~||Burning Eden||~ MaNan OS - Page 2

OMG you ended it there..I m on the verge of crying t😭it shattered thinking about the whole situation..the dance,the music,the Goodbye..nooo!!
Take a bow👏
it was something so special..you connect to Manan so well...love you for this one

Originally posted by: nicky13

The end was really very sad... But the dance was so heart touching... Loved it ... Awesome ... You wrote it very well... Keep your writing up

Thanks dear.
Glad you liked it. 🤗

Originally posted by: Malika.Dua

PERFECT!

The emotions/feelings that are portrayed could be felt through your words

and the occuring events could be seen as if they are happening in front of me.

I must say your way of writing is really commendable. 👏

The ending really touched me though how hard it must be for Manik to let go of her.

continue to write! :)

Thanks a ton bud. 🤗

Originally posted by: lostmymusic.

Nooo!!! no no no no no!!! Don't end it like that!! :O

OMG! This was...sensuous! I could imagine everything..the lift, the party, the way their eyes met, the way he came to her, the way he touched her for the last time, the way she loved being in his arms but disliked him..the way he whispered her name for the last time and the way she realized that it was goodbye..

Oh. My. God.

AND THE SONG! I was listening to this song while reading and just SHIT man! NO no no no!! MY HEART IS IN PAIN AT THIS BEAUTY!!!

John Mayer always works his magic. This has got to be like my favorite sad song.

And the post is an attempt to sensitize myself to what's coming. We're definitey gonna be seeing Manik step down once he gets to know how serious Dhruv is. But but but...I really do hope they don't make Nandini take the cliched route, strangling her own feelings as accessorized sacrifice. No. I hope they make her strong enough to go for whats she wants. Or rather whom. 😉

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

Why... why? It feels like almost every author on this forum is plotting against me, giving me sad MaNan stuff :(

But this wasn't exactly sad, was it? It was... beautiful. Very, very smart writing. And the plot; goddamn it the plot! My heart broke </3 I could seriously just feel what you were trying to express and why must you hurt my MaNan feels in such a way?

That was not a goodbye. That was not a goodbye. That was not a goodbye. *keeps chanting this to self for the sake of some emotional support*

It's the precap. Made tragedy-writers mushroom in this forum 😆
And breathe. Close your eyes and think that she runs after him and gives him a back hug. All better?
😉

Originally posted by: Sparks-galore

Wow, the gamut of emotions I feel... *loud sigh*

Sirocco last night made me smile and Burning Eden today breaks my heart. And to top it off you've added John Mayer to the equation..

bittersweet and beautifully written 👏

Thanks hon. Am glad you enjoyed it. Mayer always works in sync 😉

Originally posted by: Catatonic_Cat

Holy Hell, this was good, the angst is cutting my heart into multiple pieces.

Welcome to the forum once again and how!

😆 It's my favorite type. Angsty goodness. I ship a couple only till they have that tension simmering between them. Once it's done and they go all lovey-dvey. I jump ship. Fickle like that.
Glad you enjoyed it. 🤗

Originally posted by: Desigirl_21

Res Unres

Oh my this was just painfully beautiful.. oh the feel with the ending it cant be a final goodbye

I loved how u wrote the emotions and the dance part I wanted to keep reading it

It was a lovely OS, heartbreaking to read and at the same I loved it 😳

Thanks dear. I specialize in dance write ups. 😆 Every couple I ship has atleast one FF/OS where I've get them dancing. MaNan came out beautifully cause the timing was gold. It's still the initial phase of realizing and that's what makes it all amplified.

Originally posted by: -MyMy-

Oh dear...I think I may have fainted while reading this.

Oh my...this was so well written.

I really enjoyed the way you wrote the feelings, and that intimate scene was well written.

The song fit in really well.

Well done! I love this!

Thanks dear. 🤗
Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: miss_bennet

Oh man this almost broke my heart. Love love this Pallo. Can't tell you how glad I am that you are writing on MaNan.🤗

Am glad am writing them too, Harsha. It's been a while and I needed a new pair. I got me one. They're fresh and they get my creative juices flowing. Thanks hon 🤗

Originally posted by: ForeverForU

OMG you ended it there..I m on the verge of crying t😭it shattered thinking about the whole situation..the dance,the music,the Goodbye..nooo!!
Take a bow👏
it was something so special..you connect to Manan so well...love you for this one

Awww.
Thanks bud. 🤗 Glad you liked it.

So this OS that you created reminded of me very similar interaction in Caged Hues when Arnav and Khushi danced away into another world of bliss. I have recently joined the bandwagon of MaNan after devouring every Arshi FF and constantly hoping that some grey eyed stranger with magic in his hands (sketching or strumming the guitar) sweeps me away. Clearly, I need my space away from reality and I come to India Forums to escape. Lol.