire. Not even one day we started dating but media spread the rumor about my new girlfriend right?" he laughed. The man sitting besides him smirked.

"So your honey loves u then what's the problem in it?"

"Her love is the problem. I dont deserve anyones love. I face hattrick betrayals. I loved my dad but he committed suicide & Left me. Then all i had was my mom but she married someone, i lost her love. Then my number three love came in my life, dipali the bitch, i loved her with my heart & Soul but she used me as a ladder to become a star. Do u think someone can truly love me?? Can i trust the girl who was sleeping in the bed with me a while ago?? What if she turns out to be a gold digger??"

"She is not a gold digger & Her love is true. She loves u madly, if not she wont be giving herself to u" The man said angrily.

"how could u be so sure that her love for me is true??" Rk asked in a mocking tone.

"Didnt u see the love in her eyes??"

"yes, i saw pure love in her innocent eyes for me...i know she is not a gold digger... she wont betray me... & that's why i couldnt take advantage of her love. So i left her in the room & came here to forget everything. Forget the girl, my honey, she is a lovely soul but i m not worthy of her love."

"Why u say that??"

"She is so pure but I m tainted with my past...i don't want to taint her too..." Rk said sadly.

"Oh c'mon young man, forget your past, move on in your life...life is short so don't waste it ny brooding over your past or over thinking it...I m sure that girl is Crazy in love...just love her back truly...never betray her or hurt her..."

"I was so attracted to her the moment I saw her in the cinema hall, she was unique, crazy little girl, you know what sir, when she saw me first & she gifted me a beautiful smile which is still fresh in my mind...she bewitched me...i couldn't concentrate on anything but only think her...i wanted her so badly so I tricked her by saying I wanted to date her...i know I was wrong...now I get angry at me for thinking like that..." he took a deep breath. "What is this strange feeling?? is this LOVE?" Rk asked.

"Don't ask me young man, ask your heart, it will answer"

Rk closed his eyes & only he could see only madhu's smiling, blushing, shy face. He remember how he met her first, how she had fainted in his arms seeing him, how he felt her when he touched her, how he felt when he kiss her. "I love u. Rishab"

"Yes, I love my Madhu" Rk declared out loud.

"That's good. So tell me when are u gonna get married?? u want to get married soon or wanna date for somemore time?"

"Whoa! Whoa!, Sir...You are too fast, just now I realised my love for her, I need to confess it to her, then I need to propose for marriage & then I need to ask her hand from her parents"

"You are saying that I m too fast??" The old man smirked.

"I'm ready to give my darling hand to u but please never hurt her" he said.

"Sir, what are u talking? Who is your darling?? by the way we didnt give proper intro...well, I m Rishab Kundra"

"Nah...The Superstar Rk...that's how my darling likes to address you & I'm Shamsher Malik" he smiled.

"The great Industrialist...CEO of MM group of companies, Shamsher Malik??" Rk asked in shock.

"Yes, the very same...Father of my darling, your honey, Madhubala Malik (MM)" he said with a wide grin. Rk choked & looked at him wide eyed.

"Sir...I'm..I'm sorry...I..honey...I love...your darling" Rk stammered.

"Relax Rk...Relax. I should appreciate my darlings choice...i like u...you r an honest man" he patted Rk's shoulder affectionately.

"Thank you, Sir"

"So I'm ready to hand my darling to u, will u take care of her??" Malik asked

"I fully intend to look after her...you don't worry Sir...i'll treat her like a princess"

"Then when u want to get married" Malik asked.

"Sir..."

"Call me dad" Malik said.

"Dad, I can't wait long to make her all mine so please fix our marriage soon" Rk said smiling.

"As u wish young man"

"Dad, if u don't mind shall we surprise honey?" Rk asked.

"How?" malik asked puzzled.

"Please don't let her know about my feelings to her...you just convince her & fix the engagement & on that day I will make my heroic entry" he winked. Malik chuckled & showed thumps up.



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"OMG!! You & your idiotic heroic entry...i was in hell when u left me...i can't belive u & dad planned all this" Madhu hit him on his chest in fake anger hearing everything.

