New RIMA SS: Crazy In Love (pt 3 - 25 & 4 - pg.26) completed

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Posted: 11 years ago
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SS : CRAZY IN LOVE


Hi, buddies, i'm back with a new SS: "Crazy In Love"

I got an overwhelming response for my first SS: "love starts after marriage" since that story is gonna come to an end soon with another 5 or 6 parts, I thought to write one crazy short story, really a short one unlike last time LOL & I request u to support me with this story too.

Dedicating this story to all the writers in this forum!!


PART - 1


(Madhu's POV)


"DAD!! DAD!!" I yelled for my father Malik.

"Darling, i'm here in the kitchen" Malik, my dad shouted back.

"Dad, what are you doing here? Only on sunday u get time to rest but now also u r here cooking" I chided him.

"I know Darling but its the only day I get time to cook on my own hand for my daughter" he smiled at me.

"Okay. What are u making" I asked him.

"Pizza. My darlings favorite"

"Love you dad" I hugged from back. He caressed my hear.

"Dad, Trish & I are going to movie" I informed him.

"How many more times u will watch that superstar RK's movie, Darling" He asked me smilingly.

"Dad, I'm going for his new movies preview show & I heard from trish that he is also coming for the premiere so I could drool over my superstar in live" I said dreamily.

"Darling, if u want to see him tell me da..in one phone call, i'll bring him to our home" He said lovingly. Aww...My dad loves me so much as he is both my father & mother as I lost my mom the next moment I was born & from that day he never let me feel the absence of my mom, he will do anything for me in his power, as he is the great & richest business magnet in India. CEO of MM group of companies.

"No, dad. I'm his true fan, I want to be his fan forever & I don't want to use any power to meet him then he might hate me for ordering him to come & meet me. so promise u won't do anything like that"

"As u wish, darling" He smiled at me

"Thanks, dad" I kissed his cheek.

"Dad, I said i'm going movie..." I hesitated.

"Go, darling" he replied.

"Dad, don't act as if u don't know anything" I scolded him

"Oh I forgot, darling. Here" He gave me currency notes & I frowned at him.

"Dad, what's this?? All are one rupee notes??" I looked horrified.

"Darling, anyway u are going to throw the notes in front of theatre screen so why waste 100's & 1000's?" he asked me.

"Dad, u r insulting my Superstar. He is priceless & all I give him is this" i showed the currency notes. "Don't forget you are shamsher Malik & i'm ur only Daughter & owner of this entire empire." I said angrily.

"I know darling. For his work he is being paid in crores & for the theater you are spending money on tickets but this throwing money is something unnecessary but I allow u to do because I can't deny anything you wish. But think darling, u could give this money to needy & poor people who are really in need right?" yes, he is right but I love my superstar crazily, that's what making me do all this.

"Okay, dad." I agreed & took a bundle of one rupee notes.

"Darling, remove your scarf da.." He gently said to me.

"No, Dad. Jeans, shirt & scarf around neck is Madhubala malik's style, dad" I said proudly.

"I know darling, why u r wearing this. When you enter the Cinemas u remove it & tie around ur wrist & start spinning it at top of ur head when ur Hero enters on screen with whistles & howling right??" He asked.

"Who the hell is informing you every single information? Fire him Dad, now" I barked at him.

"Okay, Daring" He nods his head frantically. I controlled my anger hearing that & let a soft smile.

"Enjoy the movie & return home safe, darling"

"I'll dad. U take some rest after cooking, okay?" I ordered him.


"Hey, Trish" I parked the car outside Trish's place & waved my hand at her. Trishna is my childhood friend. We both did our schooling together & did our higher studies in London together & after completing our studies we both are working in My father's company. She is the second person with whom I share all my secrets. Yes, my dad is the 1st person because he is not only my dad but also my best friend. Every daughter should be blessed like me to get an amazing father like him.

"Trish, u r as usual late. Last time also because of you I missed my superstar's movie for 2 minutes" I pouted.

"Don't worry madhu, we will reach on time" she said patting my shoulder.

"Trish, you sure right? Rk will be coming to the preview show nah?" I asked her. Yes, she knows every single secret in film industry as her father Mehul chopra is the greatest director in this industry. Even he had given so many hit films with my superstar. I love him so much for that as he worked with Rk & I often ask him to make more films with him.


Whistle * whistle * whistle *

At Rk's entry in movie I started hooting & whistling & screaming. I know in multipex cinemas no one will scream like me but I do & I don't care about other staring at me.

"Madhu, Sit down. All are scolding u from back" Trishna pulls my hand.

