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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER -13🥺
part A


parth's p.o.v


'wear it na',I asked arpita..
a;'now??'
p;yes please.
she thought for a second.'ok...go out of the room'
p;'why?' i tried to wriggle out of her marching orders,acting innocent.
'see i will turn around and close my eyes'.i did that .then i covered my face with my hands like a good boy.'when you are done changing..just tell me'.
but my smartness didn't fly .
a;high hope dude!get out of the room'arpita said ,and pushed me out of the room.
crud!
it was june 12th our first anniversary,and i had given her a rajasthani lehnga-choli.i had never seen her in that dress,so told her i presumed she didn't have the desert attire and required one.
p;'u would look good enough to eat after wearing it'..I told her implishly .
to which she made a face .
p;'ha! anyway,all seemed well when i realized we had a problem.
a;'what problem ??'
p;"u have never worn a lehnga-choli.u wont know how to wear it ..
a;oh hello i am a marvadi girl..rajasthani hoon..i know ...
p;okkie,wear it immediately...
a; why?
i leered ..
p;takur hoon,or is rajashthani takur apni memsaab ko...
a;ko?
p;'i want to see u in a sexy dress'.
soon after that,despite offering to close my eyes and be the goodest boy ever to ask his girlfriend to change clothes before him ,i was pushed out of the room.
a;'come in'
i heard her say after i pled with her for a long time,after almost 20minutes had gone by
p;open the door na!
a;the door is open!
i pushed the panels and then realized that..the door was always open;she hadn't latched it..
damn!i could have taken advantage of that!anyway,as the panels parted,i saw that she was standing in the middle of the room,hands on her hips,grinning..
a;how do i look?
she looked ,.i took some time to speak out the four letters.i had that full feeling in my throat again.her shoulders wre bare.so was her stomach.the low cut choli sans the chunni bairely contained her ..
p;sexy...i managed after a long time
a;so u got ur wish ..a light smile played on my girls lips .
we stared at each other.i wanted her..and this time i couldnt stop myself.i closed the door.when i turned back, she hadn't moved.standing where she was ,looking at me in the same way.
was she waiting for me ?i walked upto her and pulled her towards me.she closed her eyes and put here hands on the sides of my neck.
she was..
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A/N;;SORRY I COULNT UPDATE ON TIME..WELL I UPDATE WHEN I AM ALONE..I MEAN I WRITE.ONLY THEN ..I WAS OUT OF TOWN FOR A FEW DAYS AND MY PC WASN'T WORKING.MY PHONE IS NOT GOOD SO I COULDNT POST IT .WELL I AM NOT PROMISING BUT I WILL TRY TO UPDATE SOON..i know this isnt long..but this is just the first part
THANK U SO MUCH FOR THOSE COMMENTS AND LIKES😳
BUDDY ME FOR PM
Edited by kriya3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62


u better unres it soon -_-
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
why don't u update
a frustrated fan of the ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
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Originally posted by: maths_geek

why don't u update

a frustrated fan of the ff


😳i never knew my ff had a fan
well thank u so much ..
shall update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Bhumi06

Nice update..
Continue soon :)


nw teri baath mein kaise taalun ..
well here it goes..
well parth ko dekhkar thoda depressed ho gayi dhi..
and my head wasn't working either..
but yes this is short ... but hope u like it ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
update plzzz 😛
Edited by Bhumi06 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: kriya3


nw teri baath mein kaise taalun ..
well here it goes..
well parth ko dekhkar thoda depressed ho gayi dhi..
and my head wasn't working either..
but yes this is short ... but hope u like it ...



I loved it but now want more... 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
CHAPTER-14

It wasn't raining anymore.the morning birds had started chirping.Vardhan was still lookin at parth to continue.parth gave out a sigh and tears cornered his eyes.He kept staring at the wall behind.He choked to speak.


Parth;things went beyond repair after that phone call!

He was staring at vardhan knowingly ..for a reply, and now it was vardhans turn to speak..


VARDHAN'S P.O.V.

Everytime he tried to sleep..it came back to him.. like it happened yesterday ..

Afresh..

He still remembered that night..that dreadful night when he lost everything..when he lost her

Vardhan and niharika had fought that day..and like always he was the one at fault.

Though there fights were on silly reasons there fight ..well those were like serious ones .

Niharika was magic..a spell in vardhan's life ,she made him a better person..it was she who helped him in bonding with his father, and suryavanshi rao..well he was the happiest man ..his favourite student turned out to be his son's love ...they were like a family .every time they fought niharika used to go to vardhan's house..and suryavanshi used to make tea to that girl who turned out to be his son's love...he used to enjoy those times..he felt like he was living those happy childhood moments,that he thought he had missed in his son's life...vardhan and niharika were not in a relationship..they were in love and that made the difference..niharika was a good competitor,friend and a lot more... She used to be the driving force in vardhan's life...even suryavanshi discussed a lot of secrets with her...which vardhan envied...
...niharika and vardhan had fought that day and she like always went to his house...but she called up that night to vardhans surprise and...

He still remembered the fear in her voice..he had asked her to say..but she refused to say it in phone as she believed it was tapped...he had asked her to stay..to wait for him to come..but she was niharika she told she will come...she was coming in the bullet Machismo 500 ...it was raining but still she was coming..

The next thing which vardhan remember was the phone call he received that night...

A/N..I know i am late and my updates are small..well i am not a really good writer.my updates are not proof read so sorry for the mistakes..well do comment..well i am thinking about ending the flash back...come on sanyu is waiting there and so is randhir with his parents divorce...nw was my A/N too much ??
do let me knw hw it was ...

Edited by kriya3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

thank u 😊

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