Veni, Vidi, Vici - updated Part 9 page 27 17/2/

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Posted: 11 years ago
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gr8 OS ...
so Geet is a tour guide n Maan is our typical angry young man
loved their interaction in the train...

so Geet helpps maan in reaching ... n he asks her for a date !!!! :)

waiting for next part .. pls do continue it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesm OS lovd it
maan was irriatd coz of old lady nd geet came 2 rescue nd her reason was awesm crackd me up😆😆
she is guide nd hlpd maan nd nw maan askd her 4 dinner👍🏼
hpng 2 get another part of dis OS😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow a great start of an other lovestory!!😃

All the best for ur exams...

n im happy the way it is...
n if it had few more parts then it be cherry on the cake😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely first meet, that ended with a prospect of many more to follow..
Geet has an interesting personality..
the title, both for the story and the card is interesting too..
best of luck for the exams..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os
so geet is a guide and she helped maan to reach his desired place !!!
maan asked a dinner with her
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely story...
i loved it for its sweetness n cuteness..
n also i loved ur writing style
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi thanks 4 da pm! Of cos make it an FF! Can wait till December! its only a month away! Pls...thanks! Lucky us...tht u had to write this! u r an excellent writer! brilliantly written! fab start! Loved it! Maan in Rome 4 business! Poor Maan all lost n Geet helps him! she is a tour guide! Maan invites her 4 dinner! she leaves her card with her number! update soon! Pls do continue! All the best 4 ur exams dear! Will wait until Dec 4 updates! Hope u will also give ur OS - Petals an end n contune with Destined to Love! Thanks!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gosh ! its so crisp & well-written oozing with sparkling chemistry ☺️ You gotta give few more parts please ❤️ this was superb👏
Best wishes for your exams 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting start, will wait for update.

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