II Vidarth OS: Half a Victim II - Page 5

Originally posted by: skm27395

Kya baat hai ash aaj to dadha dadh os n updates post kiye jaa rahi not that I m complianing...infact I m really happy reading so much Vidarth...its a nice day...neways coming to this one I really hope its a three shots n I want vidarth revenge on varun to be diabolical as I m sure vidushi is involved so it will happen...update soon n loving each n every one of your vidarth confession n proposal😃😃😃

Originally posted by: Happy_hippy

I loved it Ash, Vidu's POV and her convo with Parth n in the end their moment on the. BBall court..

All so magical ...

Originally posted by: LoonyLuna

I can forgive his sins once for the reason I loved him.

Twice? No way in hell.

Thats the Vidushi we all love.😉 The fiery warrior? Yes!

Couple. I like the sound of that.

Even I like the sound of it So do I!

I want the future episodes to turn out like this OS AND they should kiss in in the rain. Thats a huge compliment girl. Love ya!

Originally posted by: purepunjabi

superb ash🤗 loved it .a perfect weekend treat by u . kiss in the rain and yes they look good only with each other no need of varun; he deserves to be punished love this strong vidu handling all things at her own

Originally posted by: Moony87

Parth rocked with every moment in this OS. From his understanding of Vidushi's plan mode.. to his indirect confession .. and then his DIRECT Confession. Basket Ball court is blessed for that wonderful moment. Rains and kissing.. Cheerleading stuff.. All is awesome. Their conversation in the library is again bliss. Are you Moony only? Cuz you are doing Parth PPuja like our dear Jas!😆

All in all Parth rocked here too.. You still didnt get my point what I had said in the scrap. The starting lines of Vidushi in your OS again pissed me off.. I Simply Hate Confused Girls. Vidushi has no scope of Confusion as of now let alone getting enlightened that what stupidity she was almost doing. Anyway.. I think I should not spoil the wonderful mood this OS sets. Woah. Okay my ray of sunshine. Hang on in there, ache din anne wale hai!😆

Its a wonderful OS with wonderful Vidarth ALL THANKS TO PARTH.👏 Ok...Love you moony!

Originally posted by: sandhir4eva

it was wonderful!!

loved it

keep writing dear!❤️

Originally posted by: --aimy--

Ashu,my girl...🤗Aims! 🤗
You know what, this Vidushi is 100 times better than the real wala Vidushi,who is confused and lost.
But this girl is determined and oriented.And hence she is not a victim. When she gets over her confusion she will be stronger. Hoping.
Varun is such a creep. "Can't wait to.." How did you manage to write that??😛 It was easy. Think about what would make my skin crawl.

I'm relieved reading Vidushi's reaction to that. This is the Vidushi I wanna watch. My fighter girl..our warrior princess.Exactly!

The BB court scene.Parthu is such a sweet heart,haina?😳 Yes he is. He treats his Vidu like a princess and I love writing him.
Vidushi grabbed his collar and pulled him to a kiss??!!! Where has that Passionated Vidushi dissapeared to?? She has confusion. She can't start kissing Parth all of a sudden in the show.
These two are like match made in heaven. He will defo look good in cheerleader costume because he will be cheering for his girl.!! 😆Exactly my vision!
The figther Vidushi and supportive Parth. If its so much fun to read them,I wonder how amazing it'd be to see them...!! 😊 Try super awesomesauce!
BTW,Thanks behna,for both the OSes and the dedication. Aw, no problems girl!

Originally posted by: dewcute

ash🤗 Jiya! 😊

girl you are giving me a treat by writing vidarth os Really? 😆

so vidushi is going to make her own destiny.. Yes. With Parth in it.

let that destiny brings vidarth together..

loved it girl.. 😆 Thanks!😆

jiya😛

Originally posted by: DarknessVisible

Hey!😛 Hola Arthy!

I liked this OS. You did! Yay!!

I loved the way how you portrayed Vidushi and Parth. Varun should be taught a lesson. Also, Vidushi can't let herself be fooled again and again and let Varun go just like that. He deserves to be punished and Vishushi has the guts to do that. She can't let another girl become like her and Parth can't let his girl fight with her demon alone. This is so real. I enjoyed reading this!😛 Thanks for the scrap!😳 Ma pleasure! Loved to read your thoughts about this Os girl!

Take care🤗 You too!😆