"Oh c'mon honey, after all u fell in love with this hero right??" he asked holding her hands above her head to stop her beatings & presses her with his body so that she won't escape.

"Yes, my dear superstar" she said seductively & pulled him for a kiss.

"My dad is a wonderful man" madhu said smiling.

"He is. Only because of him, i got my honey" He pecked on her lips.

"by the way what he was doing at that time in that hotel??" rk asked curiously.

"Purple orchid is our hotel & He must have been there to keep an eye on you & that's because..."

"He loves u..." He said lovingly. She hugged him happily.

"Biwi, shall we complete our mission which we left unfinished weeks ago in the hotel??" Rk asked her.

"Yes, we will" she blushed & they begin their passionate love making.


"You like it?" Rk asked with his eyes close & madhu snuggles close to him & rest her head on his chest, her hands sprawled on his stomach, his hand caressing her naked back & their legs were entangled.

"Hmm..." she hummed sleepily.

"So u didnt answer me?" She asked.

"What biwi?"

"That you love me or not?" she lifted her head resting her chin on his sternum to face him & a smile played on his lips.

"Didn't my love making say that how much I love u??" he asked grinning. She blushed.

"Tell me nah..rk" she insisted.

"Okay Honey, my love, u are my universe...u r my happiness...u r my life...u are mine & i'm only yours...I'll give all the happiness of the world to u but just be my side till my last breath" he said & gently wiped her happy tears & kissed her lips.

"I love u, Honey"

"I love u, Superstar"


"Rk..."

"What Biwi?"

"Tomorrow cancel all your shootings, okay?"

"Biwi, do u think i'll leave my new bride & go for shooting?" he asked raising his brow.

"No! I want u to take me to your movie premiere" Madhu said cutely.

"What? You have me but still you want to see me on screen?? you are crazy, Honey" he sighed.

"I'll never miss your movie for the world...so take me to the premiere show...i want to see "CRAZY IN LOVE" Movie by hook or by crook" she declared & slammed her lips on his so that he won't let a word against her.


THE END


Hope you all liked the ending.😃

Please do hit the like button & leave your precious comments😛

Thanks to all in advance😳

Bless u all!!🤗

sudha😊



Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Yippee I am first.😆
The time to avenge Tallibala version 3.5 has finally come😈 😆

Unres 🤣
God I think beat even Ni di's Record to Unres 🤣
I'm unressing it after nearly a year I think right akka! 🤣
I'm like what have I been so busy to Unres god! 🤣 Sorry for unressing so late :/ *holding ears*

Coming to the story...
OMG! What is this? 🤣 Why couldn't Rk just leave Madhu! :P But they were destined so what to do😆
The ending was outstanding plus thank you soo much for dedicating the last part to me akka! 🤗 *gives you very tight bear hug*
Muah! ❤️
My rk is always my superhero! ❤️ *gives a dreamy sigh* plus I couldn't avenge Tallibala version 3.5 in this story so what I will avenge her in Lsam 2 and that Bala will be named as *thinking deeply* Not yet decided 🤣
But to tell you the truth akka! You are an AWESOME AUTHOR! 👏 *gives you a big bow!* Muah I love all your stories! The ending was WOW! Keep writing akka.I enjoy all your stories! *gives you a kissy on cheek* <3

Love ya and TFS for pm though it is almost going to be a year after you sending me 🤣
Seeya in LSAM 2 😆

Edited by Shriya.bk - 10 years ago
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Res me second..
unres


Ufff finally the wait was over, the twist was really good, but it would have been so nice if u have continued what u have planned initially, but it was fine, that u have kept RK the same sweet lover boy.

