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krishna

@kriya3

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Posted: 11 years ago

hi ..this is my first ff...i dont knw if its sandhir or sarth..cuz its just the beginning..but its a parth ff...let the story unfold ...and the characters are same as in the show ..i wrote it after the sarth proposal.. this post is late cuz i didn't know how to start an f.f .
i personally think the 4th chap is good,well that is something which i wrote from heart ,so even if u dont read the whole just do read the 4th one plzzz.its a request

love beyond life

parth was holding sanyuktha. and
they were sharing an eyelock,
randhir was boiling..well was he jealous??..well he had clinched his fists.. just then vidhushi comes (sometimes even devils become angels right?).
Randhir was releived,he took sanyuktha from there, vidhushi was about to ask something but parth just left, vidhushi didnt hear the 'i love u part ',for it was a secret between the trio..
Randhir took sanyuktha to th store room
randhir; what were u doing?
sanyu was still not over it ,she couldnt believe .what she just said , she wanted to meet parth and wanted to explain,but she didnt knw how to start cuz he didnt even knw that randhir was helping her.she hadnt even talked to him properly for the past 2 days.as she was with her mcp all the time
randhir;tumne parth ko?hav u lost it sanyuktha agarwal?
sanyu ;huh(she was back to her senses,randhir was holding her,she jerked and randhir left her hand )y r u overreacting? u were the one who asked for?
randhir was speechless..randir singh shekhawath felt numb for the first time.,something was pricking him from inside,randhir in thoughts..how could i do that?what was i thinking...
sanyu; i did my task nw its ur turn,i want u to fulfill ur promise
with that sanyuktha left , leaving a frustrated randhir behind
she searched for parth ,but parth was not there,she left to the hostel

meanwhile...

parth was sitting in a park he was holding his wallet with arpitas pic, he was talking ...
pyaaar sirf ek hi baar hotha hai ,love just happens once ,but i dont knw wht happened today...what i saw in her eyes..i felt like i saw u ..i feel happy and secured when she is around...she is a nice girl..and i dont deserve her .. i dont want her to get hurt like you.i cant lose her like i lost u..i cannot become her savior..i can only be the reason for her..he paused he was crying ...i love u arpita and no one can take ur place ...u... cuz u own me ..hamesha and hamesha ke bad bhi..a tear rolled down his cheek.it had started to rain , but he stood there...he felt like he saw someone..she was looking really beautiful his heart skipped a beat but she wasn't alone .. she was with someone and he knew him..cuz it was him.. he saw the girl ..the girl he loved ..the girl who made him smile..the girl who changed him for the better,the girl who fell in love with the beast..the girl who taught him the value of life,love ...the girl who owned his blush , the love of his life arpita...she was dancing in the rain...and he had fallen in her gaze ..he wanted to take her in his arms feel her warmth and kiss her like there was no tomorrow..he wanted to say sorry for what just happened hours ago.he wanted to hold her ..so.he walked closer ...just to see her fade away...

part 2 pg 1
part 3 pg 2
part 4 pg 2
part 5 pg3
part 6pg 4
part 7pg4
part 8pg4
part 9pg5
part10pg5
part11pg7
part12pg9
part13pg9
part14pg11

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uff..that was my first chapter..i think writing poems were easier..hats off to those amazing ff writers in this forum...i am sorry if that was boring , but that was my first one .the next will be better.. ...i am a parth fan . and sarth shipper...i dont know how this ff will go ,i dont even know if i should continue,waiting for the review...

Edited by kriya3 - 11 years ago

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

d last para...v share d samevthing...m a parth fan!! Nd sandhir and sarth shipper...SO I REQUEST YOU TO,MAKE IT A SARTH FF..AS V HARDLY HAVE ANY 1 OF DEM...PLEASE!!!!!

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ritusweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey.. It is vry nice.. Thnx u highlited d character of parth.. Js lvd it.. Do continue soon nd pls pm me.. :)

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krishna

@kriya3

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Posted: 11 years ago

part 2
!t was raining .but parth didn't he didnt go.he got drenched .he was waiting for her.he felt someone .he turned to see vardhan.

