FF- Jealousy NOTE 26th feb 2015 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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this has to be amazing...as long as u give us a daily update this length is fine
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oooh Viraj is now going to turn on his charm to the max 😉
eagerly waiting for the next part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update...plsss make the next one a little longer. Waiting eagerly for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start ...

Continue soon ..do pm me the nxt update

it would be amaizngg if u increse d length..!! 😊

Nisha ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh wow! Great part!
Poor nisha haha
Looking forward to next one
This length is fine as long as you give us quick updates :) or if they'll be spaced, make each one longer
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Continue soon😊
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Nice. Amazing.
Cont soon.😊
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Loved ur story dear...pls PM me next wen u update the story..
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awesome part
but being greedy I want more
plz continue soon
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UPDATED!!!

And this time its a long update :D
Pls leave ur feedback :)


Viraj's eyes widened realizing what he had just blurted out

"academy...hamari academy ka kya hoga" saying this he moved away from her sitting on his chair.

Nisha shocked at the sudden turn of events could only manage to give him a weak smile

"pata hai miss nisha, manyata or hum bachpan ke dost hai. Hum hamesha saath meh he rehte the infact kuch log tog kehte the ki bade hoke hum shaadi he krlenge"

Nisha coughed hard listening to him

Viraj smirked getting the desired reaction from her.

"Hum sochre hai kar he lete hain shaadi"

"Nahi" nisha suddenly blurted out but shut up instantly

Viraj trying to control his smirk asked "ji"

"mai..wo matlab sir abhi toh aapko academy par concentrate karna chaheeye I mean haa academy kaafi popular hogayi hai par..par phir bhi abhi toh shurwat hai na toh aise meh shadiii"


"I think ap shi kehri hai" said viraj pretending to think

Nisha sighed in relief.

"oh ha btw wo hamare palace meh ek party hai academy ki success ki khushi meh so aapko ana hai"

"par.."

"par war kuch ni hum aapka koi excuse nahi sunenge bas aapko ana hai" said viraj now looking at his laptop

"ok sir" said nisha with a smile which viraj returned and left from there

As soon as nisha left manyata entered
"did it work? Did she get jealous? Bataiye na viraj jaldi"

"arey saans to lelijiye bethiye batate hai"

Manyata sat down quickly
"batao ab jaldi jaldi"

"han, hui jealous wo, par"

"par kya?"

"par ab aagey kya, hosakta hai wo aapse jealous ho par iska matlab ye toh nahi ki wo humare lie utni serious hai jitna hum unke lie"

"han toh theekay thoda our jalaiye unhe or dil ki baat zubaan par apne aap aa jayegi" she said with a wink

"acha theekay par kaise"

"idea, chaliye humare saath"

"par kaha"

"bas chaliye" saying this she dragged him out of his cabin

They entered the shooting practice room

"chaliye ab sikhaye hume shooting karna"

"par aapko to interest ni tha na shooting meh" he said casting a suspicious glance her way

"ab hai aap sikhaaye bas"

Viraj came behind her and made her wear all the necessary equipments then holding her hand Improved her position just then nisha entered

"sir aapne bula..." nisha froze seeing viraj and manyatas position while viraj instantly moved away from manyata embarrassed. Though there was nothing even remotely romantic about what they were doing still he was not comfortable with her seeing him like that with any other girl

"Miss nisha a..ap yaha" viraj spoke with much difficulty

Here nisha could not even look at him and kept staring at her feet "h..haa aapne bulaya tha na"

"humne?" viraj clearly remembered not having done any such thing but then one look at manyata and he understood that what "idea" was she talking about!

He glared at her while she moved out the room showing him her tongue in the way

Everything became even more awkward as she left. While nisha was shifting her wait from one leg to another viraj was thinking as to what excuse he should make for calling her

"wo...actually, hum chahte the ki aap guns par practice krre riefels par toh aap subah se work krri hai"

"ji" nisha was angry actually no she was hurt and she didn't even knew why. It's not lIkE viraj was getting intimate with some girl, he was just teaching her how to shoot but the fact that he was coming close to any living female species angered her.

She started practicing but kept thinking about viraj. At one point she was about to shoot the glass wall which could have resulted in serious property damage but viraj came on time holded her hand and straightened it resulting in the bullet hitting the centre mark.

While nisha and viraj were busy in their own world. Staring at each other. Trying to figure out what was going on in other's mind

Viraj (st)- kitni khoobsoorat hain ye itni simple, real, surreal koi fakeness nahi koi jhuth nahi sirf sach ek aisa sach jisne humari zindagi he badal di!

Nisha(st)- inki aankhein, kyo meh inki aankho meh itna kho jaati hu aisa kya hai inme shayad pyaar par ye mere lie hai ya...patani par bhaut saara hai! Brown hai inki ankhein nhi nhi black nahi actually they are copper against honey and sage. So weird itni simple nahi jitni maine socha tha. Miti ke rang ki par phir bhi usse bilkul alag. Waise jaise mitti Ho jaati hai.baarish ke waqt waise he hojati hongi inki aankhein aasuon ke waqt.!

And the two love birds lost in each discovered something new. While he saw his life in her for her he had the most beautiful eyes in this world!
Not because of what color they were but because they were his eyes <3

Thats it!!

Ch-4 pg-5

Edited by ilovei - 11 years ago

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