Without You - A SanDhir OS 'Last part UPDATED' - Page 7

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shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

zara !!!!!!

such a cute kid ... mwwahhh to da devlish gal ...

also ishaan niether less ...

well loved da cute update a lot ...

amazinly describd ... hats off dea ...

u r an amazin writer ...

it was kinda emotional ... wish sanyu was alive ...

ty fr da special pm dea ... ty a ton ...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Firstly thank you for the PM Kiki! It's the only way I remember to read works😆

Where do I start?! I mean I am speechless! I wanted you to convey that hesitation Randhir has towards his daughter because of Sanyukta! And you did exactly that!

And that too how!!! I was like, "Damn Gurl!" I seriously couldn't have expected more! Perfection that was!!!

Also, that part where Zara asks if she was a bad girl! I mean, like this was me: 🥺... That is why I refrain from watching the sad scenes of Kuch Kuch Hota Hai🤪

And Zara-Ishaan!! These two adorable cutays! I love how you balanced the emotional content with this cute acts from these children!

Amazing end to an amazing TS!

Loved it!

Pari 😳

PS: Do write more!😃

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don girls

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved the last part

beautifully written

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

You made me cry after almost an year the tears that froze in me after my bare papa's death came out today 😭

Edited by Arshi_srilu - 11 years ago

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Tisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 1!

The blotted belly! Did she eat too much?

Wife? Me dreaming or what! *rereads the phrase*

Zara! I love that name so much!
Finally A Real SanDhir story!

Hey bhaggu! Angst ki deewani are you?
You got my heart bleed!
The promise part!

You have such a creative mind KiKi!

I salute you love!

DO write MORE! I will read the next part ASAP!

I saw the dedication!🤗

All the best for the trying times of twelfth!

Going through the same am I!

Sowwy For the Delay!

Forever and Always!

Iptisha!

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aw!

The update was superb kiki!!

I actually felt heartbroken.. as if sm1 had left me!

you r great with portraying emotions!

I loved this os!

lOl is there any way u can continue it?

Bcuz it was sooo beautiful.. 😳

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Mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi

Just caught up the story

Thanks for the pms

I loved this one

Wow

Great work

Zara was so cute

and I loved the 'Always' scene

Beautifully written

Heart touching

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Nia | Rii

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Posted: 11 years ago

It is so beautiful and cute and sadness. It has everything..perfect..Do write more.

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Sanchari

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Posted: 11 years ago

:((

It was so beautiful written but .. BUT :( Damn.

🥺

Sorry for the short comment, little pressed for time :/

Congrats for this <3

Sadda HaQ Chronicles #5 || Jo Bheji Thi Dua <3 [Fictions of the Week Segment :)]

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