FF- Jealousy NOTE 26th feb 2015

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Hello everyone! Some of you know me or maybe know one knows me 😭 but yeah I have written one or two os!
So here is another but this time probably a short story!

Ok so it has been a few months since nisha has been there in this this academy. She started taking shooting practices long time back and has also brought a trophy impressing viraj as well as making him fall for her though unknowm to her.
Now viraj is yet to confess and he does not know nisha likes him. Also there is a new character viraj's bestfriend manyata ( I know in the serial viraj has no friend's but here he has) and well rest is my story and whether she is a negative or a positive character is for u to decide!

Here u go...

"hey viraj"
Virij turned around listening to her bestfriend's voice with a huge smile on his face.

"finally time mil he gaya madam ko humse baat krne ka"

"haan aapko to pta he hai kitne busy hain hum" said manyata with a wink

"acha anyway ye bataiye ki practice kesi chalri hai shooting n all u know"

"bhaut achi, aap toh dekh he skti hai ki miss nisha kitni talented hai" he said lost in her thoughts

"han han pata hai jabse aayi hu miss nisha ye miss nisha wo I mean seriously pyaar meh pagal aashiq ki tarah behave kar rhe hai aap" she commented laughing

Viraj gave out a little smile embarrassed
"n..nhi toh aisa kuch ni hai hume aapko batana he nai chaheeye tha apni feelings ke baare meh" said viraj faking anger

"acha baba srry galti hogyi" she said holding her ears

All this was witnessed by nisha standing a few metres away

She sighed

This was the usual routine these days
Viraj and manyata would talk nisha would observe them turn around and walk away.

When nisha had met manyata for the first time she had an instant liking to her but later when she saw viraj with her, so comfortable and happy she started avoiding her infact both of them!

She knew viraj was far beyond her league and she had accepted that with time but seeing another girl in viraj's life disturbed her.

"stop it nisha apni shooting par concentrate kar naaki viraj sir pe" and she continued with her shooting practice this time a little frustrated

Viraj excused himself from manyata And made his way to nisha

"so, practice kaise chal rhi hai?" he said with his hands in his pocket observing her

"achi" said nisha without looking at viraj

It's not like viraj hadn't noticed nisha's ignorance directed towards him. It had all started the day manyata arrived that nisha started avoiding. He didn't know what was wrong with...wait was she jealous!

Viraj's eyes widened in realization and a grin broke through his shocked face!

"this is gonna be fun" thought viraj!


>>>INDEX<<<

Chapter-2 pg-2
Chapter-3 pg-4
Chapter-4 pg-5
Chapter-5 pg-6
Chapter-6 pg-8
Chapter-7 pg-9
Chapter-8 pg-11
Chapter-9 pg-12
Chapter-10 pg-14
Chapter-11 pg-16
Chapter-12 pg-18
Chapter-13 pg-21
Chapter-14 pg-24
Chapter-14b pg-26
Chapter-15 pg-30
Chapter-16 pg-32
Chapter-17 pg-35
Chapter-18 pg-36
Edited by lovesick23 - 11 years ago

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Ribelle thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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:) very interesting! Would love to read further...post UD soon
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Amazing start...plss continue soon. This indeed is gonna be fun
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It's superb only when u continue. .
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Amazing story
continue soon😊
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Nice.
Cont soon. 😊
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Superb start...the title suits the storyline...do continue soon...
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great start... looking forward to the next part ⭐️
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Thnkuu so much guys ill continue soon! 😉
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UPDATED!!!!

Thanku people for all your comments and sorry I could not reply! But yeah here's the update jaldi jaldi se please lev ur feedback!!! And criticism is always welcomed 😊


"par kya pata hume he galat fehmi ho rhi ho. Nahi nahi itna overconfidence acha ni, hai aisa krte hai check krte hai" viraj self thought!

Viraj cleared his throat and "miss nisha, in my cabin right now" saying this he left immediately not waiting for her response

Nisha kicked a nearby lying pebble in anger

"bas kaam ke lie he yaad aati hai sir ko meri"
And left for viraj's cabin

As soon as nisha entered viraj's cabin the sight there made her blood boil

Manyata and viraj were laughing on some secret joke but that was not that made her angry though it was irritating! They were holding hands and this is what made her clench her fists!


"sir" nisha said a little more loudly than she should have

"oh miss nisha ek min hum abhi aapse baat karte hai" said viraj laughing continously

This made nisha even more angry. That is how it is these days. Viraj does not even look at her just manyata manyata and manyata always!

Manyata stood up from her chair still laughing and said "chalo I should go now you do your work" and left

Nish kept looking at the door from where manyata had left a few minutes ago. More than anger it was disappointment in her own self that was killing her. Only if she had been a little girlish wearing all those pretty dresses like kirti or even dolly di. Maybe then viraj would have paid a little more attention to her. Unlike her, manyata was beautiful always perfect for all the boys. She had thought about a makeover but dismissed that idea instantly. She was not comfortable wearing such clothes and never would be also last thing she wanted was for the whole academy to laugh at her!

"Miss nisha, I hope aapko kuch problem nahi ho rhi hai practice meh I mean koi naya equipment ya kuch bhi jiski aapko zarurat ho you can tell me" said viraj

But nisha was lost in her own thoughts.
Viraj smirked, he had hit the bull's eye.

Viraj came very close to her and bringing his hand in front of her made her aware of his presence. Nisha seeing viraj so close to her took a step back out of shock and was about to fall when a pair of strong hands captured her in their embrace preventing the fall

Bringing his face near her ear he spoke "dhyan se miss nisha, agar aapko kuch hogaya toh humara kya hoga"


Thats it for now 😆

And please tell me if the length is ok or not!!!

Ch-3 pg-4
Edited by ilovei - 11 years ago

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