vardhan had been standing there for quiet sometime.parth had always interested him.he saw him and niharika somewhere in him .but today as he saw him the pain he saw in his eyes , it scared him,he was taken aback,he was always surprised by the maturity ,calmness parth showed ,it was something he didn't expect in a twenty year old guy,
vardhan tried to calm parth , he was new at this, he wanted parth to be normal , he couldnt see his student like this ,he didn't know how to calm him down,but he managed to make path stand on his feet, he took him to the nearby shed
parth was broken, he was crying ,like a girl..he choked, coughed ..and cried..after 10minutes or so he managed to speak up..
p;sir thank you..
vardhan had brought some tea,he handed it to parth
v;sometimes talking to someone ease ur pain
p;but i..
v;i think its time to talk about ur past
parth stared at vardhan ,his eyes were red and moist..but he didnt want to cut off vardhan,after all he was his guru ,and he somewhere felt like vardhan would understand(may be after all those shayaries he had read,he felt like he was connected to vardhan somewhere,its like they shared some bond or same pain)
vardhan handed parth his wallet ,which he had dropped by mistake.
v;kabhi kabhi apne past ko peeche chudake aage badna chahiye.look am talking to u as a friend .not as ur mentor
parth felt a bit embarassed
p;tho phir aap ab tak aage kyun nahi bada ..
vardhan was speechless..he never expected such a reply
p;cuz when u love someone ..its all that matters they mean the world to u, he took the wallet ,he rubbed his finger on her pic,her smile that is the only thing i yearn for ,her dreams its mine,and thats why i am here .,in fite,
vardhan looked confused
parth looked at him gave half smile
p;parth kashyap is doing mechanical engineering for arpita.,because this is something that brought us together
parth was now looking outside focusing ...and he started
parth's past(p.o.v)
i lived in mumbai ,i lived in a joint family,but it wasn't a happy family,i don't even know if i can call that a family,except my mother,my mother was a sweet soul but my father...i loved him and i know he loved me too,after all i am his only son ,but i never felt proud of him because he was a gunday ,he killed people,he used his man power to make money,so that he can serve us with good food,but little did he know about the taunts i got at school,the passing comments of my neighbours,i was always bullied by the boys who played at the park,i could have said that to my father or even my uncles ,but i was scared ,as once when i did that they had smashed life out of that kid ,who was just a year older than me,and from that day i was alone ,i didn't have any friends everyone were afraid to befriend me,but as i grew up the innocent child in me faded away,the child who had ran away from his home to live a peaceful life,away from the taunts of being a criminals son,who tried making money by polishing shoes died away,as i came back to my father and lived the life he wanted, a gunday,my dad actually worked for a big buisness man, Mr Vikram oberoi whenever he had a problem or issue with his client or someone he called up my father... we were also pretty rich ,but the society would never accept us from their heart ,after all we were gundays,they repected us out of fright ,i cant call myself a gunday because i only accompanied my dad.i was only 15 ,my ma never liked me going with dad,and for her sake i had done my schooling ,and she was happy,though my dad was a gunday he never ever beat up or slapped my mother ,like other men..but he was firm on the decision that i would become someone like him after him,...and then that day came when my dad was called up my Mr oberoi..he wanted a bodyguard for his 15 year old daughter arpita..little did we know ... i joined her school next day , we were in the same class,sharing the same bench
she was like the first breeze of autumn,like the sparkling sun after a long winter night;she was a mid summer night"s dream,her eyes were darker than the blackest night ,her soft pink lips seemed liked made out of candy ..and i had already fallen for her ...that was the best moment in my life till that day...
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i am sorry if i disappointed anyone...but i think there are a lot of amazing sandhir ff"s already..and i dont think i can write anything like that.. am a complete parth fan ..and i am interested in his life...and considering ur opinion smileroy even i think this might turn out to be a sarth ff...😳

Edited by kriya3 - 11 years ago

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j_krish

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Posted: 11 years ago

It's beautiful ...pl continue. ..and pm me we u update

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krishna

@kriya3

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ritusweet
Hey.. It is vry nice.. Thnx u highlited d character of parth.. Js lvd it.. Do continue soon nd pls pm me.. :)

i am sorry rithu but i tried to pm u, something wrong ..its not working

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

awwie...tnx Sweetie...for considering my opinion...btw u penned it beautifully...i will,stick to dis ff...m really loving it.

p.s-me too ...PARTH KASHYAP is my favrt charctr of sadda haq...AFTER OL WHO DOESNT LOVE A SWEETHERAT...

Edited by smileroy - 11 years ago

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice starting ,loved your both updates.
Am also a Parth fan and sarth shipper ...waiting for your next update..

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krishna

@kriya3

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Posted: 11 years ago

part3

I didn't know how to start..she was so pretty.. i wanted to speak but i wonder what was going on my mind i couldnt speak..i felt numb. i was about to speak when she turned to me ...those eyes i tell you...i can die a million deaths to just see my reflection in those...
a;hi...
she sounded like satin ..every time she look at me i just ..the way i felt ...the beats my heart missed it was beyond measure
p;hi (i finally managed to say)
i dont knw y but she felt sad, sulky.i wonder if that was because of my presence, i liked her smiling,her dimples it was enough to drive me crazy,with day dreaming
i wondered if it was of because of my age ..my mother had told me about such emotions and a lot of fantasy stuffs when i had turned 13...
no my mind contradicted this is something different...
arpita was about to say something when the teacher came... i felt like kicking him out..but i didn't do that ,what if he gave me a punishment ,i didn't want to leave,in fact i liked it here ,
it was physics class i wanted to sleep i lied down , while arpita was writing down each word the sir mumbled, i sat straight opened my new books and started to note down what sir said,she looked at me once,did she smile?
i dont know why but i say my cheeks where red.. she was affecting me so much..i wondered if i wrote those crap just to impress her ?..may be yes but the thing i felt happy about was i made her smile...the bell rang and the theory class was over.we had our practicals ,and i hoped to be her partner, sometimes i think god has something against me ,he paired her with a nerdy guy ,with rim glasses.and i was asked to stand with the teacher ,he was explaing a lot of stuffs in detail ,god knows what,he was explaining so much as i was new student , i kept on stealing glances at arpita she stood opposite to me in another table , she was busy with the circuit when i noticed a few boys commenting on her ..i was outraged i felt like kicking there soul out of shit..but i calmed myself,now i dint want arpita to feel bad about me,i dint want to scare her,my mother had told that girls like caring and loving guys...
precap ; parth was fighting with the boys in the ground
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i am sorry i am stopping it here ... i know its a dragging one but i promise to complete it soon...

Edited by kriya3 - 11 years ago