Loved Malik, he is a very nice protective father, and he did everything for his daughter's happiness, reading part 3 i didn't guess the twist, but at engagement i guessed it will be RKa nd i had a slight doubt when Madhu asked who the groom was, poor sikky, he was worried for is own life, as he knew very well, by any chance if he slid that ringer in madhu finger or let her slid hte ring in is finger he would face heavy wrath from two persons one from RK and then from Trish.😆😆😆


And mainly thank u so much for the dedication dear, thank u so much
Edited by uma88 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Unres
Part 3
I thought rk betrayed madhu
Superb update
Part 4
The ending was awesome loved it
I will miss ur writing sudha 😊
Edited by v.p.joshi - 11 years ago
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Omg omg sudha thank u so much for the dedication 🤗
I'm dancing [:D/] 🥳 .love u darling ❤️.
Sudha u have clearly mentioned bacha parties stay away as it has some mature contents 😉 but did u notice who Res 1st on this update 😆 its none other than one of our bacha party or frnd of this forum 🤣🤣 (sorry shri kutty 😭 😆)
Now coming to the story :
My 1st shock was malik cooly asked madhu "r u having date darling" 😉 😆 😆 .omg malik was such a cute understanding and friendly father 😳 .loved his character 😃.
2nd shock rk left madhu alone at the hotel 😭 but later u gave surprise 😆 .
Hahaha sikky got his pair trishna 😆 nice choice.
Our rk gave a super heroic entry on their engagement 😉
And he exactly pressed the correct button to divert crazy madhu's mind 😆 u can watch my movies 1st show ,premiere shows 😆 oh god and she was excited like crazy kid and accepted the proposal 🤣 🤣🤣.
Rk malik bar meeting was excellent that too wen rk was shocked to hear that he is malik his honeyy's father and rk's reaction 🤣🤣
Hotel part and wedding nyt 😉 hot hot blushing blushing(emos not working suddenly).
Totally it was an awesome story u ended it very well 👏
Enjoyed very much 😃
Surely ll miss this story crazy madhu and ur crazy writings and ur free laughing therapy 😭
All the best my crazy writer sudha 😳
Take care 😊
Thanks for the pm sudha .
And thanks a lot for entertaining us by ur crazy stories 👏

Edited by anish17 - 11 years ago
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Aww twinnie u sure know how to create suspense
n fun in ur stories 😉i just love it too core
n this rk omg can i say i so love this not -so-shareef but
phir -bhi-honest n gentleman rk 😆😆😆
i wonder how the hell did he controlled himself after reaching peak point 😉
wat a control seriously 😛
three words n he just became dhoodha ka dhula satyawadi purush 👏👏👏
how did u do this twinnie 😆
i m stunned n bala
girl u were ready to go all the way but u didnt realised that u r still
virgin didnt u do any proper checkout on bedsheets 🤣
or u were already taken so didnt cared to check 🤣🤣
jo bhi ho u really became full on popat by ur husband n dad
grt combo of two minds to make fool of an already
peaked level crazy 🤣🤣
sikky cracked me up with his nervousness 😆
poor guy was stuck between two mads 😉
if mb wld have put ring then rk wld have killed him 😆😆
n if he wld have tried to run bala wld have eaten him for dinner 😆😆😆
poor man but still got his trish
n sexy sr of crazies i wonder how they managed a long conversation
in one bed 🤣🤣they wld have required whole worlds control to go through it
hai na twinnie 😃
anyways amazing ending darling loved it
will miss ur writing
god bless all the best for future .😃😃⭐️
Edited by Love-Blossoms - 11 years ago
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For the first time in a long while I've read one of your stories Sudha...😆
you have to wait for my comment...🤣
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Woman, you're a prankster.. that was a really cruel prank on madhu!

It was so cute I really enjoyed reading this! I don't understand why you want to quit writing - EXPLAIN. And make it a good explanation because all stupid ones would be rejected.

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Originally posted by: teekay

Woman, you're a prankster.. that was a really cruel prank on madhu!

It was so cute I really enjoyed reading this! I don't understand why you want to quit writing - EXPLAIN. And make it a good explanation because all stupid ones would be rejected.


awe..thank u so much dear.
glad to know u enjoyed this crazy story lol.
haha...i agree that was a cruel prank lol...but alas She got her superstar.

i quit bcos my studies r getting tougher & i couldnt manage d time. I feel like i spend a lot of time in forum lol...i can reduce that only if i stop writing lol..
but still i will come here to read urs & Few other lovely writers story on rishbala to keep myself connected. I joined this forum to read stories & By some miracle i started writing some really crazy stuffs & Made many lovely frnds whom i ll cherish forever...but now i again want to be only a reader & Appreciate all d writers effort.
thanks for ur support & Sorry to all my readers for disappointing them.

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