"I don't care, Trish. I said & stood up on my seat & started spinning my scarf & dancing" when it come to my superstar i'm an insane, I don't care for this world. All I care about is Rk...aww...he is too hawtt!! Gosh!! sexy too...how much time god would have taking to sculpt him?? he is indeed a Greek god!!

"Madam, please, sit & watch the movie. U r disturbing other viewer" The manager of the theatre politely instructs me.

"Okay! Okay" I smiled as sweetly as I can & once he went out I started doing the same hat I did earlier.

"Madam, please, come out. U r disturbing other viewer so they are complaining...so please leave the theatre. We will return back the price u paid for the show" He said authoritatively. I looked at him with a smirk & walked out attitude not before throwing the currency notes in front of the pit & screaming "I'm CRAZY IN LOVE - with you superstar" muahh!! muaahh!! muaahhh!! I blow kisses while Trish drags me out of the hall.


"What he thinks of himself? He throw me out. Me! Madhubala!! Damn!!" I passed outside the cinema hall near the pantry.

"Its all because of you. Who told u to shout like that? Will anyone stand up on the seat & dance??" Trish asked me angrily but she is someone who has the right to scold me. Then she takes her butter popcorn bucket & walked towards me.

"I'll show him who i'm" I snarled furiously & in my anger I hit trish's popcorn bucket which she was holding in her hand flew up high & falls on top of her. She murderously glared at me.

"Bhai, ek pop corn bucket doh" I sheepishly asked him & smiled sweetly at trish but she stomped her foot & walked towards the counter to get her snacks.

"Hello Dad, I was throw out of the theatre for enjoying my Rk's movie" I informed my Dad.

"WHO THE HELL DARE TO.."

"Wait Dad, don't get tensed, just buy the ciniplex & fire the manager, Okay?" I asked.

"Okay, Darling. By the time of next show that Ciniplex will be in your name, happy?" He asked.

"Very happy. Love u dad" I grin & hanged up the call.

"Mission accomplished. From now on its not Cineplex but MM complex" I smirked evilly.

"Shall we go?" Trish asked me.

"What? No way I will come without seeing my Rk" I said her sternly & she sighed.

"bhai, Rk aagaya na??" I asked the man at the ticket counter.

"Jee, madamji" He replied. My excitement got increase. Butterflies are flying in my stomach. I have never seen him in live before as I came 2 months back from London. I have watched all his movies for countless number of times...Oh God! When will the movie get over & when will he come out!! when I was in I couldn't see him because it was fully dark.

"Trish. Can u hear the song?? which we saw yesterday in you tube" i istened carefully to the song being played in the hall. She frowned at me.

"Arrey.. trish..that song re... where Rk will do this step" I swing & hands & shit! I again messed with Trish's pop corn...Oh God! She is ready to kill me!

"Bhaiya..." I called the pop corn maker & signaled him to make one more.


Suddenly I heard crowned coming in rush & all were surrounding Rk & I couldn't see him properly.

"Trish, come, Rk is here, we will go close & see him" Without seeing her I dragged her hand & yet again the pop corn bucket in her hand slips down.

"AHHH" she cried angrily.

But its not the time to console her, its time to do some action.

"Rk!! Rk!!" I screamed & squeezed mysef in the throng of crowd to near him & I finally went close to him... "Maasha allah!!" I didn't realised that i said that loud. He turned towards me & chuckled. Why he is watching my scarf tied around my wrist & smirking?? did he found I was the one who whistled & behave like a fool & thrown out?? CRAP!!!

"Hello" He said with a smile.

"OH my your voice is so sweet" I said yet again loudly & he laughed.

"Thanks. Autograph?" He asked.

"Sure!! but I don't have a paper or pen with me" I said still looking at him transfixed. I can't believe my eyes. I blinked it twice & he was still there so is not dream.

"No worries, Sweetheart" He said & took a pen from his jacket pocket & his hard hands touched my soft hand & he wrote something sending tingles to me but I didn't see what he wrote as I was busy drooling him. After signing he kissed my knuckles & smiled at me. Unknowingly my hands raised to his face & my index finger tip gently touched his perfect dimple & a current passes throw me. He chuckled.

"It's not Dream. Its real. I met my superstar. I'm dead & in heaven" I said & fainted but I know I was safe in his arms.


