IshRa OS: Llovera! *CHAPTER 2* PG1

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: zola007
Awesome Updates !
Loved it
Beautifully written 😊
Do PM for next update please 😃

Thank you so much! Surely; accepted your request. Anything you would like to read?😆(about a scene or some aspect of the story😉)

Edited by RibelleDelCuore - 11 years ago

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: AditiDoc
Heyy! be sure to PM me a chapter 3! Loved it!

Gracias!! Added you. Please accept my buddy request.

Before Chapter 3, I'll update the rest of ch2. Check that out too--when it happens.😳

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@OfTheHeart

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

amazing...

pls update the third part soon...!!!!!

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: LaughItOff
amazing...
pls update the third part soon...!!!!!

Thanks a lot! I'm trying, busy as a bee.😳

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz
Hey!😃 Nice OS! ❤️ 👏

I love the title in chapter 2:"Meet Me on the Equinox " It's very unique title i must say!
😉

May i ask do u know french? Or was the first part above of 1st chapter was Spanish? U see i'm very curious. 😳

Anyway coming to the chapters of 1 n 2 they were fab.👍🏼I loved it it was pleasure to read!❤️
Hats off!👏
I like the the way you use ur effective words in ur sentences to describe something!

U write fab! I must say! Keep up the good work! 👍🏼
U should write more soon!
Do PM! 😉

Thanks a lot!😊

The title "Llovera" is in Spanish(since I know and love the language)

I'm glad you liked my writing.

Please do come back to read.😊

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@.scarlet.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Heyya Pareena !!

I know I m little late this time 🤣 ...

I had promised a comment ages ago but couldn't find time to type it all out .. you know na there are so many things I need to tell you. But first of all , my sincere apologies for the severe delay .

Coming to your update , it was wonderful as usual . Your mischievous self was so evident throughout , giving and not giving the readers what they want at the same time (Do I make sense here ? Well , I know I don't but as they say samajhdaar ko ishara kaafi 😉)

I somewhere feel that me questioning your prowess on writing mature stuff somewhere impelled you to post this update eventually (*here I come to take all the credit home 😆 * ) ... But you must not stop here , you need to go onn... 😉

I have always felt that your writing has a poetic feel to it but this time it was different . I am genuinely happy that you are exploring different facets of narrative and you did your job pretty well !

I have always cherished your stories and this being no exception , I would say you must try and continue this till wherever possible ..

The fact that you got all the appreciation you deserved on your succinct update must never deter you from giving us readers longer ones which we deserve !!

Given my punctuality I have no right to say this to you but being your pankhi I do want an update soonish !!

Love , love n more of love

Mansi

P.S : You know what I typed all of my comment and then my internet dashed and I had to write it all over again !! this would have been posted in the noon itself...