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So tell me friend, how was the first part?? do you like it??

please do hit the like button & comment ur views!! I would appreciate it!!

those who want pm's please do comment & if possible mention it too!!

thanks to all my lovely readers in advance!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres
YAHOOO m 1st
so madhu is crazy about rk
full on masti mood
but what about rk?
waiting for more
I want PM
Edited by noiseygirl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new story...yayyy..👏👏👏
BTW...awesome start..so this Madhu is full of Life and Dad's lil girl...trish is cute as usual..
Interesting part woyuld be ...how this Superstar fall for this drooler,.lol.love this crazy madhu...😆😆😆

I wanna PM...for SURE 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow an finally third in this ss.. Not bad.. But from the beginning of the ss all i could see was sudha instead of madhu, whistling and that scarf, ha ha.. And throwing currency note is one thing i never thought of.. It remembered me of my coll days, where we use to collect all papers, tear it into pieces and throw it once the hero enters.. I really like this madhu, no wonder this superstar gonna fall for his mad love girl.. Poor trish, can't have a pop corn fully.. Malik wealth gonna empty buying pop corn for trish.. Thanks for pm and update soon
Edited by uma88 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg it was awesome n i loved it please pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome, pl continued. Loved the 1st part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahaaannn... So one more story of Sir Chadhi Madhubala... 🤣 But here, she was more than Sir Chadhi... She was Total Bigadi huyi Gundi... 🤣 Sudhu, you have severely experimented on Madhubala in your stories... 😆
So let me start from the starting! 😉
Papa Ka banaya Pizza nahi khaaya Madhu Rani ne... Haawww!! Gandi Baat! 🤣 Papaji ko buraa laga hoga to... Wait... To kya... She is already Sir pe Chadhi huyi... She won't care! 🤣
"If you want to meet RK, I will call him personally right there..." Waah Beta... Gajab ho aap to Malik Papaji... Do RK lives in your trousers pocket??? Hain???! Jab pocket Mein Haath Daala, RK haazir... 🤣 Tera servant hai kya Wo??? Ya fir ussne koi puraana udhaar le rakha hai aap se...? 🤣 Jab tak udhaar nahi chukaayega... RK naach ke dikhaayega... 🤣 SuperIshhtaar Ki to koi Ijjat he nahi hai yaar... 🤣
Now comes the Super Faadooo line of the entire part... Papaji taking out the one rupee currency notes from pocket... 🤣 Oh my Serious God... What was that??? I was expecting, he will give her a bag of Chillars... 🤣 1 Rs ke khulle de deta yaar... 🤣 Papaji Ki Ijjat mitti me Mila rahi hai Gundi Bala... Yes... It's a puurrfect name for this Sir Chadhi Madhubala... 🤣
Gundi Bala knows Mehul Chopra too... Waah Waah Kya Baat Hai... But then, why didn't she ever met RK... Khud Wo Bade Papa Ki Bigadi Aulaad Hai... RK to waise he Papaji Ki pocket Mein hai... Then why why why?? 😆 Hmmk... That means... ShuuperIshhtaar is ignoring Gundi Bala... 🤣 Hawww... 😲 RK... Bhiyaaa aap to Gaye!!! 🤣
Gundi bala was a complete drunkard in the hall... 🤣 Pagla gayi hai ye ladki.. 🤣 Aisi to entry bhi nahi maari hogi Hero ne jitna Tu naach rahi hai pagal... 🤣 Sudhu... Ek bottle bhi de deti usse Vodka Ki... 🤣 And there she got kicked out respectfully by the manager... 🤣 Bura lag Gaya bachchi ko... 🤣
Papaji is too double standardized... 🤣 One end Papaji cares to spend those one rupee notes on the needy and here... Cityplex khareed kiya... 😲 O Papaji... Itna na chadhaao usse Sir pe... Lut jaaoge Beti ke haathon... 🤣
And there came the ShuuperIsshhtaar... 😆 And the first thing he did after entry... Kisss... 🤣 Sudhaa... Tu aur Tera Kissyy Hero... 🤣 Zaroorat Kya Thi iski, RK??? Hain??? Aaj knuckles pe kiss... Kal lip kiss... Aur fir... Rock the Bed... 🤣 I am already getting those heavenly signals... What's going to come next... 🤣
All in all... I am going to have a fun reading it...
Edited by kg15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hahaha amazing update. madhu is so cute.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg omg i so love this dii❤️
wat a blockbuster start 😃
everytime madhu acted so crazy for rk i was like
this is madhu or neha n sudha dii getting crazy for vivian aka rk 😆😆 n honestly telling rk entered show i did scream n shouted at top of my voice only to be glared by my brother🤣
i burst out laughing so hard n ohhh myy
poor trish madhu destroyed her three buckets of butter popcorns poor girl 🤣🤣🤣
but wat can one do rk makes all crazy
how i wish instead of madhu i wld have fainted in my Vs arms ❤️😆
uff dreaming on

i so love that song crazy in love n ofcourse christian n jamie ❤️
n now ur story on it will make me love it more n more 😃
indeed i m crazy in love with my superstar vd n superstar rk 😉

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